AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 5

Mush OMG you posted your OS…

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Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Mush OMG you posted your OS…

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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Can you guys please kindly tell me how you guys ended up writing such long comments because i dont think i can even form a proper words abiut this os without my emotions all over the page after reading this. No im not trying to be dramatic im really asking this question. I mean WHAT WAS THATTTTTT😲

@slan @zenab78 @ekahiz @sheet_leher @angelhearts19

Hahahahaha. Dude, reading her OS, even I feel my head is brimming to write an OS, not just long comments. 😆 And trust me when I say this, I have never invested this much in an ITV show like this before and never written fan fiction.

PS: I won't be writing an OS, coz, doesn't have that much commitment. 😁

I don't know what to say about this story Mushfika. every time i read your work, I always think that your writing, your OS plots and the scenes you include can't get any better than it already is. but you prove me wrong every.single.time!!! how?

It was suchhhh a long OS but trust me i just didn't want it to end. like ever!! from how abhi helps akshu' get breathing to normal to how he roars like a lion when arohi shows her fake concern (even i got scared lol), the way he bangs at the washorom door and treats her like a baby by counting up to 3 (i know it was a serious moment but i found it soooo cute) , and thne the way he purposely touches her arms when akshu says "im fine" but then cries out in pain and he says "No you are not" and then the way he finally realizes without her uttering a single word that it was akshara who saved her from the fire

that full scene was just so good. i was so scared when abhimanyu backed off and said they were done. i thought it ended there because there was a huge gap in the post before i saw "part 2" and i almost jumped from my bed realizing i have another part left to read. trust me i have neever been this happy.

they way abhi threatened arohi,

my jaw just dropped!!! i can't believe after everything that happened int he washorom with akshu, he would still care to protect her the way he did. but he DID!!! and do you even now how beautilfully you have curved abhi's character by including this scene? how beautiful it must be to silently caring, and protecting someone without imposing anything on them. just brilliant yaar mushfika.

and finally akshu let arohi go. she finally says she will thinkabout her happiness before anyones

and finally the last scene my god. the last confession scene made me blush so hard it was truly the best confession of abhira ever!!! i loved how abhi made sure she says that she loves him before he finally hugged her back. that scene how he kept saying "you need to be more speciifc akshara goenka" 😆 and "try again" 🤣. akshara got it wrong 4 times before she said "because i love you?" (yes i counted😳). it was SOOO GOOD! I like how abhi held his ground this time. and finally when she said i love you he had to hear it 3 times as if making sure she memorized it and also he took his sweet time to let the whole confession sink in by asking her to repeat "again..say that again. again...again...once more... please...!!!" what a scene mushfika! how do you come up with all this?!

and finally the kiss. I swear my heart was in my throat while reading the kiss. i couldn't believe they actually kissed omg! and abhi made sure to be gentle and pulled back quickly and like a gentleman he is asked her if she is okay and if he scared her away

Mushfika I have no words for your writing. i really don't. i'm just so glad from the bottom of my heart that you bless us with such perfect OSes and make us forget the crap that the show is showing now (todays episode was so bakwas).

i just love you a lot🤗

by the way, i know i sound selfish but please don't make us wait too long for the next OS. will be looking forward to it🤗

Originally posted by: slan

Are you for real????? Seriously!!!!

I can't believe someone can write this well and portray various emotions through writing!

You won't believe I was literally holding my breath since she entered abhi's room till the last line!

Reading your stories are beyond watching anything, can literally create the scenes in head.

And what's this lengthy and all! The more it's lengthy the more we enjoy it and adore it😳 can read all of your stores innumerable times how much ever short or long it gets!

Thank you so much for the efforts and making our Sunday!

Waiting for more❤️

@bold- after reading this OS i am also asking the same question.

and about holding your breath when akshara goes to abhi's room to confess, my heart was in my throat. i knew it would be a happy ending but i just couldn't help feeling this way i don't even know why🤪

Originally posted by: Anokhi01

@bold- after reading this OS i am also asking the same question.

and about holding your breath when akshara goes to abhi's room to confess, my heart was in my throat. i knew it would be a happy ending but i just couldn't help feeling this way i don't even know why🤪

I know right!!

Read the whole thing in one sitting!

Koi toh mushfika ki class lo to tell that we will even think about leaving her OS in midway of reading!!!

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Can you guys please kindly tell me how you guys ended up writing such long comments because i dont think i can even form a proper words abiut this os without my emotions all over the page after reading this. No im not trying to be dramatic im really asking this question. I mean WHAT WAS THATTTTTT😲

@slan @zenab78 @ekahiz @sheet_leher @angelhearts19

Well, it took sometime to let it sink in that she has posted a long OS for us!

Then after finding a proper time read it all in one go, didn't want to break in between, phir kiya post!

Seriously she is gem of a writer! Kaaash, she had been one of yrkkh writers, hume ye aaj kal ke episodes jaise bakwas nhi sehna padta😢

Mushfika.. what a brilliant piece of writing!!! Don't know what I wait for more now.. Your OSs or the episodes.. I have atleast read it 5 times!! and everytime my heart takes a nosedive to the stomach when i reach the part of the story where Akshara is in Abhimanyu's room..

Brilliant... You should be a writer..

The way she came to Abhimanyu... the way Abhimanyu did not make it easy for her.. despite the fact that Akshara is " his zindagi"!

their happiness was tangible after the confession..

Girl.. You have my heart❤️

Originally posted by: slan

Well, it took sometime to let it sink in that she has posted a long OS for us!

Then after finding a proper time read it all in one go, didn't want to break in between, phir kiya post!

Seriously she is gem of a writer! Kaaash, she had been one of yrkkh writers, hume ye aaj kal ke episodes jaise bakwas nhi sehna padta😢

I know yaar! Todays eoisode was soooo bad. The only good thing was the dream sequence. After watching the episode i came back to read the last scene of her os again to make myself feel good