Naksh FF # Do DiL # Part 16 on Page 118

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Aww that was so sweet nd emotions wala part sona ..naksh pain my god but akshi ki kya fault hai yrr ..ur ff day by day make me cry nd gave emotional bond ..naksh dance was nice nd last scene to mast tha .hope natik know about truth yr.pls update soon I m waiting:)

Vry nice part sona

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: --pranu--
so nice part...
par imp point pe u stopped ff😡
finallyhope in next naitik knows truth...
very nice and emotional part yaar...
dil jheet li bechari donon ki dard...
do update soon...

thank u soo much happu for liking this part :)

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
Nyccc part dear well done...finally in next part naitik knows ...actual reason..,...behind change akshara's behaviour...Pl cont next part soon...!!!!!

thank u soo much sameera for liking this part too...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh
Aww that was so sweet nd emotions wala part sona ..naksh pain my god but akshi ki kya fault hai yrr ..ur ff day by day make me cry nd gave emotional bond ..naksh dance was nice nd last scene to mast tha .hope natik know about truth yr.pls update soon I m waiting:)
Vry nice part sona

thank u soo much ruchu for ur comment and liking it...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

good afternoon to all my friends :)

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SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

nice part its amaging naksh rain romance and dance plz update next part sooon

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
nice part its amaging naksh rain romance and dance plz update next part sooon

thank u soo much simran for liking this part...i will update next part soon

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

PART...11...
Naitik open that file...and start reading it...
he became shocked to read all this...where as akshara still close her eyes...because after this she can't meet her eyes with him...
but when she got some courage to face him...she open her eyes...but naitik was nowhere in front of her...
ak(worriedly)-naitik...?
when she saw her file was on the bed...
ak-naitik kaha ?
she quickly came outside from her room...and start searching naitik in whole house...
gayatri saw her...she came near akshara to ask what is she doing here...
gy-akshara...kya hua beta ? tu itni pareshaan kyu dikh rahi hai ?
ak-maa apne naitik ko kahi dekha...?
gy-haa...wo abhi terris par gaya hai...maine mana bhi kiya ki baarish ho rahi hai...par wo na kuch bola aur na hi kuch suna...abhi use hi bulane ja rahi thi...
akshara take a relief...
ak-maa aap jakar soiye...mai naitik ko bula ko lati hu...
akshara quickly ran towards terris...where naitik was sitting in rain...
she slowly came near him...sat on her knees...and put her hand on his shoulder...
he has no emotions...just sat there...
ak-naitik...
but no use...he did'nt speak anything...
akshara's eye filled with tears...she started crying...
ak-i am sorry...naitik...mai aapko ye baat bata kar yu upset nahi karna chahti thi...mai janti thi ki agar mai apni iss sacchai ko aapse kahoongi toh aap bardast nahi kar payenge...
naitik just listening her all the words...
ak-mai nahi chahti ki aap mujhse pyaar kare...aapne aur maa ne mujhe bahut pyaar diya hai...aur uss pyar ke badle me itna bada dukh aapko nahi dena chahti thi...i am sorry...pls kuch toh boliye naitik...
pls mujhpar gussa kijiye...mujhe jo kehna hai wo kahiye...par yu chup mat rahiye naitik...pls boliye...
she tried to shake him...but he still not speaking anything...
ak-mai chahti hu ki aapko life ki saari khushi mile...ek aisa jeevan sathi mile jo har waqt aapke saath rahe...aur aapko pyaar kar sake{(she smile)...mera kya hai...mai aaj hu kal nahi...
she tried to talk him...but still he has no emotions...
ak(smile)-mai jaanti thi ki ye sach jaankar aapka ye hi reaction hoga...aur mai ye bardast nahi kar sakti...mai kal hi yaha se...aapki life se bahut door chali jaungi...neeche maa aapke liye pareshaan ho rahi hai...
she wipe her tears...got up from there...and about to go...
when...finally naitik speak up...
" shadi karogi mujhse ? "
akshara quickly turn to face him...( shockingly)
but she was not able to answet him...
ak-...
nk-bahut bolti ho tum...par ab bolo...shadi karogi mujhse...?
ak-naitik mere paas bas kuch hi saal hai...
naitik start coming towards her...
nk-unn kuch saal ko mai hamari zindagi bana doonga...
ak-mera saath hamesha aapke saath nahi rahega...
he came close to her...
nk-jitna bhi hoga...wo hamari life ka sabse khoobsurat pal hoga...
ak-mai aapko wo pyaar nahi de paungi naitik...
nk-hamara thoda pyaar bhi ek doose ke liye bahut hoga...i promise ki mai tumhe hamesha...har pal...har waqt...pyaar doonga...hamara saath har ek din...ko special banayega...
he came more close to her...now there was no space between them...
ak-aur mere marr ke baad...
naitik quickly put his hand on her mouth...
nk-koi bhi baat mujhe tumse juda nahi hone degi...mai khayal rakhunga tumhara...mai aapka illaaj karwaunga akshara...best se bhi best doctor se...
ak-aur agar mai shadi ke liye na kahu...tab...tab bhi aap mujhse itna hi pyaar karenge ?
nk-mere pyaar kisi bandhan ka mohtaaz nahi...mai tuhme jaise pyaar kal karta tha...aur jaise aaj karta hu...waise hi hamesha karta rahoonga...
ak(smile)-toh phir aap kisi aur se shadi kar lijiye...naitik
nk(angrily)-mai ye nahi karoonga...
akshara hold his hand...
ak-pls naitik...mere liye...aur mai aapko khush dekhna chahti hu...
nk-mai aapke bina kisi ke saath khush nahi reh sakta...
ak-toh theek hai...mai aapse shadi nahi karoongi...
nk(angrily)-akshara...
ak-jab tak aap shadi nahi karenge...mai kabhi khush nahi reh sakti...
nk(angrily)-toh theek hai...tum yahi chahti ho ki mai shadi karu...wo bhi kisi aur se...toh mai karoonga...par meri bhi ek shart hai akshara...
ak-kya ?
nk-ki tumhe meri first wife bankar... mere aur meri wife ke saath rehna hoga...
ak(shocked)-naitik...ye nahi ho sakta...
nk-sab kuch ho sakta hai akshara... pehle tumhe mujhse shadi karni hogi...phir mai kisi aur se shadi karne ko ready hu...isse tumhara hi baat reh jayegi...aur meri bhi...hum dono ek doosre ki khushi chahte hai na...toh wo isi tarah poori ho sakti hai...
bolo ready ho...?

