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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
kitne din baad u updated woww...
its just simple nd cute...
finally ak got freedom
hope she will enjoy well...
nd nk ki kya flashback reveal soon...
but update it too parallely
ak kitni boli hain nd simple hain
vish in firing nd kya kya soch raha hain...
waiting for backdrop story...
do update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

kitne din baad u updated woww...

its just simple nd cute...
finally ak got freedom
hope she will enjoy well...
nd nk ki kya flashback reveal soon...
but update it too parallely
ak kitni boli hain nd simple hain
vish in firing nd kya kya soch raha hain...
waiting for backdrop story...
do update soon...


yuhuuu atleast tu toh read ki yeh part 😳 thankuu so much for ur love nd support my princyu..
liffe main ups down sabke aati hai...i will show ki life change hoti hai but galti toh galti hai..
bas thodi ek part do ke bad i will show wat happened in nks life 😃 thanku so much for ur lovly comments..loved itt..
ak bhut sweet hai pata chalegga i will. write now this ff too.
soon i will update 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
after a long time finally you update it yipee m super happy 😛 very nice part nk character is good and interesting . .. first time ak is now free.. there is too much suspense but like it.. ak is so genuine like that she calls nk hritik.. story is going very well do update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

after a long time finally you update it yipee m super happy 😛 very nice part nk character is good and interesting . .. first time ak is now free.. there is too much suspense but like it.. ak is so genuine like that she calls nk hritik.. story is going very well do update next part soon


