pritu's ff !~KISMAT CONNECTION~! pt33/147 - Page 63

Originally posted by: karanhina

finally finally finally I read all the parts...
and it is mindblowing ruchi and pranu...
u both did an excellent work...
but special mention to naksh romance...which was really passionate...
hope mai bhi aisa likh paau...
but yaar seriously loving this story...
awesome..
..

Aww thanku so much ayshi finely u gave comment nd thanku for liking our ff...aww u liked story ..thanku for loving comments. .i will try my best 😊

Originally posted by: --pranu--

aisa kuch nai

i will tell u na

i gave u some suggestions nd said to stop some na wen i felt so???

mujhpe trust rakho😃

Haa tere hi bharose itni aage aai warna kab ka ff band kar di hoti.. 😳

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Arre nhi vulgar ho rha daddi amma don't worry
😊 😊

lo nidhi ab mai bhi ak dadi ki age mai aa gai... 🤣

Originally posted by: --pranu--

ithu sa bhi patience nahi madam pe😃

Ayushi ye sab nhi hai yr..mai thanku to bolti hi..ye sare naksh fans ko wait karna to ata hi nhi 🤣 😳

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Aur hame jo ek update k liye itnaaa
wait krwati ho uska kya

Intjar ka fal mitha hota hai nidhi 😉

Pleaseee update this ff
Really excited for further story

Part-22
She is going exept that nk will tell something but no...she went outside...shivu said bye to all..nk said bye to shivu..but couldn't to ak..
Now dey reached in home...shivu took to bebo..nd was busy to play with bebo..
Than dev came near to her...nd passed smile. .
De-tu kush hai na...us din tere aavaj mai ek alg hi chamak thi...aaj tere chahre ka ye rang sab kucch bol raha ..dekh to kitni pyari lag rahi hai...nk ne tujhe apna ke sabit kar diya wo kitna aacha hai...
Ak-feeling like cry but didnt show...haa maa ...aap kush hai na ..
Dev-tujhe dekh ke mai bhut kush hu..
Ak-mai bhi maa..bhut kush hu bhut bhut nd hug to her..tears came from eyes...but she wipe..mai aati hu ma..
She went in room...nd crying on bed...holding pillow. .
Ak-kya mai sach mai kuch nhi ek bar bye ...kuch bola tak nhi...kya aap mujhse khabhi pyar nhi karege..kyo mere itne pass aaye kaise samjau is dil ko mai...kya apko koi pain ho raha hai..
Here nk..came in room with sad face...he dont know but he missed to her so much..somewer..
Nk-ye room kitni suni ho gai hai ..shivu ke bina aur stop...mai ye sab kya...nd opened cupboard. .ye kya saw yes ot was her cupboard. ..saw no one is here...he was so worried. .
Saw all dorror...nd here was nothing. .
Nk-amma amma...in upstairs. ..than all r coming ladies. .
Gy-what happened kitna koi chilata hai kya. .
Nk-wo ak ki dresses nhi hai...koi saman bhi nhi hai..wo kya hamesha ke liye chali gai nhi aaygi khabhi..
All ladies laugh ..
Gy-haa chinna...she was so sad nd said she will not adjest anything with u ...wo to gai..
Nk-kkya...par ..esse kaise...nd sadly went in room..
Gy-are ye chinna..but rashmi stop to her..
Ras-amma pls dont...it will be great fun na...inko bhi tadapne do na thoda wo allke kyo tadpe.
Gy-par..
Here nk was so sad nd sat on bed..