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Ak-ye galat hoga...hum teeno ke saath...
nk-pyaar me sab kuch sahi hai...
ak-nahi...
she ran from there...
nk(smile)-kitni asaani ke saath tumne keh diya akshara...ki kisi aur se shadi kar lo...par ye itna asaan nahi hai...
a tear drop came from his eyes...he bent down on his knees and start crying...
here akshara came in her room...quickly lock the door...and fall on the bed...she too crying badly...
when she hear a voice..." akshara "...
she look in the room...and found her image which was calling her name...
image-jab naitik se itna hi pyaar karti ho...toh usse shadi kyu nahi kar leti...
ak-karna chahti hu...par mai unhe beech raaste me yu akela nahi chodna chahti...
im-wo tumse bahut pyaar karta hai...kuch hi din raho par use har khushi do...
ak-wahi mai dena chahti hu...
im-usko kisi aur ka hote dekh kar...
ak-hmm...
im-kabhi ye socha hai ki use kitna bura lag raha hoga...
ak-aur naitik ne jo kaha wo kya theek hai...?
im-aur nahi toh kya...wo toh tumhe khush dekhna chahta hai...
ak-mai khush rahoongi...unhe khush dekhkar...aur waise bhi mai toh marne hi wali hu...
im-toh maan jao uski baat...aur ban jao uski pehli wife...phir tumhare marne ke baad uski doosri biwi uski khayaal rakh legi...
ak-par naitik jisse shadi karenge...uske saath toh galat hoga...
im-kuch galat nahi hoga...
with this akshara's image faded away...
NEXT MORNING...
Gayatri went to temple...and naksh were all alone in the house...
naitik was sitting on the dinning table!...holding a glass on water...and lost somewhere...
when akshara came there...she too sat opposite side...
ak-good morning !
nk-...
ak-maine kal bahut socha naitik...
naitik look at her...
ak-aur ye decide kiya hai ki...mai aapki first wife banne ko ready hu...
naitik became shocked to hear this...he broke that glass in his hand...and blood drops came from his hand...
akshara closed her eyes in his pain...
ak-hamari shadi ke baare me kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...yaha tak ki maa ko bhi nahi...aap aur aapko bhi doosri shadi...ko poora maan sammaan dena hoga...duniye ki nazro me mera naam kabhi aapke saath nahi aana chahiye
nk-mujhe manzoor hai...
akshara with a teary eyes look at him due to his sudden reply...
ak-hmm...
get up from there...
ak-shadi kab karni hai ?
nk-aaj hi...
with this she went from there...
naitik did all the preprations...
he came in gayatri's room...open her cupboard and take out her wedding saare...
he came in hall...akshra too came there wearing a red colour suit...
ak-chale ?
naitik handover gayatri's saari to her...
nk-mai chahta hu ki hamari shadi me tum ye maa ki saari pehno...
ak-mai ye...par
nk-ab ye mat kehna ki ye bhi meri second wife ko dena chahti ho...
ak-mai change karke aati hu...
nk-hmmm...jaldi aana...maa aane wali hongi...unse pehle hume ghar se nikalna hai...mai car me wait kar raha hu...
ak-hmmm...
both went to their own place...
after some time akshara came outside wearing a beautiful bridal red colour red saari...naitik just glare at her...
but she is not happy...what they are going to do...and after that what they will do...
naitik drove off the car at the temple...
both came out from the car...naitik holds her hand...