Aww thank god u read it 😃 thanku soo much..i thought to write this ff isme ak pyari si hai nk bhut sant sa alg sa .
Thanku so much for ur valueable comments so sweet 😃 ...
Amm pata chalega pura hope pasand aaye sabko mai try karugi aacha likhne ki..
I will try to update sooner soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Part-5
In morning:-...
Ak wokeup nd feeling cold...nk was working on hull..
Ak-hawww yaha kitni thand hain n...nk didnt give responce..amm...mujhe brush karna hain..
Nk-yaha rakha hain bahar nal main pani hain aap kar sakti hain..
Ak-kya baharrr.. 😃 ..mujhe kuch chahiye pehnne ko thand hain ..
Nk-aap yeh jecket pehen sakti hain...gave to her..
Ak-she took nd wore it..thanku hiritik...smile nd sees to nk..but nk went in kitchen..
Ak-yeh b n...bas chup chup...she went outside ...she felt to air...hmmm...waah kya hawa hain..thandi thandi...sees all over ..open green tree..grass ...
Meri brush...she starts brushing teeth...than everyone come in keet nd start working...ak did brush..
Ak-kheet main jau..she went near of women..yaha gumne layak kya hain aap batayegi..dey sees to her like stranger...kya hua aap sab mujhe itna gur kyo rahe ho..dey didnt anser..
Wo-chalo sab waha kam karte hain..sakal se masum aur kam dekho..dey leave from der..
Ak-kya hua..maine kya kiya..is duniya main sabujhse bat kyo nhi karte...she went back in house..nk put breakfast..
Ak was sad nk sees to her...mujhe yaha rehna hi nhi..yaha kya us mehel main bhi nhi aur is duniya main b nhi..sab bure h mujhse koi bat nhi karta..maa b nhi jab main choti thi chod ke chali gai..ek dai maa hi aachi hain..starts crying..koi batata b nhi ki kaha gumu ..
nk-woh aap bahar jayegi na left m jharna hain nadi ..aur thodi aage jayegi toh market aap waha se kapde le aaiyega..aur pure ket m gum lijiyega..mere pass itne hi paise h..gave to her..main apko woh mehnge kapde nhi dila sakta..
Ak-waaw..mujhe toh dresses lene se matlb hain..thankuuu...ab main khaugi ..she starts eating..waise apko hasi nhi aati khabhi.. 😲 ..
Nk-aap naha lijiye woh bathroom hain..
Ak-waaw...hmm...nice...aap bhi aayege..
Nk-kya shocked.
Ak-nhi..matlb meri jo dasi hain n woh mujhe nehlati hai rose water main aur milk bhi..aapko toh pata hoga b nhi ..kyoki yaha koi girl hai hi nhi..
Nk-app itna bolna kisse sikhi h ..apko irritation nhi hoti..
Ak-haa ek hi toh shok hain kul ke zindagi jine ka aaj tak bola na babasa ne suna na bhaisaa ne aur maa toh mere bopne se pehle hi chali gai..yaha gaw m b koi mujhse bat nhi karta...ek ful jo kilna chahta hain par meri daimaa kehti hain main kali hu jisko ek bhawra hi kilayega jo mera pati hoga..par kisi ko mere liye time hi nhi ..par mujhe koi mera time lene bhi toh nhi deta..
Nk-aap jo itni badi bat bol jati hain uska meaning bhi samjhati hai..khabhi khabhi khush rehna pyar karna jeher ban jata hain..m b kya bolu apko aapko toh kud pyar chahiye..naha lijiye phir aap saman le aaiyega...gum bhi lijiyega..
Ak-m aur kuch nhi janti daimaa par apka yeh farista mujhe aacha lagta hain..
After she took bath nd got ready ...
Ak-aap bhi chalege na..says to nk...
Nk-aap aajadi chahti h toh. Sabse pehle bahar jana sikhna hoga..
Ak-esse akle main gai nhi khabhi..
Nk-har pal apke sath koi nhi hoga...aajadi pane ke liye pehle khud ko aajad karna jaruri hain jo himat apko khud main lani hogi..main nhi hu har pal apki jindagi main..
Ak-she got chidchid..nhi ho means kya bhagwan ne hame milaya h toh koi toh maksad hoga hi n..kya pata badi..
Nk-choti..thode din ke liye bas..
Ak-main ja rahi gumne apne aap ko khush karne pehli bar bandan thod ke pyar se jine..she went outside.. Nd sees khet..yeh kya laga hain..touches green grass...
Waaw kitni aachi mosam hain..nice weather...oo waterfall...she sers nd went near of water..she touched water nd starts playing ...she was throwing water drops on her face..she sqeezing nd coughed a little..
Aahh mera gala main toh gili gili ho gai...waaw goat ...she went near of goat nd touched it...aajao aa jao aa jao..she was running behind ..waaw kitna maja aa raha..yeh freedom khabhi khatam na ho..i m vry vry vry hpy today..
Suddenly she sees to tree..kon hain waha..hloo koi hain kya...
She went near of tree but no one is here..kamal hai koi nhi hain..
Are mere paise ...hiritik ne bola tha ki aage market hain..dekhu kya..
She was going nd sees small market...footpath market...
Ak-waaw yeh small small shop..maine movie main dekha tha..went in shop..
Yeh dress kitne ki hain..
Shop-g aap kon..
Ak-main ak..mai rajjku..main n us gaw se aai hu..
Sh-par app toh kisi bade garane ki lag rahi apke kapde..
Ak-yeh toh mere mere..dost ne diye main uske sath gumne aai hu..
Sh-ooh..kya chahiye apko dekhiye yeh hain mere pass suit..
Ak-waaw yeh kitne ki hain..
Sh-400 ki..
Ak-mere pass toh...aap thoda sasta dikhaiye na..
Sh-aap yeh jeans le lijiye aur long kurti ..ek do jeans pe aap do char pehen sakti h..
Ak-haa..dedo..mere pass ek bhi dress nhi..aacha woh kya hain..
Sh-woh game hain..
Ak-waaw main kelugi...she took cloths nd went in other shop..
Ak-bhaiya mujhe yeh game kelna hain..
Sh-haa maam...yeh ring hain apko 10 m char dunga table par jo chize rakhi hai isme apko yeh ring dalni hai ..agar kisi ring m koi saman fas jayega toh woh chiz apki hogi..
Ak-sach..main kelugi...suddenly she sees to nk from small mirror behind her..
She turn nd sees to him but he hided to him...hiritik..
Sh-g ..
Ak-nhi kuch nhi..dijiye bhaiya mujhe ring..
shh-le lijiye...she was thinking wat u take...
she sees to nk in mirror..admiring to him...
ak-bhaiya jo chiz pe ring dalugi woh meri hogi kya...
