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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raat Bhar


Wo shayad tere aankhon se bahe

Aasuon ki hi khata rahi hogi

Ki main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Tere hi baaton ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi


Aankhein band karne par teri muskurahat

Aur palak jhapakne par

Apni buzdilli ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi


Ye jaanti hun ki tu bhi soya nahi hoga

Meri baaton ko yaad kar chhip kar ro raha hoga

Inkaar sun kar mera tu toota hua hoga

Lekin kya karu.. jaanti hun ki ye rishta

Aage chal kar choota hua hi hoga

Ye soch kar ki tu bhi mujhe yaad kar

Raaton ko sota nahi hoga

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Teri yaadon mein doob kar main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi...


~Noor ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just beautiful. I love this poem. AbhiRa have given rise to an outpouring of emotions. ❤


Wonderful words Noor. And so apt for AbhiRa.

Edited by ChhalkiSyaahi - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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I don't know if anyone else will like to be tagged and sorry if I missed someone... ❤️


P.S. the poetry was because HC completed 16 years in industry and AbhiRa are heartbroken too... So for them ❤️


And I just wanted to acknowledge the fine artist that my favourite Harshad Chopda is and at the moment, heartbroken AbhiRa and I wanted Akshu to acknowledge the pain Abhi is going through (for a lot of reasons), so I wrote this.


Congratulations my favourite for completing 16 years in ITV and ruling it like a king and also happy 2M family 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

Just beautiful. I love this poem. AbhiRa have given rise to an outpouring of emotions. ❤


Wonderful words Noor. And so apt for AbhiRa.


Gugli 🤗


See, you guys asked me to write something, I know this is not on Harshad but that's just so hard 😆 how will I ever be able to capture the man charisma


And I am so so glad you liked it ❤️ sacchiii, I have picked my pen again for these two otherwise the poet in me was lost somewhere and AbhiRa helped ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Noor this is so perfect for them

It's like Akshu penned it in her diary

Beautiful peom 🤗

Hope out favorite reach more heights of success in coming years and do back to back projects for his fans ❤❤

Congratulations to him

Edited by Zenab78 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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I also like to write but have not written anything yet on AbhiRa


Ur words heart touching Noor just too good 😍




Shiddat se kiya tha pyaar


Thukara ke gaye tum


Uski yaad me roye


Raat bhar karwate badalte hum


Na chaha tha kabhi kuch aur


Sirf maanga tha tumhara saath rab se


Badle me mila kya mujhe


Chhut gaya mera rishta baaki sab se


You can add it in any of ur poems if liked it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

I also like to write but have not written anything yet on AbhiRa


Ur words heart touching Noor just too good 😍




Shiddat se kiya tha pyaar


Thukara ke gaye tum


Uski yaad me roye


Raat bhar karwate badalte hum


Na chaha tha kabhi kuch aur


Sirf maanga tha tumhara saath rab se


Badle me mila kya mujhe


Chhut gaya mera rishta baaki sab se


You can add it in any of ur poems if liked it.


You nailed it girl ❤️ if you love to write then please don't stop yourself and shower us with your works bcoz this is beautiful.


How true it is? Abhi loved her with his everything. Whether she saves him or not, prays for his mother or not ... Nothing matters to him . All he ever expected from her is to acknowledge the love which her eyes scream of and not goes back to create a wall around herself bcoz he knew it will hurt her the most. You penned it down beautifully ✨✨


What should I call you? You have a nickname or virtual name?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Noor this is so perfect for them

It's like Akshu penned it in her diary

Beautiful peom 🤗

Hope out favorite reach more heights of success in coming years and do back to back projects for his fans ❤❤

Congratulations to him


Zenuuu 🤗🤗


I actually imagined it like that only but I don't know when I will be write the story so just published it 🤗🤗


Thank you, Zenuuu


Yep and hope we all get to talk to HC once atleast ❤️

Edited by ishqdinoorhai9 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Raat Bhar


Wo shayad tere aankhon se bahe

Aasuon ki hi khata rahi hogi

Ki main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Tere hi baaton ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi


Aankhein band karne par teri muskurahat

Aur palak jhapakne par

Apni buzdilli ko yaad kar

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi


Ye jaanti hun ki tu bhi soya nahi hoga

Meri baaton ko yaad kar chhip kar ro raha hoga

Inkaar sun kar mera tu toota hua hoga

Lekin kya karu.. jaanti hun ki ye rishta

Aage chal kar choota hua hi hoga

Ye soch kar ki tu bhi mujhe yaad kar

Raaton ko sota nahi hoga

Main raat bhar jaagti rahi

Khud ko kosti rahi

Teri yaadon mein doob kar main raat bhar ashq bahati rahi...


~Noor ❤️

Noor as usual another beautiful poetry, it’s like you took a page out of Akshu’s letters. You should send these to Harshali for what they’ve inspired. Please keep serenading us with more.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

I also like to write but have not written anything yet on AbhiRa


Ur words heart touching Noor just too good 😍




Shiddat se kiya tha pyaar


Thukara ke gaye tum


Uski yaad me roye


Raat bhar karwate badalte hum


Na chaha tha kabhi kuch aur


Sirf maanga tha tumhara saath rab se


Badle me mila kya mujhe


Chhut gaya mera rishta baaki sab se


You can add it in any of ur poems if liked it.


This is too good, you and Noor are treating us to such beautiful words today…. Please keep writing more, I would love to read it.

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