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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: --pranu--

ye kiskeliye?????

Replly na dene k liye ..jaldi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: --pranu--
ur dp was ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Replly na dene k liye ..jaldi

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: --pranu--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Plz update next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
Plz update next part
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Simarn wen I will get time ..I will do update soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Part-8

He is shivering than ..akshi feared so much...what happened to u ..she said again nd again ..

Ak-I m really sry 😲 I know I hurt u ..natik pls mujhe maf kar do aaj k bad no masti promise. .she said with jointed her hand ..

Na-fine ..maf kiya ..nd gave smile. .

Ak-shocked 😲 ye kya hai ..

Na-majak ko kuch sabak jaruri tha 😃 aakhir tumne sry bola sabke samne nd stood ...mere work pura hua..

Ak-kya work haa nd gave anger look😡

Na-jo tum karti ho sabke sath mai hamesha har bar majak aacha hi hota hai ..

Ak-aur tum tumne bhi to kiya na ..in anger look. .

Na-kiya but itna bhinhi ..bas sabak sikhaya ..

Every one laugh so much ...on akshu..

Ak-mil gai santi ..nd cry nd went ..

Mus-bhaiya ..aap log ek aache dost nhi ban sakte hai kya ..har dam bas ladai..

Na-mujhe bhi nhi pasand but apki frd kuch sune to na..

Mus-ye bhi hai .aaj to aacha khasa tamasa ho gya .

Al-ghar chale ab..

Every one said oki ..nd went home..

Both laying on bed. .nd thought in their room..

Na-mai bas yahi chahta hu tum thoda gusaa kam karo..samjho har dam fun sachi nhi hoti..

Ak-kya problems hai iski ..mujhe kitna tang karta hai ..samaj nhi aata mujhe kuch..

Na-tum kitna bhi tang karo abmai nhi boluga..

Ak-but mai apna rastha badal dungi ab bas...

NEXT MORNING:-

Akshu wokeup nd took bath nd get ready ..

Sat on bed ..in muskan room..

Muskan shocked to see akshu is sant..

Mu-teri tabiyat kharab hai kya..

Ak-nhi to..

Mu-tu chup hai I cant imagine now ..

Ak-bas yr ..aur masti nhi ab bhut ho gya..

Mu-tu badal gai ya ye natik ki sangat ka asar hai haa..

Ak-jo samaj lo..

Mu-waah ..I m hpy tu mature ho rahi hai ab..

Ak-ab aaj picnic jayge na..

Mu-haa ..bas mai sab ek sath..

Ak-oohoo..mere jiju bhi ..

Mu-haa tera natik bhi ..

Ak-made face..shut up. .😕

Mu-oki oki ..but mood thik kar pehle jaisa ban ja masti wali ..but yr bas alghai kuch kar na ..

Ak-matlb ..

Mu-wo log ki bus alg hamari alg ..picnic ek sath..

Ak-oo bas ..hum hai to kya gam ..bas dekh jaddu ..

Muskan gave hug to her nd both got ready for picnic. .😛

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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#238

Every one stood outside ..muskan ..akshu ..bas came..

Mu-what is this ..akshu put something in her hand..

Ak-dekho ab ..jaddu ..

Mu-kya ..but she went ..

Oki now she went to near bas nd saw here nd der ..no one is here ..she took some bolls little wali..nd open tanki ..patrol wali ..now she put all on tanki nd close ..

Ak-bas ho gaya ..now dekho ..

Nd came ..now everyone stood nd climb on bas ..than second bas came ..both akshu nd mus sat on bas..

Mu-kya kiya..

Ak-wait na yr ..

Mu-par..

Ak-thodi der jiju ki bas piche hai na bas..

Mu-haa

Ak-mera jaddu ..

Than bas stop..now ..

Everyone said what happened ...

Gadi kyo rok di in same tone..

Driver-kuch kharab ho gya lagta hai..

Ever-kya ..

Here in alok wali bas..

Al-y bas ruk kyo gai ..

Na-hmm dekhte hai..

Than she reached in muskans bas..

Na-kya hua..

Mu-wo bas kharab ..

Driver-ye aage nhi jaygi ab ..patrol tank kharab ho gayi ..

All-ab..

Al-ji aap log hamare mai aa jayiye..

Muskan nd akshu got hpy..

