pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

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hain agar dusman dusman jamana gum nhi gum nhi

part-8

te-ak admire to nk...she was feeling lill ajib...nk too...not like that just feel it..nk-wat mohit chal na in class..
mo-ak bhi aati hogi na... . lo aa gai..
nk-chal na yr..
ak-hii mohit hii nk..
nk-hii hlooo..
mo-kaisi ho ak aai nhi kal..
nk went from der...
mo-maharaj g gusse main hain aaj..
ak-kya par kyo..
mo-pata nhi unki maya woh hi jane... in class ak mohit sat on table but nk went in other table..
ak laughed to sees his anger.. nk was in garden... sat apone than ak came der. .. nk sees..
nk-huh.. . showing that he is reading... ak touches her leg from nk.. he felt giggle aahh..
she again touched her leg from nk.. nk laugh..
nk-wat haa.. if u dont waana come nd dont waana share ur problem with me toh dur raho na.. main puri rat paresan tha ki kahi tum sad toh nhi ho gai kisi bat ko leke..
ak-are nk par tum.. than one boy say for practice. . dey went in hull..
tea-so yeh scene hai today ki...
ak-karan karan... gussa ho gye kya..
nk-pata nhi hum frd hain bhi ya nhi hina... mujhe samaj nhi aata agar frd hain main ek ek bat batata hu toh tum kyo nhi batati..
ak-aacha i dont know about ur family.. bataya.. maine toh sab keh diya.. kal clg isliye nhi aai kyoki main bimar thi.. tumne kosish bhi nhi ki.. puchna nhi mujhe dekhne aa sakte the na.. karan y u always showed anger..
nk heart fullfilled with emotions..
nk-i m really sry.. says in reality... mujhe nhi pata tha ki tum apni life ki har ek chiz nhi bata sakti.. jo bat batane ki ho woh hi kahogi.. main esse hi ego main aa gaya dont worry.. so sry ak... main aage se tumhari khushi ka dhayan rakhuga..
te-hey nk no ak.. its hina..
nk-are haa.. hina...
te-well done... now thodi si aur bachi hain practice bas kal tum dono shopping pe jake yeh saman le aana.. gave list.. parso play hain na tum dono ki... kal sunday hain..
naksh-g thanku.. .
nk-ak aao na mujhe kuch batana hain tumhe..
ak-kya. dey were talking... tell.. nk i m sry yesterday mere abba mujhe le gaye the ek party main i forgot my cell in house.. bhut rat hui na so i didnt call u.
nk-koi bat nhi ak... maine bhi tumhe apni family ke bare main bataya nhi.. tumse puch liya bas..
ak-mujhe laga tum khud bataogi wen u will need to say.. tell main tumhe bataugi if u want help..
nk-how tumhe pata chala ki mujhe help chahiye tumse..
ak-from ur eyes...
nk-mere papa nhi hain ak...
ak-wattt..
nk-haa ak.. mom hain ek bada bhai hain.. par mere bade tau g tai g hai.. unhone mujhe papa ki kami mehsus nhi karai.. but he is so angry young men.. bhut ehsan bhi hain.. my big brother.. he is also like same.. kam karna family responsibility.. but main thoda alg hu.. i dont spend time with family i liked my frds.. aur business bhi i dont waana do.. mujhe tau g kehte hain ki tum bhi bade bhai ki tarah bano par mujhe nhi banna.. isi karan meri unse banti nhi tum yaha kya meri alg pehchan nhi honi chahiye main kisi ke jaisa kyo banu ak..
