Heartbroken AbhiRa - Page 2

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Noor as usual another beautiful poetry, it’s like you took a page out of Akshu’s letters. You should send these to Harshali for what they’ve inspired. Please keep serenading us with more.

I actually thought about this as a diary one for my story but since I don't get enough time to write stories, here is the treat ❤️❤️

Jani, your words means so, so much to me 🤗 thank you so much. I will definitely send them... I really hope they read it..

When I have audience like you guys, how can I ever stop sharing with you guys? 😳

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Zenuuu 🤗🤗

I actually imagined it like that only but I don't know when I will be write the story so just published it 🤗🤗

Thank you, Zenuuu

Yep and hope we all get to talk to HC once atleast ❤️

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

You nailed it girl ❤️ if you love to write then please don't stop yourself and shower us with your works bcoz this is beautiful.

How true it is? Abhi loved her with his everything. Whether she saves him or not, prays for his mother or not ... Nothing matters to him . All he ever expected from her is to acknowledge the love which her eyes scream of and not goes back to create a wall around herself bcoz he knew it will hurt her the most. You penned it down beautifully ✨✨

What should I call you? You have a nickname or virtual name?

Thank you so much for appreciation

And yeah I do have a name it's nidhi/khushi whatever u like both virtual and real too

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

This is too good, you and Noor are treating us to such beautiful words today…. Please keep writing more, I would love to read it.

Haaye thank u for liking it .

I never thought that I would be that much capable

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Thank you so much for appreciation

And yeah I do have a name it's nidhi/khushi whatever u like both virtual and real too

You have the talent girl... Ek baar likhna shuru toh karo ❤️

I will call you Nidhi.. I have a friend and she is a close one so will call u that ❤️

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

You have the talent girl... Ek baar likhna shuru toh karo ❤️

I will call you Nidhi.. I have a friend and she is a close one so will call u that ❤️

Sure it's my real name and khushi is nickname

Likha hai bahut saare topics pr

But AbhiRa pr aaj likh rahi hu pehli Baar

Aaj hi twitter pr daali apni ek poem

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Sure it's my real name and khushi is nickname

Likha hai bahut saare topics pr

But AbhiRa pr aaj likh rahi hu pehli Baar

Aaj hi twitter pr daali apni ek poem

Yaayyy 🥳🥳

Hoping to read more poems from you ❤️

Wowww.. ache ache reviews aayenge dekhna 🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Yaayyy 🥳🥳

Hoping to read more poems from you ❤️

Wowww.. ache ache reviews aayenge dekhna 🤗

Here is a link to that poem

https://twitter.com/itsMe_Jannat/status/1480755360889651204?t=EdlwcjCG_mT5o9Va94KfRA&s=19

Do read if u like

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Here is a link to that poem

https://twitter.com/itsMe_Jannat/status/1480755360889651204?t=EdlwcjCG_mT5o9Va94KfRA&s=19

Do read if u like

You nailed it ... This is so so trueee ... Now I want to read more poetries from you 🤗🤗

You perfectly explained and called out the hypocrisy of the society we live in...

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Raat Bhar

Wo shayad tere aankhon se bahe

Aasuon ki hi khata rahi hogi

Ki main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Tere hi baaton ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi

Aankhein band karne par teri muskurahat

Aur palak jhapakne par

Apni buzdilli ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Ye jaanti hun ki tu bhi soya nahi hoga

Meri baaton ko yaad kar chhip kar ro raha hoga

Inkaar sun kar mera tu toota hua hoga

Lekin kya karu.. jaanti hun ki ye rishta

Aage chal kar choota hua hi hoga

Ye soch kar ki tu bhi mujhe yaad kar

Raaton ko sota nahi hoga

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Teri yaadon mein doob kar main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi...

~Noor ❤️

I have to mention that you are very talented, these poems do not just flow out randomly. I admire the time and dedication you put into your work.

As for the poem, you have illustrated Akshara's sorrow, guilt and misery very gracefully. Ever since the mehndi scene, I'm feeling more sad for Akshara than Abhi because she doesn't want to give up Abhi. She wants him but she is frightened of asking someone for herself. This is her weakness @Bold

@Bold2 I am not a poem person but verses like these are touching. Beautifully explained Akshara's pov❤️