Heartbroken AbhiRa - Page 3

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

You nailed it ... This is so so trueee ... Now I want to read more poetries from you 🤗🤗

You perfectly explained and called out the hypocrisy of the society we live in...

Loved it ❤️

Thank youuuuuu 🤗❤️

The tooti footi poet/shayar in me was waiting for this much needed appreciation

Agr kisi ko bhi acchha lgta h to lgta h kaamyab ho gyi main

Hypocrisy what should we say about that

But we will someday make a difference

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Thank youuuuuu 🤗❤️

The tooti footi poet/shayar in me was waiting for this much needed appreciation

Agr kisi ko bhi acchha lgta h to lgta h kaamyab ho gyi main

Hypocrisy what should we say about that

But we will someday make a difference

I do know how an appreciation on our creation meant to us ❤️ and this was really beautiful

Yep... One day.. ek din fark hum sab log Mitayenge

Originally posted by: Silveraliax

I have to mention that you are very talented, these poems do not just flow out randomly. I admire the time and dedication you put into your work.

As for the poem, you have illustrated Akshara's sorrow, guilt and misery very gracefully. Ever since the mehndi scene, I'm feeling more sad for Akshara than Abhi because she doesn't want to give up Abhi. She wants him but she is frightened of asking someone for herself. This is her weakness @Bold

@Bold2 I am not a poem person but verses like these are touching. Beautifully explained Akshara's pov❤️

Diiii 🤗🤗

Your words really made me so so happy ... What should I say? I am at loss of words ❤️

And to know that you are not a poem person but still enjoys my poetry and leave such beautiful comments... You make so so much happy

My heart aches for both Akshu and Abhi. Akshu is conditioned to give up and Abhi does not know the reason why he is being tossed to what feels like a pit of abyss to him. They both are so damaged and broken arm and they are each other only healers...

This was so so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you diduuu 🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Raat Bhar

Wo shayad tere aankhon se bahe

Aasuon ki hi khata rahi hogi

Ki main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Tere hi baaton ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi

Aankhein band karne par teri muskurahat

Aur palak jhapakne par

Apni buzdilli ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Ye jaanti hun ki tu bhi soya nahi hoga

Meri baaton ko yaad kar chhip kar ro raha hoga

Inkaar sun kar mera tu toota hua hoga

Lekin kya karu.. jaanti hun ki ye rishta

Aage chal kar choota hua hi hoga

Ye soch kar ki tu bhi mujhe yaad kar

Raaton ko sota nahi hoga

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Teri yaadon mein doob kar main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi...

~Noor ❤️

So beautifully written Noor.. Hats off.. Write diwn Abhimanyu's haal-e-dil also pls..

Noor noor noor.... 🤗🤗

How beautiful.this is yaar..... Such an indepth poem on Abhis feelings ....

I loved it so so so much and repeatedly reading it.....

Those lines u used have my ♥️

Please keep writing more dear..... Never stop

🤗🤗

Originally posted by: anuandavi

So beautifully written Noor.. Hats off.. Write diwn Abhimanyu's haal-e-dil also pls..

Mujhe naam batao pehle... Main kaise kis naam se bulaun aapko?

Thank you so much and I am so glad you liked it ❤️

I will surely try too ... Writing his haal e dil is a task on its own 😆

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Noor noor noor.... 🤗🤗

How beautiful.this is yaar..... Such an indepth poem on Abhis feelings ....

I loved it so so so much and repeatedly reading it.....

Those lines u used have my ♥️

Please keep writing more dear..... Never stop

🤗🤗

Amrruuuuuuu 🤗

And I am so gladdd you liked it and wow... Repeated reading... I am honoured ❤️

You leaving such a sweet review is so sweet.. hehehehehe

Itne pyaare pyaare reviews milenge toh why I stop 😉

Originally posted by: Maneetlover123

Loved it 😊

Thank you so much 🤗🤗 I am glad you liked it ❤️

Phir de Noor rula diya 💔💔

My heart broken AbhiRa

You are perfect

Nidhi

Write more…. This was too good