nk-ab se hamare har kadam ko hum saath me paar karenge...
he holds her hand more tighly...
and both came in the temple...
where pandit ji was already for their wedding...
he asked naksh to sit on their respective place...and start reading the wedding mantras...
naksh exchange their varmala...
and now pandit ji start reading seven vows...
in all phere...naksh take pledge to love eachother...till they are live...
naitik filled akshara's maang...
and both took blessings from god...
ak-bhagwaan...mai hamesha chahti hu ki naitik khush rahe...aur iske liye mai unhe kisi aur ka pyaar paate hue dekhna chahti hu...
nk-mai janta hu...bhagwaan ki akshara aapse kya maangne wali hai...par mai hamesha apne liye unhe hi chahta hu...
both look at eachother...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Nk-chale ? mrs. naitik singhania...
but suddenly his phone rings...he received that call...
nk-hello !...ji maa...kya ?...theek hai maa...ji...
and cut the phone...
ak-kya hua ?
nk- maa kuch dino ke liye mama ji ke ghar ja rahi hai...unki bete ki shadi hai...
ak-ohhh ! accha hai...jo hum karne ja rahe hai uske liye ye hi theek hai...
nk-hmmm...
naitik start wakling towards the car...but...
ak-naitik...
naitik suddenly stop on his way...but did'nt want to say anything...because he knew what she want to say...
ak-aap jo chahte the wo maine kar diya...ab aapki baari...
naitik without saying anything sat in the car...
akshara too sat in the car...
ak-naitik mai aapse kuch keh rahi hu...
nk-maine sun liya hai akshara...
ak-toh jawab dijiye...
nk-jawab...
he again came outside from the car...
ak-naitik aap kya kar rahe hai ?
nk-aapko driving aati hai...?
ak-haa{
nk-toh aap ghar chaliye...mai aata hu...
ak-par...
without saying he went from there...left akshara confused...
she drove off the car to the house...came in her room...and sat on the bed...
with some angry action...mai jaanti thi...naitik meri baat kabhi nahi sunenge...wo mere alawa kisi aur ke saath...
when she saw herself in the mirror...
she came in front of the mirror...a little smile came on her face...she touched her sindoor...
ak(smile)-naitik ke naam ka ye sindoor...
but with this her eye again filled with tears...maine shayad naitik ke saath galat kiya...par ab nahi...jab wo wapas aa jayenge...toh unhe mai doosri shadi ke liye mana kar doongi...
sahi kaha hai kisi ne...pyaar aisa hi hota hai...mai naitik ko kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti...ab jab tak zinda hu...mai unhe apna saara pyaar unhe doongi...bahut bahut bahu saara...
she became happy...
she start doing prepration to welcome him lovingly...
ak-ab naitik aayenge...toh mai unhe accha sa surprise doongi...aur unhe bhi meri pagalo wali baat maan ne ki zaroorat nahi hai...
she gets ready with a beautiful pink gown...which naitik brought for her...
when the door bell rings..." ting tong "
ak(happily)-lagta hai naitik aa gaye...
she screem " aayi naitik "
she came down in hall...and ran towards the door...to open it quickly...
SO FRIENDS I KNOW THIS MAY BE A BORING PART...BUT DEFINATELY U WILL LOVE THE NEXT PART...
BUT HOPE THIS PART TOO ENTERTAIN U A LITTLE...
THANKS FOR READING IT...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago