naksh ff: DOSTI AND LOVE part 29 on page 108

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

PART-3

they both get lost in each other eyes...

suddenly both comes in reality and

ak:teri itni himmat hain ki tum baar baar u fall on me?????

nk:hello ms.kitpit mein nahi u always fall on me...

dekho now also u were on me...

ak:she realises that she is top of him so fastly gets up...

nk:uffo yeh kitni moti hain ...

ak:kya bola?????

nk:kuch nahi...

ak:gets angry adn pulls and doll and leaves...

now both silently fixes their things n hall ...

but there was only one bedroom...

ak fights i am girl tho i will sleep in bedroom...

nk:tho kya if u r girl aisa kuch nahi chalega u sleep in hall i will in bedroom...

they both fight u me u me for a long time...

both gets throat pain and will be heavily breathing...

nk:fine...

ak:tqq..

nk:oh hello ms.kitpit wait a sec

ak:wat?

nk:i didnt say u take bedroom...

everythingis half half tho bedroom alsowill be equally shared...

ak:matlab???

hw dare u say like dis??????

nk:just holdur tongue...

let me finish...

ak:kya?

nk:there are two beds na...

ak:yes...

nk:so we will separate it... and u sleepon ur bed and me on mine...

ak:fine ab kaha phas gayi mein...

nk:better...

both go in room and separate the bedss...

nk:ab roz iski chehra dekhna padega subah subah...

ak:ak gets super angry...

so she places the tea poy in between beds...

and hangs curtains between the two beds...

now fine...

ab woh hissa is urs and this is mine...

never dare to comeon my side...

nk:mujhe koi shauk nahi hain...

ak:hehe(angry smile)..

its late upto they fix beds..both feels hungry...

but first ak goes and prepares sandwiches...

she knows cooking but nk knows only some cooking...

nk feels hungry ak notices it...

and offers him her sandwich...

nk:tqq i dont want...

ak:kitni akdoo ho...

fine and she eats hers...

but she keeps one for nk in kitchen...

both falls asleep soon as they were tired...

bedroom like was hell with their things here and there and some mixed up...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

it was 12 am in midnight...

nk feels xtreme hungry and goes in kitchen...

actually he didnt bring any of utensils required to cook...

whereas ak bought required items to cookk...

he goes in kitchen and drinks water wen he finds sandwich der which ak left...

he feels dat much hunger dat he finishes it within 1 min...

his aatmaram got satisfied and went to sleep...

but before when he was eating ak saw him chupke se egoistic fellow...

both slept and it became mng...

both were sleeping peacefully as they both were tired of journey...

it was 8 am...

ak slightly open her eyes and sees her mobile...

and shouts oh shittt !!!

nk wakes up by her shouting...

nk:wat happened...

ak:sry actually its 8 and my clg is at 9 am...

nk:also ge tpaniced as his clg also is at same time...

both runs here and there to get ready for their first day of college...

ak sees nk trouser mixed in her dresses and nk finds aks petticoat mixed in his dresses...

both gives same expression chiii...

ye sab kya hain... yakkk...

both to each other...

wat is dis????

cant u keep ur things in place ha chii wat type of human r u and all bak bak... suddenly both phones rings and they get into reality and again runs here and there and finally gets ready by 8:30...

as it was first day of college both tried their best in getting ready...

both wore jeans and t-shirt...

they were looking stunning and compelmenting each other...

they strts to clg without breakfst as there was no time...

ak calls a taxi and it stops she forgot something and checks her purse meanwhile nk sits in car and says tq and the car wad driven away...

ak gets super angry...

but its getting late so ak calls another car and goes in it...

both go in clg and fills admission form...

both sees the beauty of university and admires it...

its time for class so both go to their respective classes...

nk goes first and sit according to their admission nos...

he was busy at looking in the class...

ak was lill late so she was in so much tension dat she came and sat in her place hurriedly...

she didnt notice anyone...

the lecture starts...

the lecturer starts the class and instructs them to make a copy...

ak pen doesnt work so she shakes it...

some ink splashes on the person beside her she was abt to say sryy wen her face was filled with shock...

same as the boy...

by:tum?

ak:tum?????

by:tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???

ak:pehle ye bataao tum mere next seat pe kya kar rahi ho?

by:i came to watch film here...

ak:so funny...

by:i never knew dat the globe is so round dat u were my benchmate...

ak:yes me also thinks the same...

by:tho just go away na...

ak:mr.angru?? she shouts...(i know u all know pehle ki the boy is none other dan nk 😆😆)

nk:ms.kitpit by shouts

whole class watches dem...

the sir sees both of dem and says get out u both from my class...

both comes in reality...

and sees each other face with shock and realize wat dey have done 😆

so guys this is my next part...

do pls giveur comments...

hpe cryu i tried to cover my mistakes dis time...

and sweetu may be dis part is lill long which u wanted...

waiting for all ur reviews on dis part...

pls do press like button 😊

once again tq all my frnds for ur support...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

new part on page 8 nd 9 is updated...

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Waaw princess kya part tha dear bhut maja aaya pad k yr 👏nice nd full of entertaining part princess ...like natik ka gussa nd akshi ka for each waaw ..aww thats so sweet akshi put sandw😆R😆😆ich for natik so nice...

But ek bedroom mai naksh omg ..gr8 nd ha morning scene chii 😆😆nd clg mai expression was hilarious ..mast part ...with cutee fights ..

Tqq for updating nd haa do update next part tomorrow dear😳

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

very cute part happu...
start to end everything is perfect...
naksh ki fight for bedroom...and then their bed seperation...too cute :)
and sadwich ki bhook...poor naitik ego me zyada mat raho...
their college scene too good...
and ya u did it very well...and perfectly written...
do update next part soon...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh
Waaw princess kya part tha dear bhut maja aaya pad k yr 👏nice nd full of entertaining part princess ...like natik ka gussa nd akshi ka for each waaw ..aww thats so sweet akshi put sandw😆R😆😆ich for natik so nice...
But ek bedroom mai naksh omg ..gr8 nd ha morning scene chii 😆😆nd clg mai expression was hilarious ..mast part ...with cutee fights ..
Tqq for updating nd haa do update next part tomorrow dear😳

tqqq so much sweetuu... 😊

sure i will update soon...

loved dat u liked it alot...

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
very cute part happu...
start to end everything is perfect...
naksh ki fight for bedroom...and then their bed seperation...too cute :)
and sadwich ki bhook...poor naitik ego me zyada mat raho...
their college scene too good...
and ya u did it very well...and perfectly written...
do update next part soon...

tqq so much cryuuu...

m so happy dat all my frnds are liking my work...

tqq all for ur support.. 😊