KaIra SS - Sorrys and slow dances - UPDATE part 3B - page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: joya.asya

This is wonderful. Loved it 😃
Do write more and with karthik pov please also mention something about his family as i think cvs are gonna take time for it!!!


Thank you so much!!! Have already posted the second part. Oh, kartik's family. Actually haven't thought about that for this story. But will either try to incorporate it or keep that for some other story some time else??

Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bharath91120

loved it ! but it was soo short ! hope to see more part and longer !
thanks !! 😊


Thanks!

Oh, was it short?? Didn't keep a track as posted directly as Agonist cut copy from word that I Usually otherwise do.

Will post the next part in a couple of days and will definitely try to keep it longer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!! dont know ur name but girl ur an awesome writter..i loved the second part.so kartik charm is affecting naira eagerly waiting for nextpart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beatsdongandy

wow!! dont know ur name but girl ur an awesome writter..i loved the second part.so kartik charm is affecting naira eagerly waiting for nextpart.


Thank you so much andy! You can call me mridzy. :) oh yeah, how long will Naira be immune to his charms eh?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Working on the next part. And since you guys said the parts were short I am trying to write a long one. Should be up in a day or two but for now here is a jhalak of whats in store.

Teaser 9 July

"if you can trust me, then why can't you trust your mother, goddammit??" Kartik snapped,

"that's none of your business" she snapped back.

Exasperated at how stubborn she was being, " Look beyond your hatred. Maybe then you'll understand"

Tears sprang to her eyes. For the first time in her life, naira was left speechless.

Kartik curled his fingers into fists. God! She was crying. He ached to take her in his arms. But he knew if he did that, she would go all rigid again and retreat into her shell, and he be damned if he let that happen. Not today. Not anymore.

Naira bit her lip. "fine. If that's what you think" she said with great difficultly, very proud that her voice hadn't given away to sobs threatening at her throat.

Just a little bit more, naira, Kartik urged mentally. She could try as much as she wanted to put a brave face, but he could read those eyes in an instant.

Telling himself that he was doing this for her, he said"kya hua ms. Rishikesh? No smart-ass comeback?"

She hated that smug expression on his face, but she hated the fact that he wasnt wrong even more.

"stay out of my life" she bit out and whirled out, suddenly feeling the need to escape to her safe haven -her room.

No sooner had she turned, She was pulled back hastily by warm hands. The movement was so sudden that she went straight against his chest.

Kartik's fingers curled against her biceps. He closed his eyes and breathed in her scent. It was a mixture of sweet and wild. He smiled, just like her.

All the irritation he had felt at her stubbornness melted. " just talk to your mother, Naira. You deserve it" he said softly, into her hair.

Naira felt herself relax in his arms, her sobs coming freely now .She didn't want to, but she felt safe to let go and just be. His breath was warm against her hair, his voice soft and his words caring.

She didn't know why he cared. But she did know that she was liking it. Maybe a tad bit too much.

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Ha, that felt great imagining and writing. That's all. Thank you folks.


Edited by mridhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really well written and so KaIra-ish part.. Don't tease us more and write the full os soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!!ye teaser hai to story kya hoga..i loved how kartik cant see her crying still want her to understand her mom n trying all means.loved it mridzy!!update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice teaser ! waiting for the whole part 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3A

Ppphhhrtrrt. Naira was shaken away from her thoughts by Pungi's horn. She turned to see Pungi smiling at her knowingly, pointing to her, then at Kartik and then folding her hand in a mark of approval.

"what??. No. No, pungi. You misunderstood. I just meant - "

"HOW DARE YOU?!"

There was no mistaking that voice. "now what?" Naira said, wondering what was rukmani daadi's problem this time.

"chalo!" she said to pungi.

Together they raced towards the hall, where, to her horror, Rukman dadi was angrily brandishing a finger at Kartik's face. " how dare you threaten Anu?"

Threatened? Kartik has threatened Anmol? Naira thought, Her eyes immediately found his - he met her eyes briefly and shook his head.

That was all she needed - she didn't need even a moment to wonder who was wrong here - she had already made that mistake once. She trusted Kartik.

She nodded back at him.

