AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 2

So I love this and you’re a damn good writer! Read the whole thing in one sitting!

Omg mush..... What was it yaar..... Brilliant ...... I just couldnt stop it midway..... This is one of the bestest Abhira OS i have read till now....

That was really a sunday treat..... 🤗🤗

Why cant they take the show like this.... This Abhimanyu in your OS is just top notch....

Thanks a ton for this master piece ❤️

I keep reading this over and over ....

Can just send you hugs and wishes... Thanks for posting your story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Mush, this OS and you felt you will disappoint us? Kahan rehti hai tu ... Ghar aa kar maarungi tere ko main

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Mush, this OS and you felt you will disappoint us? Kahan rehti hai tu ... Ghar aa kar maarungi tere ko main

Noor how are you even sane after reading this?!?! Please gove me some advice i’m going crazy over here and idek how to even structure a proepr sentence for this OS WTFFF WAS THIS😲

Can you guys please kindly tell me how you guys ended up writing such long comments because i dont think i can even form a proper words abiut this os without my emotions all over the page after reading this. No im not trying to be dramatic im really asking this question. I mean WHAT WAS THATTTTTT😲

@slan @zenab78 @ekahiz @sheet_leher @angelhearts19

For some reason i cant tag from my phone idk why😡

And where should I start with? Your writing have me holding my breath all throughout. The rejection scene was so so real. I could totally imagine it like a movie is playing in my mind.

How do I explain what I felt in span of 30 minutes ( I read it twice 🙈)

I am seriously seriously speechless 😶

But will try to convey my feelings.

When he heard how it's a mistake, all I could think of how crushed, destroyed, small, lost he would have felt? The one person in whose hand he gave his heart, trusted with all he has, decided to break it, not once, not twice but freaking 5 times. And to be proven as a person who was nothing but delusional to come to think of it as love? When I was reading it, you know, I felt, how many times he would have questioned himself? Did he thought he forced a girl to accept his love? Did he think he is a lot like all those guys who says everything is fair in love and war and then the news that comes? How much and how many thoughts ran wild in his mind? Just how many deaths he died while still breathing?

And then I get Akshara.... Girl, my heart goes out to you as well. Even though I was mad at you but the writer made sure it does not last long. Nd my heart melted for you. How many wars you fought with yourself as you uttered those words you so so abhorred? That kills your very self? You crushed your heart with your own hands and you can't even complain nor cry... All you can do is let the pieces Peirce your heart and let the blood flow.

How selfish of you Aarohi? I wish you have given me a slap scene too. I know violence is wrong but Akshara maarti toh majja aata

Nd Abhimanyu Birla, you have my heart. There is nothing that can defy the love I carry for you and here, in Mush writing, I love you more and more.

Will it be wrong if I say I found it sexy? Nd damn the chills that ran down my spine... I can totally imagine Harshad nailing these scene. Mush, I am once again requesting you, send your CV to Rajan Shahi. Plesse please 🥺 you gives us depth.

And damn, the beauty of confession... Pehle maine socha iss security guard ne Akshu ko entry kaise de di but then Birla house ke kaand ke baad sabko yaad hi hogi apni Akshu.

Thank you for giving us one beautiful and realistic confession. I can't thank you enough for that. I must say, thank you for being a writer Mush and even a bigger thank you for sharing your write ups with us.

The washroom scene need a separate post ;)

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Noor how are you even sane after reading this?!?! Please gove me some advice i’m going crazy over here and idek how to even structure a proepr sentence for this OS WTFFF WAS THIS😉

Bro main khud 2 ghante baad dimaag wapas paayi hu... Varna tujhe lagta hai maine ab tk msg nhi kiya hota ?

Can you please tell me how am I suppose to write stories now? I feel so small.... Itne high level likh kar bolti hai "I don't want to disappoint you guys", mujh jaise log toh kood jaane chahiye kuein mein phir