sh-bilkul..
ak-he throwed ring on mirror but upss not put on mirror its went on side..she again throwing but missing it..
chii nisana nhi lag raha..
sh-har chiz pana itna aasan nhi...
ak-kosish toh ki ja sakti hain na...she was seeing to nk..
she again tried but it git missed..
sh-ek aakhiri aur..kuch aur le lijiye ..
ak-nhi mujhe yeh mirror hi chahiye...she again tried nd thowrd ...this time ring put on mirror..
yuhuuu 👏 ..dekha jo maine socha le liya..
he gave to her mirror...
ab pata chalega mere sath kaha tak aaoge...
she was walking nd seeing tto nk from mirror...but nk didnt see ...
she went near of tree ...
nk-yeh kahha ja rahi h. ...
ak-he was following to her...after that she sat on floor..
aahhh..chot aah..nk feared nd went close..
nk-kya hua apko..
ak sees to him..
ak-aap mujhe follow kar rahe..
nk-because aap meri responsibility hai ..
ak-ya aap meri care karte ho na..
nk was numb...
nk-nhi..itni dur mom ki gudiya ko lana tut gai toh..
ak-nhi..i m fff..she was coughing nd squeezed like hell.
nk-dikh raha..
ak-main use too nhhi n..doctor ko dikha denge..u know mehel m toh sab char panct doctor ko le aate..
nk-mere pass ek bhi nhi..
ak-aap ho na..mujhe doctor nhhi koi essa insan chahiye jo mere pass baithe...
nk-gghar chaliye..sam hone wali hain...
duy returns house...
nk was not in house ..ak was waiting..she was seeinng to mirror..
ak-waaw yyeh itna pyara lagg raha...hiritik meri sunta b h care b karta hain..thanku god mujhe wohh dene ke lihe..bas thoda sad sad hain khush karna padega mujhe .aache se bat kare to. na..woh itna sarmata kyohai budduram..suddenly nk heart it..aa gye smile aap...
nk-haa apki teb aur khana..
ak-meri nose red ho gai aur gale m dard ho rahi bhut..
nk-mujhe pata tha yeh lijye...
ak was taking dinner...
suddenly she was cousing...nk saw nd gave water ...
ak-are main thik hu thoda sa jayada bol deti hu toh essa..again she starts coughing..
nk pressed her back..ak felt a attachment..
nk-itna bhi kyo bolti hain ki problems ho khane main aaram se plzz...apko khana khana hain na..essa na ho khana hi. apko kha le..
ak-smile tqq...m fine...
nk sees nd took back his hand..
nk-hmm...ab aap so lijiye...
ak-gudnyt..
nk-gudnyt..he went in his room...in nyyt she hhug to mirror..
ak-nind nhi aa rahi...kya karu ..amm..haa uske room main jauuu..
she swlly swlly went in nks room..
ak-hawww so raha kkya...she went near ..kitna sweet sa lag raha ekdom bacho tipe...but yeh rotu rotu kyo hai..pata nhi nnam kya hain hasta hoga toh kaisa lagta hoga 😲 ...she put her hand near of nks lips nd made smile on his face..haa ..par nhi yeh kud se hasega toh hi maja aayega pata nhi kyo nhi hasta h ...haso na ...
suddenly nk held her hand...she felt his touch...
yeh kya ho raha mujhe bas mujhe apke pass aacha lagg raha yaha na koi datne wala h na koi sun ke ansuni karne wala chota sa house..m soo hpy...sshh..solo haa...
she went nd took sleep..
in morning...nk wakeup ...
nk-he wakeup nd sees somthing on his bed...yeh kya hain...earring...woh yaha aai thi par kyo ..kahi usne mere room main sari pic toh nhi dekh li..nhi abhi tak badbad karne lag jati..
haa nhi ..m dekhu..he went in hull nd sees to ak ..uthi nhi abhhi tak yeh..
nk-ak g ...shout...but she didnt wakeup..
nk put his hand on her shoulder...it was hottt..
nk-yeh garam kyo h itni...he touched aks head oo god isse toh bhut tej bhukar ho gaya hain [: 😲 ..
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so guyzz sry for late update...plzz press like button if u like this part nd gave comments...
i m waiting...i will told about past soon..plz stay with thhis story..tqq for ur time..
sry for mistakes 😳
precap-nk care for ak...nd she danced also in village.
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
nice part.. nk gives ak freedom and she enjoyed it alot.. and he did her care well with becoming her mirror 😊in night ak goes to nk room that was also a very nice scene. . ak has fever waiting to see how nk will care ak ... precap is superb waiting for next part do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice part.. nk gives ak freedom and she enjoyed it alot.. and he did her care well with becoming her mirror 😊in night ak goes to nk room that was also a very nice scene. . ak has fever waiting to see how nk will care ak ... precap is superb waiting for next part do update soon


thhanku so much misri for ur love i cant express it 😊 .
it means alottt 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
it was nice part..
specially i liked last scene ak going in mela nd nk following her...
ak got freedom nd enjoying it...
her playing nd talakative nature is so cool...
i dont wanna say much as story is slowly builduping now only...
wid parts i will say more...
nice update i liked aks character so much
reveal nk backdrop soon...
ak got fever nd how nk tc of her waiting to read it.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

it was nice part..

specially i liked last scene ak going in mela nd nk following her...
ak got freedom nd enjoying it...
her playing nd talakative nature is so cool...
i dont wanna say much as story is slowly builduping now only...
wid parts i will say more...
nice update i liked aks character so much
reveal nk backdrop soon...
ak got fever nd how nk tc of her waiting to read it.. :)


thankuuu so much princyuuu for ur love nd support 😊 ...
i was waiting 😭 thought no wen u will do comments...
butt tqqq so much ..dont worry soon i will try to write this story 😃 ..

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