ak-smile tum jaise ho aache ho par yakin dilao unko that u loves him so much aur tumhara alg najariya hain soch hain.. convince karo na unko sab alg hote hain.. main kya batau khud apne abba ko maine kuch samjha nhi pai..
nk-hum ek hi naw par hain par sayad kinara nhi koj pa rahe..
ak-yes.. in one boat.. but give will give chance to both.. one day u will win his heart .
nk-aur tum apni abba ki... i m sry for anger.
ak-sshh... kal shopping pe jani h..
nk-are haa i dont know shop here..
ak-but i know isi bahane main tumhe visit bhi kara dungi everywer oki..
nk-but tumhare abba woh denge kya permission..
ak-i should ask..
nk-than ask nd tell me oki.. number likh lo mine. dey exchange number of each..
ak-nk main chalti hu bye abba aati hogi..
nk-bye jhagadalu billi..
ak-laugh bye.. nk... ak went with vis... abba.. meri play ke liye i waana go shopping with my frd..
vis-which..
ak-girl hain frd meri..
vis-oki u can morning to nun only.. evening u should come..
ak-yaa thankuu..
in nyt..
ak called to nk..
nk-hiii ak.. aaogi aaj party main.
ak-nhi aabba aaj soi nhi na.. baithi hain.. he gave permission for shopping..
nk-waaww thays great. .
ak-nk.. kuch kahu..
nk-ya.. def..
ak-plz tum atleast apni amma ko toh time do bat karo unse thaki she will not feel alone.. unko ek son ki time bhi nhi milegi aur hubby toh... plz unki dard kam karo.. ek bar..
nk-ak main nhi keh pata hu mujhe express karna nhi aata hain.. main dil se pyar karta hu..
ak-but pyar ko show karni padti hai na nk warna rishte weak ho jati hain bhut.. main as frd tumhe boli ab mano ya nhi yeh tumhari hand main hain... .
nk-i will try ak.. aur txx..
ak-this is ur frdship haa.. txx... bye..
nk-tc... cut d phone... ak talks.. he was thinking.. he called to gy3.. hloo maa..
gy-munna... kaisa hai beta tu..
nk-aap kaise ho maa..
gy3 was surprised..
gy-are waah aaj tak toh pocha nhi bas yeh kehta tha ki main aacha hu paresan mat karo aaj kya ho gya. .
nk-maa... kya tum.. meri fun kar rahi.. see fun mat karo oki.. tell kaisi ho aap. .
gy-kitne dino bad tune pucha beta meri toh tabiyat ekdom thik ho gai..
nk-kuch hua kya..
gy-thoda sa sir dard..
nk-kya apne bataya nhi..
gy-phone toh kiya tha na tune lagaya nhi phir tu kehta ki mujhe tang mat karo main thik hu khana kha liya aur cut.. kaise batati...
nk-i m really sry maa.. main ek bura beta hu na..
gy-tu aacha h beta par teri sich sabse alg hain.. tu sabse pyar bhi karta h par tera gussa aur teri na sunne ki aadat h bas.. par main khush hu tu thoda badla mohit ke karan na beta..
nk-maa woh.. haa yaha sab bhut aache h.. toh.. maa aap teb le lena..
gy-tune kaha h lena toh padega hi..
nk-take care maa.. aap rest karo... cut d phone.. ak was ryt maa is feeling lonly main socha hi nhi ki maa ko batana bhi padta hai.. ak sach tumhe sab khushi milni chahiye.. m vry lucky.. txx txx so much. .
here ak was on bed..
ak-nk aacha h.. i like him. . bas uski aada thodi alg hain par essa frd mujhe aaj tak nhi mila.. kismat ne milwai hamko. txx god...?
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waiting.. sry for mistake..
precap-naksh shopping.. play bhi.. but ak want to break this frdship but y?