Mu-great akshu ..gave tumbs up..

Nd everyone climbing on other bas ..muskan sat near alok ..now ofcouse..

Natik sat alone but akshu came in last no option ..she sat ander wali seat pe..

Both dont see to each ..she saw nature ..he didnt want out again nd again his eyes went on her face ..her hair which flow on air nd her cute face ..waaw ..she looking really cute ..natik kaise na dekhe..

Na-aaj ise kya hua chup chup hsi bhut..

Ak-gave smile to him..he was shocked with her behavior. .

Na-maybe she is fine now ..in mn..chalo sudar to gai ..

He also gave smile ..

Now both hands touches to each ..natik felt somthing ..she gave shy look...

Now dey reached. ..

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

Now dey reached in place wer was mountain ..tree etc ..like picnic place..every one sat o floor nd playing ..enjoy with each other..

Mu-thanku akshu hame milane k liye pure raste..

Al-haa ..thanku akshu ..

Natik gave to her smile but this time she also gave smile ..lok nd muskan completely shocked with this behaviour. .

Mu-ye kya hai..

Ak-kuch nhi

Al-kuch to hai akshu tum thodi badli si sound kar rahi ho..

Ak-nhi essa nhi hai ..life mai khabhi to change hona hi chahiye...

Mu-waah bachi badi ho rahi hai..

THAN AFTER SOMETIMES DEY PLAYING BLINDFOLD..GAME:-

So ..akshi fold eyes nd search ..here nd there. .

Every one running Here nd there. .

She catch to someone. .now she went near to natik nd hold his hand ...

Ak-pakad liya..

Natik just felt her touch. .

She unfolded her eyes..saw to natik ..

Ak-tum ..smile ..next ur turn ..

Than dey played this game..

Aftersome times dey having lunch..

All grils nd boys sat two gather ..

Boy-waaw girls k sath picnic mai khana to bhut aacha hai..

Girl-haa ji ..girls r d best in everything nd every wer. .

But naksh were silent ..

Oki ..

Mu-kya hua akshu tu chup kyo hai..

Ak-kuch nahi ..

Al-tu chup kyo hai yr ..

Na-kuch nhi esse hi bas ..

Than one girl little poor girl ..sold something. .akshu saw nd went ..

Ak-kya bech ho beta ..

Gi-didi ye kilona hai ..ye lo na pls..

Ak-par beta aap ko padna chahiye na..

Gi-mai inhe banati hu ..mere do bhai behn hai jo padte hai to mujhe paise kamane hai na..

Ak-her eyes filled with tears. .beta aap pado bhut pado ..thabhi to aap kuch ban sakte ho..

Gi-ji didi ..par ek lelo na ..

Ak-ye lo paise gave money..ek de do ..

Gi-tqq di..lo aap bhut aachi ho hamesha kush rahegi..

Ak-aap bhi ..smile ..gave kiss on her cheeks. .

Gi-gave return kiss..nd said bye..

Natik saw from behind. .

Na-waaw iska man kitna saf hai ..

He sat near river ...nd thought about akshu ...

Meeting ..jhagda nd all..

Than akshu came their but not near natik..she was persent ..natik saw ..

Went near..

Na-hloo aksh..uu..said but nervous. .

Ak-hmm saw to natik ..hii..

Na-wo abhi thodi der pehle tum wo girl..ki..help..

Ak-wo mujhe bhut aacha lagta hai help karna.

Na-nice ..tum dil ki saf ho ..thodi naughty ho but .

Ak-smile ..tq ..saw in his eyes. .

Na-also ..

Ak-poor people ki help karna aachi bat h na..

Na-hmm..mai bhi bhut aacha lagta hai. .

Ak-tum to bhut aache ho hi..

Na-tum bhi ..aacha I m going ..

He turn back than akshu said ..

Ak-natik ruko..pls.

Na-hmm..

Ak-wo mai kuch bolna matlab..

Na-kya ..

Ak-I love u ..with low voice ..he was shocked to listen this ..

Na-)-

Ak-gave hug ..I love u ..pls kuch bolo..

Na-????

So guys this is my new part after so many days hope u will enjoy this part..so pls give comment if u like this part nd press like button ..I m waiting ..gud bad jaise bhi comments par frd pls de do ..I m waiting. .

Precap-dekhte hai kya hoga...

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago