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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Sunday pappu
Do update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

Happy Sunday pappu
Do update next part soon

okeei..MSI ghar jakar update karti hu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part...5..
Naitik wipe his tears...thinking why he felt bad due to akshara's word...( but before he could say anything...someone knock at the door...
naitik came and open the door...
nk- bhabhi maa aap...kuch kaam tha toh mujhe bula leti..
bm- bahu kaha hai munna...?
nk- washroom me...aap aaiye andar...
bm- nahi beta...aisa kar tu aur bahu dono fresh hokar neeche aa jao..kuch kaam hai...
nk-ji...
bm went from there...and naitik again came in room fr taking his towel and clothes..
when akshara too came outside from bathroom...wearing a bathrob and drying her hair...
both came in front of each other...( par dono ko samajh nahi aata ki kaun pehle nikle )...
so naitik ek gentleman ki tarah akshara ko side deta hai...and went to bathroom..
here akshara came infront of mirror...( ofcourse in an irritating mood )
ak- samajhte kya hai khud ko..na jaane kis baat ka itna ego..
she dried her hair...take out a red saari from her bag...and about to open her bathrob...when she remembered that this is not her room...where she is alone...
but in this new room there is no changing room...
ak( shout )- yaha changing room kaha hai...?
naitik uski awaaz ek baar me sun jaata hai...par reply karna zaroori nahi samajhta...
ak- aap ne andar suna nahi..Maine poocha ki changing room kaha hai...?
nk- mujhe nahi pata...kyunki mujhe kabhi zaroorat nahi padi...
ak- toh mai kaha change karu..?
nk- poora ghar pada hai...kahi bhi kar lo...
ak ( angrily)- disgusting...
she thought to change her clothes quickly in same room..
she took atleast ten minutes to wear clothes except the saari...but tried many time to wear it..( par har baar apne aapko saare me pack kar leti..)
here naitik came out from bathroom..and saw akshara...who was still loss in saare...
naitik cleared his throat " ahem...ahem..."
akshara quickly turn to the other side...and naitik turn other side..
ak- WO..mai..mujhe...
nk- its OK...jaldi ready ho...bm ne bulaya..
( itna kehkar he take his shirt and went outside...)
bm did all preparation for naksh...
naitik came down and take bm's blessings...
bm- bahu...?
nk- bm...WO abhi tak ready nahi hi nahi hui...
bm- koi pareshaani hai kya...mai jaati hu...
when she saw that akshara is coming down...wearing a red colour saare...with a light work border...really looking like a newly wedd bride...
she came with a weak smile on her face...and take blessings from bm...
bm- khush raho beta...tum dono ki jodi hamesha aise hi bani rahe...
naksh look at each other...
bm- par bahu tune apna sindoor nahi lagaya...
ak( thinking)- jab pati patni ka koi rishta hi nahi toh jhoota dikhawa kyu karu...
ak- Ji bhabhi maa...WO yaad nahi raha...
bm- ye toh bahut acchi baat hai bahu ki tu bhool gayi sindoor lagana...
tabhi naitik ka call aata hai..
and he went to other side..
ak- Ji MATLAB...mai samjhi nahi...
bm- beta hamare yaha rasam hai ki shadi ke agle din hi naye dulha dulhan...kuldevi ke madir jaate hain..aur ghar ke bete wahi par apni patniyo ki maang bharte hain..
naitik came there..." bhabhi maa mai office ja raha hu..."
bm- bilkul nahi...aaj tu kuldevi ke madir jayega...
nk- theek hai office se nikal jaunga...
bm- aur bahu bhi jayegi...
nk-toh phir aap bhi chaliye...
bm- pagal...mai kya karoongi...tum bacche jao..ek doosre ke saath samay bitaao...
ak- pls bm aap bhi aaiye..
bm- phir kabhi bahu...abhi tum dono jao..aur ha bina darshan kiye aur bahu ki maang bhare tum dono kuch nahi khaoge...samjhe..khaaskar munna tu..
nk- Ji bhabhi maa..par ghar aate hi mujhe aapke haath ka khana khana hai..ok..
bm- theek hai..
both bid good bye ! to bhabhi maa...
akahara and naitik were in car..both were not talking to each other...
akshara window se bahar dekh rahi thi..while naitik was looking at her time to time...
nk..( start humming...) mere saamne wali khidki me ek chaand ka tukda rehta rehta hai...
akshara gives him a stare this time...
nk- lagta hai...Mrs.singhania ko gana pasand nahi aaya...?
akshara without answering look away...
nk( again to tease her )- afsoos ye hai ki wo hum se kuch ukhda ukhda rehta hai...( akshara look at him again ...totally annoyed )
ak- pls aap bakwaas band karenge...mera sir dard ho raha hai...
naitik stop his car quickly..." lijiye band kar Diya..."
ak- Maine car nahi aapka besura song band karne ke liye kaha...
nk- really ?
ak- yes...
naitik smiles at her...
ak- kya ab hum chal sakte hai...?
nk- hum..? why not..( he smirks )
both again became silent...
and after a long journey...they reached at the kuldevi temple...
Edited by hirannaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both came outside from the car...and looked at the temple's height...
naksh together..." baap re itni door "...with this shock reaction they look at each other...
nk- mai...mai...pooja ka samaan lekar aata hu...
ak- hmmm...
naitik waha se chala jaata hai..par akshara wahi uske aane ka wait karti hai...
but suddenly...
someone..." hello my love..."
akshara quickly recognise his voice...and turned happily..." Samar.."
she hold his hand...
ak- tum yaha...( with a bright smile on her face.. )
sm- tumhara peecha kar raha tha...
ak- itna pyaar karte ho mujhse..
sm- bahut...btw tumhara pati kaha hai..?
ak( sadly)- pooja ka samaan lene gaye hain...
sm- ohh !..toh thoda time tum mere saath bita sakti ho...ye dekho mai tumhare aur apne liye kuch laya hu...
ak- kya ?
sm- tumhare favourite pancake...
ak- wow !...
sm- ye lo jaldi se kha lo...
akshara quickly take one piece...and about to eat...when she stop in her way..
sm- kya hua..? khao NA..
ak- nahi...wo pooja ke bina nahi kha sakti...
sm- aree kha lo isse tumhare rishte par kya fark padega...aakhir ek na ek din toh tum dono ko alag hona hai..aur meri akshara ko meri pass aana hai...
ak- haa...par thode time nahi khaungi toh kya fark padega..
sm- OK...as ur wish...mai hi kha leta hu...
he quickly ate one pancake...
sm- accha..mai mandir me jata hu...taaki tumhe bhagwaan se sabse pehle maang saku...
ak( smile)- OK...
sm- bye...!
here akshara was about to walk a step...when her leg got twist..
ak- aahhh - mera pair ( leg)..
she sat there on a stair..
when naitik came there with flowers and all pooja stuffs...
nk- chaliye...madam..inn 200 seediyo ko paar karne ke liye..
ak( angrily)- chal rahi hu...har baat par order zaroori hai kya...?
nk- aree Maine kab...?..dekho mai yaha koi scene create nahi karna chahta...
akshara angrily get up...and try to walk...but she can't..
naitik notice this...
nk- kya hua ?
ak- kuch nahi..
naitik turned and walk on atleast seven stairs...par akshara abhi bhi first stair par hi khadi thi...
but this time naitik became irritated...he again came down...
nk- ye lo ise pakdo...
he handover all frowers and pooja stuff to akshara...
nk- jaanta hu...ki aap mujhse apni koi problem share nahi Karna chahti...its good..because I am not interested...
ak- toh phir wapas kyu aaye..
nk- kyunki naitik singhania ko time waste karna nahi pasand...
akshara couldn't understand anything...and within a second naitik hold her patli kamariya...and take her in his arms..
ak- rehne dijiye...mai khud hi chal loongi...utariye mujhe...
but naktik is naitik...wo kaha kisi ki sunne wala tha...poore time akshara usse ek hi baat kehti rahi...par koi faida nahi hua...
he take her in the temple...where all people start looking at this beautiful couple..
naksh look in eachother eyes...
but ringing bells brought them in reality...
naitik...akshara ko neeche utaarta hai...
pandit Ji did pooja for r...and gave naitik a box of sindoor...and asked naitik to fill akshara's maang...and put teeka on her forehead..
naitik took a lot of sindoor...and filled akshara's maang fully from starting to end..
akshara closed her eyes...
and now..
pandit Ji asked akshara to put her forehead's teeka on naitik's forehead...
firstly akshara was hesitated to do this rasam...
nk- rehne dijiye pandit Ji..agar ye nahi karna chahti..mai karu ya ye ek hi baat hai...
naitik holds akshara in his arms again and take her near the car...and make her sit in the car..
he too sat beside her..and about to start the car...when ..
ak- naitik..
but he didn't reply...
ak- mai jaanti hu ki Maine Jo kiya..WO sahi nahi tha...par mai WO kaam kabhi nahi karti jo dil se na kar pau...
nk- toh phir aapka dil kya chahta hai akshara...?
ak- divorce...aur kisi ke liye job..
... ...
so friends hope u all like this part...
thanks for reading...
Edited by hirannaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
kisi ne padha ya nahi
Maine new part likh diya behnoo...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nk ke tears...
Ak ke saree trouble
Both are awkward
Yeh samar kab peecha chodega
But uski vjah se ak ka foot twist hua
And nk takes Her in his strong arms
Ak ki straight demand...
Story is becoming interesting day by day
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part sonal...
Ak ki saree drapping...
Nk sang song omg...
But dis is first time where ak is so serious nd nk jovial
Samar ufff
Rasam nd nk care for ak is awesome
Ak ne ye kya maangli haaye... :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update sonal
nk cried aww
ak ki saree drapping
nk ka song lol
samar uff ye kb picha chodega
bt nk took ak in his arms remind me of kuldevi track in serial luvd it
nk fill ak mang nice
bt ye kya demand kr di ak ne
waiting for nxt part
Edited by deepshikan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nk ke tears...
Ak ke saree trouble
Both are awkward
Yeh samar kab peecha chodega
But uski vjah se ak ka foot twist hua
And nk takes Her in his strong arms
Ak ki straight demand...
Story is becoming interesting day by day

thank u so much nidhi fr ur sweet comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

Nice part sonal...
Ak ki saree drapping...
Nk sang song omg...
But dis is first time where ak is so serious nd nk jovial
Samar ufff
Rasam nd nk care for ak is awesome
Ak ne ye kya maangli haaye... :(

thank u Happu...fr liking this part and fr ur precious comment..
and yes aaj jaise yaha par tumne sonal likha hai...pls ab hamesha yahi naam likhns...kyunki ur pappu or cryu is dead...ok

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