next part is on page 8

It was okayish part. .
I didn't like much. ..
Without anything how ak is trusting ND falling for nk when she promised her father? ?
Think more ND make new ideas ND make Story stronger... .
Ak is slowly falling for nk which may cause her heart break in future. ...
Sorry if I hurt u.. .
But I don't know y something is missing m feeling. .
Do update soon. ..
Waiting for skit ND ak y she wanna end frndhsip.. .

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

It was okayish part. .
I didn't like much. ..
Without anything how ak is trusting ND falling for nk when she promised her father? ?
Think more ND make new ideas ND make Story stronger... .
Ak is slowly falling for nk which may cause her heart break in future. ...
Sorry if I hurt u.. .
But I don't know y something is missing m feeling. .
Do update soon. ..
Waiting for skit ND ak y she wanna end frndhsip.. .

haa ur fear is totally right.. 😃... awww u r feeling like that.. but it is not love.. she is attracting on nk only..
she is only feeling that nk is a gud frd.. but i will make it strong nd next time u will feel better.. 😲. .
i know wat u missing but essa hoga jo ak ko sachi lagega.. yeh start hain thoda sa time do..
hurt karne ki kya bat hain isme which u felt said na.. u r ryt also..
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally... yupiee 👏. .
i will do update soon next

part-9
nk called to ak..
nk-haa ak hloo... kaha ho tum..
ak-main na wahi hu jaha hum pehli bar mile the... pool ke pass..
nk-got it aata hu main oki.. he went near of pool..
ak-ak was praying something to closed her eyes...
nk-kya kar rahi mujhe yad kya...
ak-heheh.. no. .. i was praying ki sabko sab kuch mile..
nk-aur tumhe?
ak-apne liye sab mangti hain.. dusare ke liye koi nhi mangti na.. bas..
jo honi hain woh ho ke rehti hain.. chale... waawww waaww pani ki leher... she went in side pillour of pool nd opened her arms... starts taking step.. yuhuuu yuhuuu meri pehli leher mujhe puri khushi do.. nk laugh..
nk-stupid girl gir jaogi.. she didnt listen.. suddenly she was unbalanced than nk took to her in his arms..
nk-samal ke madam g..
ak-hawww... opened one eyes.. bach gai tumne bacha li na.. thank god.. see dusare ke liye jo mangti hain na usko kuch nhi hoti.. aaj i m free bird.. haww.. shopping. . so wat we will take.. she stood haa.. kya kya leni hain yeh list hain oki.. she was walking..
nk was behind..
nk-ak.. madam g main nokar nhi sath hu apka dost.. oki..
ak-are haa.. see mujhe auto se jani padegi because i have no vehicle oki.. u come nd follow to me..
nk-i have bike oki.. u sat behind nd say way oki..
ak-but nk.. koi kya sochegi.. i cant sat.. this is not gud..
nk-watt.. if tumhare mere man main koi galt chiz nhi hain y u fearing.. haa frd ho sakte h na ek ladka ladki. tum khud jab tak kud pe trust nhi karogi toh kon tumhara yakin karega haa... agar tumhe khud pe yakin hain toh plz tum mere sath chalo..
ak thinked a while nd said yes... oki..
she sat with nk.. he stooped to bike nd ak forcefully went on nk..
ak-aahh..
nk-sry woh breaker. .. dhayan rakhuga aage se.. ak said way. . ak hand were apart.. nk noticed it. .
nk-yahi na.. market he stooped to bike... now ak went in shop..
ak-yaha milegi hame thodi si thing.. kitne ki bhaiya..
sh-200 ki..
ak-wat thode din hui my frd took this on 100..now u said it double rate..
sh-abhi bad gai na kon si frd..
ak-meri frd seneha abhi parso leke gai h.. esse karte hai aap log imandari ki value nhi hota kya. y u saying all haa.. i really cant trust on u. .. aur mujhe new manke apne rate bada di. .
nk-sshh ak y u taking so seriously. .
ak-nk chup raho.. value honi chahiye money ki ese koi bhi man lo kisi ki itni himat hain nhi than wat.. esse nhi karna chahiye na tumhe.. main lungi nd 100 main hi plz dont make fool i hate jhooti bat ko really..
sh-le lijiye 100 main.. she took it... went in anger..
nk-ak ak y anger haa.. choti si bat pe..
ak-nk yeh choti bat hain kya... main nai hu yeh soch ke jhoot bola woh.. help karti hu par jhoot se aur beimani se mujhe nafrat hoti hain bhut.. really..
nk-tumhare gusse ko sant karne ka tarika h golgappe from my side oki..
ak laugh..
ak-golgappe haa kyo..
nk-just esse hi.
ak-haa chalo... uski nhi second one make gudone oki.. . dey starts eating..
hmm vry nice.. nk lo na.. nk sees to ak... bhaiya mirchi thodi aur..
nk-mujhe kam thodi..
ak-hmm kyo..
nk-bas esse hi... i cant eat.. she was eating.. felt spicy so much..
nk took one golgappe from aks plate..
nk-hmmm aahh itni mirchi.. ak didn't like it..
ak-nk tum mere main se golgappe esse jhoota.. tumhe yeh sab thik lagta hain..
nk-kyo thik nhi h kya... main toh essa hi hu jo man kiya kha liya kisi frd ke main se bhi. u dont like..
ak-bat like ki nhi but esse log dekhege toh galt empression padti na.. main ek girl hu u boy..
nk-toh kya hua ak... main galt kya kiya haa.. bat soch ki hain aur woh galt nhi thi na.. aao cloths..
ak-main nk ko samaj hi nhi pa rahi yeh hak dikhawa hain ya sach kyoki esse behavior mujhe khabhi mila nhi..
n-hey see yeh colour ki shirt kaisi hain.. aachi dikh rahi kya..
ak-amm i dont like much.. green colour is better..
nk-wat chii.. i will never wear this..
ak-my fav colour nk..
nk-wat sorry but main nhi pehen sakta because i hate it.. but if u will say jo maine like ki.. it is gud one..
ak-agar tumhe pasand h toh le leni chahiye na.. y u asking me... i dont like this bas chale hamari all thing aa gai..
nk sees one teddy. ..
nk-nhi lena bhaiya woh teddy dena... he took it.. ak ak..
ak-hmm... for u... gift...
nk-i m sry if u felt bad dil nhi dukhana tha bas esse hi bol diya green is also gud colour..
ak-insist kyo kar rahe.. u dont like.. sabki pasand na pasand is dif na..
koi bat nhi if u dont like it... but main teddy nhi le sakti because today bdy nhi meri nd na kuch.. y i will take.
nk-i liked for u thats y.. frd ek gift de toh lete h na..
ak-kisne boli.. nk kuch din hui na frdship ko abhi thoda sa space jaruri na.. plz jab hum khub aachi frd banegi na tab deni oki..
nk-oki.. suddenly ak got a call..
ak-hloo.. wat dadi. kya hui unko.. i m coming. .
nk - kya hua..
ak-pass m woh ek meri dadi.. u take me der..
nk-haa chalo.. he took to her.. in dadis house.. dey went in room..
ak-dadi howz u.. starts crying... i cant live without u..
da-main thik hu pagli bas suger low ho gai.. meri poti bhi na kyo bataya chiki tune..
ci-main bhi dar gai thi na..
da-ab main thik hu... ak hug to dadi.. yeh meri bachi ki jagah hain isse kon le sakta hain..
ak-main dar gai thi.. meri pyar dard sab toh aapse hi batati hu kisse milti dar gai thi main..
da-thik hu baba.. yeh ladka..
ak-are.. dadi.. she sat on bed.. yeh mera frd nk woh i told u na.. isne lai yaha mujhe dadi..
nk she is my dadi.. frd sab kuch meri..
nk-aap thik ho na.. dadi... woh ak dar gai thi bhut..
ak-haa nk tum jao main aa jaugi ghar.. shopping ho gai meri..
nk-but today climax ki practice hain..
ak-i will do sewa dadi ki.. kal main yad kar lungi stage pe we can manage na..
nk-than its fine.. dadi be careful bye ak... tc.. he went..
da-yeh hi nk.. ak gave fruits to dadi.. sundar hain gora bhi.. tujhe kaisa laga haa frd..
ak-dadi.. u know na bolni nhi jayada.. he is gud or bad mujhe kya karni.. my promise with my dad u know na..
da-beta har chiz tu samaj nhi sakti hain na.. bata tere dil pe khabu rahega tera... koi frd bane ya dil ka sehjada tu nhi keh sakti kuch bhi..
ak-ofoo.. wat sehh.. ufff... dadi u need to take rest... haa.. meri abba ki call aai main call karugi haa nd tc plz. hug to her..dadi i cant live.. dadi thik ho jao bas..
da-beta mujhe kuch nhi hoga tu bas play pe dhayan de mujhe puri shooting ki video dena..
ak-pakka.. chinky plz tc of dadi oki.. . i will come after play..
she sees nks teddy he forgot in dadis house..
ak-nk ne li nhi. .. oo god... main usko kal de dungi.. in house vis was waiting for ak..