Nk-usne mujhe batati bhi nhi aur wo chali gai..esse kaise ja sakti hai..boli nhi...i hurt to her so much..
Thhan he is going to take bath...nd came in room...nd put hand on bed but here is nothing. ...
Nk-mweri clothes ..are ak ne nhi ..wo to hai hi nhi..he took cloth nd got ready for breakfast. .
In table. ..
Gy3 serve to him...he saw ak stood nd giving food to him...
Nk-surprised. ..dekhi tumm aa gai na...nd eating. ..mere bina kaha reh pati ...chalo ...nd turnn...
Gy3 is here no ak...
Gy-chinna..u want something. .
Nk-ak..
Everyone saw nd laughing. ..nhi wo bas kuch nd ate...what is this...dis is so bad ..mujhe nhi khani..
Nd went..
Dj-what happened to chinna...why he is behaving like dis..
In office. .
He saw still not happy..
Manager came nd gave file to him..but by mistake he took second file..
Nk is reading file...
Nk-vry shouting. .kya hai ye haa...kuch samaj aati nhi...maine tumse malhotra ki file mangi nd yha ki power file u gave to me...kisi ko kuch pata hai ya nnhi sab bas mannmani kar lo...kuch bolo mat ..mujhe ..mai kon hu na...Manager want to say something but he is continuing shouts. .
Everyone saw from door..what happened to him...
Man-sir pls stop ...apne second wali file uthai hai actual file to ye hai...
Nk-saw..oo i m sry..meri dhayan nhi thi...m really sry..
Ma-its oki sir ...i cann understood. ..mem se fight ho gai nd wo chali gai..
Nk-how u know. .haa yahi hui...par ...
Man-kuch bhi ho husbands ko hi last mai manna padta hai..dont worry aap jjayge to wo man jaygi..
Nk-nhi..mai kyu jaugi ..i will not go..she didnt tell anything. ..mai nhi..
Now inn night ...he came in house he was so sad no exicment in his face like no one is here for him..gy3 saw nd thought she wil told ..
Nk-sat in chair. ..
Gy-chinna r u sad ..haa..
Nk-haa wo...came in sence...nhi amma no ...i m hpy..
Gy-kisse se chupa raha mujhse..haa...ak aa jaygi hum to majak kar rahe the...
Nk-kya..hpy...dekhi maine boli na..par koi manti nhi...mujhse dur kaise reh...nd sttoped. ..bhuk lagi amaa..pls khana de do..
Gy-smile man ja chinna u r missing to her so much...
Nk-nhi ..mujjhe shivu ki yad aa rahi...
Gy-than call to her...nd ask from her howz she nd shivu..
After having dinner in room..
He is seeing to cell..nd went in content but cut...
Nk-nhi ...kahi buri lagi to..
here ak...is seeing to cell phone nd so sadly saw to pics of his nd her..than shivu came in room..
Shi-mamma...waaw ap kitni preety lag rahi ho..dost ki call nhi aai..apke pass...mujhe unse bat karni hai dona phone..
Ak-nhi beta ...wo so rahe honge kitne din bad chain se...unko disturb mat karo..
Shi-oki..mamma ..nd he slept ..but she is caressing his hair nd unable to sleep..
Now next day ...
Again nk is feeling vry low...in dinning table...
Gy3 gave food to him...nd nk took but didbt like..
Nk-what happened amma whats this...mujhe nhi aachi lagi..kya bana diya hai ye..aap ye ak thi to kitna nice food milta tha now again boring food..
Dj-china whats dis...tumhara man nhi lag raha hai to jao bahu se mil aao...par esse roj shout mat karo..yesterday i heard that u shouted on manager ..behaviour aachi rakho..
Nk-wo sry dad...i will ..
Nd went..
More parts coming soon

In way..
Nk-what happened to me..esse kyo bol rahi..esde lag rahi jaise mujhe kuch aacha nhi lagti ..kyo kar rahi...mujhe kuch karni hogi...kisse puchu kya ho gai hai mujhe..
Than he saw to ak nd shivu...in side..of road...both r doing masti...
Nk-smile. ..ak...shivu...nhi dono ko enjoy karne du...nd admiring to both..
Ak-beta aap bas aur mat kudo esse road mai...jo balloons lene hai ek bar mai dekh lo..
Sh-ha mamma leta hu ye wali...nd ak is giving money here nk is going nd shivu shouted dost ..he didnt listen..
Ak-kya hua apko..
Sh-wo dekho dost ...dekha nhi...:(
Ak-ya dekh ke bhi anjan ban gaye honge..chalo..
Sh-nhi mamma dost bhut aache hai..
Here nk ...is so hpy to see ak...in office also he was so hpy...every staff is so surprised to saw to nk..
Said-what happened kal tak gussa aaj kush..
Nk-he did work..nd went in home ...nd again felt sad...
Gy3 saw his face...nd thinking that he is sad because ak is not here..
Day passed ...some ...
Ak is doing work..nd in tv playing music. ..d song playing resam si hai ye hawaye sanam...she heard dis song. ..nd remembering that days eith nk...nd crying. ..
Ak-meri umid hi tod di apne nk...kaise samjhau kud ko ki aap mujhse pyar nhi karte ...kaise ..kyo itna rula rahe..y meri life mai aaye ...aap. .
Here nk was losting his sence nd again nd again thought about her only...in room he is searching some file..
Nk-wer is my file...amma...shouting. .my file kab se koji ..mai but kisi ko kuch karni nhi..blue colour ki hai..koi meri care karti nhi aap kitni care karti thi ab aap ak sab mujhse koi pyar nhi karti...
Gy-what happened with u ...20 days ho gai..esse hi khabhi khane ke liye khabhi file ke liye khabhi kisi ke liye bas shout karni hai ...chidchid karni hai..why u r behaving like this..ak will come in one month na now...kitni bar bola go nd meet but nhi..ye dekho file bed par from half hours i puted but ..u know chinna tujhse jayada janti hu tumhe ...ye hal nhi tha khabhi u r missing to her so much...
Nk-didnt say anything ..i dont know amma...mujhe samaj hi nhi aa rahi what happened to me...i want time only...nd leave..here ak was also sad so much..
Nd doing all household work..
Song played...dil mera tod diya usne bura kyo manu ...(saw to entrance nd waiting for nk)..usko hak hai wo mujhe pyar kare ya na kare (saw to cell phone nd crying )..dil mera tod diya usne bura kyo manu...

Pehle malum na tha aaj maine samjha (thought about smp)..pyar kehte hai jisse wo hai dilo ka soda...dil ke dahadkan ko bhala kaise roke kaise kaid kare..yeh to aajad hai jab jaha aahhe bhare...uske raste mai khade kyo khoye dewar kare (cut dates on calender )...usko hak hai wo mujhe pyar kare ya na kre...dil mera tod diya usne bura kyo manu...nd crying on bed. .
Now after 15 days...
Nk is searching his shirt in cupboard. .now he got one bag..
Nk-ye kya hai...open that bag...her was one watch...which he liked in Switzerland. ..
Ye kaise aa gai maine to yaha dekhi hi nhi...but..latter...ye open it...
Mai janti hu ap sochege ki ye watch kaha se aur kaise aai ...par ye maine kharidi thi kyoki apne like ki...jisse mai apko deke apni life ki nai suruwat karna chahti thi...par kash us din apne mujhe kuch bolne diya hota...kya mera dil kuch nhi...apne to bat karni aur raste hi alg kar diye...par phir bhi ab aap kush aur aache se rahiye mere bina nk...i m sry for hurting to u ...bye nk...jo mai bol pai sayad mera ye latter bol de...bye..
Ue sab kya ...likha hai..
Mai kisse help lu..are haa smile..
more parts coming soon

Now he call to someone...yes of course to mohit...he came in home...
Nk was sad ...so sad...mohit saw his rotu face...nd laugh..
Mo-dost dost na raha pyar pyar na raharaha 😆 ...
Nk-saw with anger...whats this..haa..maine is liye bulai tujhe...meri problems ko slove kar..phir..
Mo-mai kya police hu haa..chal bata ...why u r so sad...face dekh kaisa ho gya hai..ekdom rotu rotu tipe...
Nk-wo pata nhi i dont know..see this latter..ak ne likhi ise..i cant understood what she want..
Mo-ruk mai na apne jasusi wale dimag se teri problem slove karta hu..
Nk-haa..mohit is reading to latter...now he gave glear look to him...what happened between both of u..ye bata because ak bhabhi is so sensitive kuch nhi karegi...magar tu..
Nk-haa wo ...told about frdship gumna than drink nd after that all morning. ..nd now watch...
Mo-pagal stupid ...stupidity ki had hai..tu ye sab karke bat karna bhi band kar diya...nd now latter tu itna bada business kaise samlata hai...company duba to nhi dega na tu..
Nk-why..
Mo-kuch dino se kuch aacha nhi lagta na work na khana bas chilla ...hena..
Nk-smile. ..haa..
Mo-bhut anib no nind no think..
Nk-haa..
Mo-ak bhabhi ki yad man karta hai bat karu.
Nk-haa.thoughts nhi..
Mo-kisko bewakuf bana raha mujhe bhabhi ko ya kud ko...u saw ki wo teri wajah se cry ki..kya usne gussa kiya tujhe mana kiya kisi chiz ke liye..
Nk-nhi...par mai bolugi to usse hurt..
Mo-aacha tera na bolna tod chuka hoga usko...tu usse pyar karne laga hai..
Nk-kya love..what rabish..
Mo-kya what what hold his hand...dis is true ..tu ek hasband ban ke soch...us bechari ko kya mila is bich..tune uski mang bhari ..shadi ki..usne haa bola ek bacha jisse usne paida nhi kiya par maa ki tarah pyar kiya...tujhe accept kiya...wo bbhut aachi hai..ek ladki apna dil bhut jaldi har jati hai..mai ye isliye bol sakta hu..kkyoki i did love with nannu...par tu...soch jara ek aakdu ki tarah nhi ek pati ki tarah ...u r love with her so much..
Nk-)-cant understood. ..wo..
Mo-kya bolu kya puchu...mai chalta hu aacha hua bechari yaha nhi hai warna aur tut jati..tu bas chup reh kuch mat kar...himat hai to accept this love nd go nd take back to ur life again. .i m going. .
..he went...
Nd nk is thinking his words.
Nd nk-love ak se...mai nd thinking previous. ..smile came on his face...ak pyar...i love with ak...kya...mujhe pyar..
Ye kab kaise...smile itni ajib lag rahi soch soch ke...omg...
saw to ak...in front of his...
ak-nk...
Nk-tum aa gai..
Ak-mai gai kaha thi yahi ...thi to yahi..
nk-kaha ...
ak-came close touches to his chest...tumhare dil mai...
Nk-haa...hold his hand ..i m sry..mujhe maf karo pls...ab to yahi rahoge na..
...
Ak-smile..nodded no...nd going away..
Nk-worried ak...ak...ak...nhi...she is going away. ..ak...ak..
She went...
Nk-ak mat jao...nd he went in hall ak..ak..
Gy3 came. ..
Gy-what happened. ..why ak..
Nk-wo thi gai..
Gy-what happened with u chinna...tu usse itna pyar karta hai to go now 7 8 days hai jao nd live with her nd leke aao..
Nk-smile haa...amma...i m in love nd jumping in sofa..
Gy-what happened. .
Nk-yaieee...awww...gave kiss to gy3...went in room..
Gy-jo bhi hai hasa to..
In room...he is kissing to latter...mujhe koi saram nhi hogi ab...tumhe pyar ko exept karne mai because this is most beautiful felling. ..
Now he is going in car..sttop in one shop..
Nk-kya lu...saw one couple. ..hubby is fixxing flower on wifes hair...smile nd saw to him...who is fixing rose nd ak smile. ..
Mai leti hu...took flower nd went in her home...
Door ringing. ..but no replly. ..than neighbour came nd said...dey r not in house. .nk felt sad..nd went in home..
Had dinner. .
Nk-kitna gussa kar lo mai mana lungi..call..but mujhe pata lagani hogi wer r u..
He call to her first time...she picked. .
Ak-saw nk number. .shocked. .nk...ye kyo...she cut...d phone. .
Nk-cat di..but..again. .
Ak-she cut...he again try..
But she attended this time..
Nk-hloo..ak..
Ak-hloo..
Nk-smile felt so hpy to listen her words. ..howz u..ak..
Ak-sry here is no ak...nd cut d phone..
Nk-he felt bad nd worried why she talking like that...wer is she ..nd kyo cut ki???,????
So so sry guys to late update. .enjoy this part nd gave sweet comments i will wait for comments nd pls pls press like button if u like this part..
Thanku..
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