That was all he needed. He was usually a calm cordial guy. He was friendly, easy going, was never rude to people unnecessarily. But when he had overheard Anmol and his friends plotting against Naira and pungi, he couldn't control himself, especially when he heard Anmol say he would make sure Naira would suffer.
As long as he was around, nothing and no harm would touch Naira. He has promised himself and her that much - and he had informed Anmol as much in no uncertain terms - that if anything were to happen to Naira or if Anmol were to even think of harming Naira or pungi in anyway, then he would forget his decency too.

And Rukmani dadi had heard him - and he did feel bad about that, because he didn't want to hurt anyone in this family -maybe he could have dealt with this differently.
He was ready to apologise, but he caught Naira entering the kitchen out of the corner of his eyes. He looked up and their eyes met.

She looked from Rukmani dadi to him to Anmol as Rukmani dadi screamed at him that how dare he threaten her beloved grandson.

Would she trust him? Would she think he was wrong this time too? The last time that had happened, he has been hurt and had decided to leave. But she had stopped him, and he did.

But now, now he wasn't sure. Maybe they weren't the best of friends, but they had this unspoken connection - he knew he would trust her with his life, and she seemed to trust him too. The walls she had built around herself seemed to be slowly but surely coming down.

He didn't realise it, but he was actually holding his breath as he searched her face for that trust.

She looked at him, and nodded firmly.

That was all he needed.

Smiling, he nodded back at her before turning to Rukmani dadi, " I am sorry. But Anmol was wrong, he said he would do anything to hurt Naira and pungi to get back at them for the other day" he spoke without taking a breath, as he knew Rukmani dadi wouldn't allow him to speak if he stopped.

And right he was, " and we should trust you?"

Naira curled her fists. Those words touched a deep part inside her and unleashed old wounds again. She knew first hand that how distrust from family felt. She didn't want him to go through the same thing.

Would Rukmani daadi never change? How many times did Kartik had to prove that he deserved their trust, respect and love?

She was about to say as much, when he spoke, " Anmol was wrong. But I am sorry I yelled at him. and I will tell you how many ever times you want me to. Aap mujhse bade hai, daadi"

Naira smiled - so this was how he had made her family his - this was why everyone loved him - right from Mishti to Bhabhi Maa.

" mein tumhare daadi nani Hun. You are not family - no matter how much these people tell you. You are and always will be an employee. Never forget that"

Naira didn't remember being so angry. " ENOUGH"

Startled Rukmani daadi turned to her, she was aware of Kartik giving her a surprised looked, shaking his head, urging her to stop.
She chose to ignore him, and focused her attention on Rukmani daadi, "till how long will you spew venom Rukmani daadi?" She asked and was met by equal parts shock and anger.

" stay in your limits, Naira" she warned

Naira chuckled humourlessly, " we have been taught to respect elders daadi, but we have also been taught to stand up for what is right, today, Kartik is"

" really?? You want to support him - him - a stranger, instead of your own cousin, your own family?"

" Kartik is family"

" of course, what would you know about family you were the one who ran away"

Ouch. All these years and it still hurt. Naira looked away immediately, even as tears stung her eyes. Everything flashed before her eyes like it had happened yesterday. Suddenly feeling suffocated, she ran outside, wanting some fresh air.

" Naira!" Kartik called, turning around to watch her run into the garden. His heart sank. He didn't know what had happened all those years back, but he knew that the broken bond was slowly forming again, Naira was slowly warming up back into the family. She was beginning to really belong.
And all that had gone down the drain. Because of him.

He clenched his jaw and turned to Rukmani daadi, " I am sorry daadi. My mistake, sorry" not waiting for her response, he turned around to go look for Naira.

" sorry se kaam nahi Chalega. In logon ne Tujhey kuch zyaada he dheel dey Rakhi hai. Just because these people treat you like family, you take advantage of that. Not anymore. Let Akshara come. Get ready to say goodbye to your job and this family"

"fine" he muttered distractedly, turning around and walking out of the house and into the garden.

His job and this family - they were important to him. But there was someone more important to him than anything else in the world and she needed him right now.

Author notes

AN1 - ok the whole rukmani scene was very similar to episode i know. But i wrote it before i saw the episode and seems too much of a hassle to edit it out now. Sorry.


AN2 - the teaser will feature in the next part.

AN3 - do you feel the part is too choppy, i mean kartiks feeling nairas feeling. Too sudden?? Lemme know.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Andy, bharath and ashnokukreja - thanks for liking the teaser.
Andy - yep have planned an emotional showdown between KaIra where their feelings will come to the fore.

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