vis-wer was u haa.. see time it is over from ur time which i gave.. wer was u..
ak-woh my frd me eating golgappe..
vis-wat outside food i told u dont eat but u never listen me na.. ak i want ur safty only.. we cant trust to anyone one day we should pay for all punishment. .
ak-abba i m tired to listen all this.. i waana rest.. i came na. . plz i know my safty abba.. i m sry if i hurt u but i m not a kid na.. plz trust me.. plz...
vis-ufff.. this girl.. she never listen me.. . she went in room..
ak-ek toh dadi ki habiyat thik nhi upar se abba.. nk was calling to her.. he cut it..
nk-wat she cutted my call.. thik h mujhe kya.. bas itna kehna tha ki mujhe climax change ho gya yeh bataya gya h.. fine..
ak-mujhe sunna nhi hain.. she slept in anger..
morning she got ready nd vis was dropping to her..
vis-ak.. all d best...
ak-smile thanku abba... thanku soo much.. she went in hull..
she sees to nk..
ak-hii nk..
nk-hii..
ak-kya hua u r upset..
nk-nothing i called u.. u cut it..
ak-nk reason toh puch lete bas gussa kyo dikha rahe..
nk-i m not showing u showing attitude maybe.. meri call cut kari..
ak-i was hell upset nk..u know na dadi ko thik nhi thi woh aur meri thodi si abba se fight..
nk-ooh howz dadi..
ak-thik h par nk tum itnna gussa kyo dikhate ho reason toh jan lete..
nk-ak i was not showing... bas yeh batana tha ki climax change ho gya meri lines badal gai.. but teacher se pucha abhi urs nhi hui..
ak-wat kya change hua tell..
nk-woh ladk..
than mohit came..
mo-tum dono bat kar rahe.. ready ho jao play ke liye tum dono ka number aane wala hain yr.. chal..
nk was getting ready.. ak also in her room...
nk throwed all things here nd der...
nk-oo god meri cap kaha hain kal li thi na par i didnt check it..
here ak got ready she opened her kit..
ak-are nk ki cap.. haa kal taddy nd cap meri main aai na.. oo god.. i will give him.. she was in red gown..
made juda side nd red rose also makeup.. looking gud..
here nk was in shirt nd pent. .. ak knocked to door..
ak-may i come in nk..
nk-kon ak. plz my cap mil nhi rahi opening door.. didnt see to ak..
ak sees nks room.. it was maxup..
ak-oo god come inside.. itna feeli room.. oo god i m feeling like chakar nk u.. clean karni chahiye na..
nk-ak u know my. . sees to ak.. waaww.. got happy. . u looking so beautiful.. admire to her..
ak-but u ur cap . itni feela di h room.. ready ho than play hone wali h na..
nk-hhh.. haaa woh hmm.. meri cap tumhare pass aai..
ak-hmm ur taddy nd cap lo.. give to him.. nk was getting ready..
ak-ohoo... took box of his jewelry.. are meri ring.. sees.. nk yeh ring kaha se aai..
nk-oo this one.. ek pagli girl mili thi mujhe first day.. than i got anger socha ki kojegi nhi milegi phir isi main padi h..
woh sayad gir gai thi..
ak laugh..
ak-it is my ring nkkk..
nk-watt u mean.. us din hum.. both laugh.. oo god hum toh bas ladte rehte h..
kya din the na..
ak-haa dark thi na so we didn't see each..
nk-laugh hmm.. ak put all things..
nk-ak i m ready.. ak sees to nk.. he was looking so cute in cap..
nk-ak.
ak-broke her dream.. haa chale..
now dey went on back stage.. ak feeling some weird..
ak-kuch open lag rahi mujhe nk..
nk-sees.. woh tumhari woh zip kul..
ak-kya.. par hamari nam aane wali h.. meri frd oo god main bula bhi nhi.. cell..
nk-maine bhi nhi.. ak was trying to close it...
ak-kya karu.. last dance hain.. yeh group ki..
nk-main kar du.. nk came behind of ak..
group was dancing on song..
pehli pehli bar baliye dil gya har baliye(nk touched her back. ak closed her eyes).
rabba mainu pyar ho gya hayee ee dil ka karar kho gya hoo. (nk swlly swlly closed to zip.. he sees her milky skin).
nk-ho gya suddenly her frd came in same time. sees to ak nd nk. he skipped to ak..
ak-thankuu..
akk said said
payal..
pa-ak woh main.. ak feeling dif.. woh wish karne aai thi hug to her.
ak-thankuu..
pa-all d best nkk..
nk-tqqq...
pa-are nam aa gya dono ka.. all d best.. dey went in stage.. 😳

in stage..
ak-karan...frds oki... but hum only frd hain haa..
nk-yes hina.. pehle hamari fight now dosti bhi. . main try karuga ki yeh aachi ho oki..
than te-yeh dono ki dosti apne dekhi.. dono lade frd bane.. par ek ladki ki man ki bat kon samaj sakta hain.. usne khana banaya sirf ek dost ke liye nhi balki uske liye jisse woh sayad pasand bhi karti thi..
in scene.. nk was sat in table..
ak-karan i know u r angry because tumne khabhi bhi family main pyar nhi dekha na but dont worry kuch nhi hoga main hu na for support. . lo khana i made for u.. she gave one bite nk ate nd was seeing to ak..
nk-i really felt blessed hina really hug to ak... u r truly a gud frd.. time ho gai bye..
ak-main chinta karti hu aur keh bhi dungi kal ek din main ki i liked u more tgan frd.. sach nk..
teacher - yeh ek pagal dil ka aarman hi toh tha par pata nhi kyo sayad life ko kuch alg hi manjur tha.. dekhte h kya.. ak nk were in front of each..
ak-km tumne mujhe ladna sikhaya.. meri jan bachai.. main tumse kuch mangu..
nk-haa hina..
ak-i really love.. frd ke liye nhi ek lover ki tarah.. jab mere papa ne mujhe support nhi kiya u did.. sach i really like u..
nk-hina wat u saying..
ak-sachai mere dil ki..
nk-i dont love u.. ak heart broken. . yeh she was confused.. sach kisi ko malum h ya nhi par yeh hi sach hain ki. main tumhe pasand karta hu but as a frd.. woh socha nhi.. bas u was sad toh woh kiya jo koi bhi karta.. ehsan woh hi.. par i dont love u tumhari soch meri soch alg h. . behtar jindagi banao mujhe alg hoke.. ak had tears..
sach i dont like u as a frd its fine oki..
ak-nn... u...
nk-sab ho jo hum chahe essa nhi hota na. u r gud but not my tipe oki... byeee.. enjoy nd sry..
ak-sryy.. he went maine sach batai aur mujhe chod.. than teacher came..
te-hamesha dil jude jafuri nhi khabhi tut bhi sakta h.. is liye ek ladki ko majbut rehna jaruri h aur sachai apanana bhi.. yahi kehna chahte h ki independent bano txxx to ak nd nk.. he came nd passed smile..
ak was seeing to nk..
everyone clapping. ..
ak nk were on back stage..
ak-u liked climax. . us ladki ka dil tut gya nk..
nk-teacher ne mujhe pucha ki end yeh sachi h i said oki.. waise bhi sabko khud choice ka huk h u can't say ki woh us girl se pyar kare..
ak-toh frdship main ehsan hota h..
nk-not like that but haa.. dosti pyar is dif.. we cant say y u taking it seriously. .
ak-nk soch ki farak h n..
nk-thabhi us girl ko boy nhi mila.. kyoki dono bilkul dif h aur same thought milti h but dif alg karti..
ak-nk agar koi frd hogi woh dil nhi thodi frd ki sochegi. na..
nk-haa par pyar is dif view woh bhi toh.. i m coming..
ak-mujhe itni buri kyo lagi.. it was a game.. than payal came..
pa-sad story thi yr.. i didnt like much.. story toh milan se hoti h haina..
ak-hmm.. pata nhi payal i m not feeling gud yr.. i m confused also..
yeh game main hui esse humdardi hoti kya..
pa-yes bilkul see u.. nk ko trd banaya tune kyo..
ak-because.. he helped nd said everything..
pa-laugh waah ho gai frdship.. i know u from two years.. i dont know ur past nd u shared with nk.. y..
ak-because usne gussa ki means woh jo h show kar rahi..
pa-wat really haa.. thodi si help ki dikhawa kar li means gud.. tu usse janti kitna h haa.. bas help ka natak bhi kar sakta h na.. aur to aur past bhi bata diya.. agar uske man main chori hogi toh.. bata kahi usne use karke tujhe fek diya toh..
ak-kya but y he will use..
pa-ek boy ko kya chahiye ek sundar ladki se u know na.. unke liye mitti bat karna nd frdly hona touch yeh sab ek ladki ka arman hota h par boys nhi samjhate tu janti nhi aachese aur tu trust kar rahi gum rahi confused ho rahi.. aaj maine dekha kya kar raha tha woh..
ak-my zip was open.. he helped me..
pa-he helped u.. agar woh itna aacha hota toh jaldi se kisi ko bula ke nhi lata khud karne laga.. tu itni aandhi kaise ho gai.. itni sweet ho help karti ho bata agar nk ne tera dil thoda use kiya seh paogi.. yeh nhi kehti boy se frdship aachi nhi.. par tu aachese trust karna sikh pir keh na kuch..
ak-nk essi nhi ho sakti..
pa-aacha mujhe likhit de than puchugi.. u r so sweet koi dikhawa hua toh.. sach main ek emotional bond hoti h esse upar se koi bhi attract kar sakta h u cant say love oki..
ak-sach kya essa hoti h..
pa-bilkul.. pehle trust karna sikho puri tarah se absorb karo than make gud frd.. i want ur bhalai.. oki.. be careful heart ki suno hmm...
ak was remembered all talks.. actually nks boldness made her fear..
nk was opened minded but as a girl which payal said made ak lill uncomfortable..
nk came..
nk-ak pani..
ak-i dont want..
nk-lo na u getting sweat... clean it from tissue. .
ak-nkk.. dont touch me oki..
nk-i m sry.. i thought frd..
ak-frd frd wat frd.. dont cross ur limit oki.. i m girl nd u r boy.. i dont want any frdship.. kya ki tumne mere liye.. hamari soch dif h sab..
nk-but wat i did..
ak-kuch nhi fault is mine.. how easly i trust u.. mujhe kya ho gai thi pata nhi. i was going crazy dont know kya hui thi bas.. tumhari soch mujhse alg h.. mujhe sometimes bhut buri lagti nk..
nk-but mera view mera h batamizi nhi ki na.. socha h tumhare liye..
ak-maine nhi sochi. sochi na.. but tum show kari hak.. kisne di tumhe nhi hak nhi h tumhe meri upar.. jao go.. mujhe trust nhi h. .
nk-pata nhi sayad hamari frdship ka base hi weak h tumne kaha tha ki jo jana chahe jane dena. . i dont know problem kya h but jis din i will trully win heart tab hum frd banege..
soch alg hain socha frd toh banege but no.. koi bat nhi.. be happ..
ak-jab i want to be alone u said ki maine batai nhi kya hak h tumhari meri upar. . kuch bhi janti nhi main.. main change ho rahi nk bhut change pata nhi kaise.. . but i camt take it more...
nk-pata nhi par sayad main hadbad main tumse dosti kar baitha but jo pal bitaya it was gud.. he was going..
ak-tumhare liye pyar ki mayne hi nhi kuch.. mujhe pata nhi but meri dil tut rahi nk.. how can i trust u haa.. i thought i m ryt but my frd said which is also true na? ??
so guyzzz now tell me that this is also gud or not.. i waana know give ur view to me..
nd plz say if u want changes...
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precap-ak nk is going in other way.. but missing eachs.. their first term ends nk went in his house... after some month he came.. dey will become frd again?

Story was good...

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Story was good...

ak was confused with the shower of love nk is imposing on her

but as she never experienced before she is unable to undersatnd her feelings...

with time i say more as of now part is going good ak was sooo confusing

nd nk is shown as a carefree guy who thinks of just frnshdip.

Ak is still unable to understand her feelings...

Now naksh apart hope to see further where things get understandable to both...

Do udpate soon..

thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😛 awww yupiee u liked my view haw princyu i m so happy yuhuu..
haa i thought ki yeh show karugi about confusion story was means..
past aur bhi hain abhi 😉 its not ended still..
haa she is ryt in her way na. .
i will do update soon next part than read nd say how was past. it will end soon not now 😛