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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: avinaksh

sorry ruchi... I was busy with exams so didn't comment but seriously both the parts were awesome... ab to excitement aur badh gayi hai... update soon :)

Thanku so mach avi for ur sweet comment...nd dont say sry I know tumhare exam h atleast u gave comment na..yaa I will do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

ruchi its really superb one... flash back is nice... continue soon

Thanku pragati for cutee comment...yaa I will do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

so sweet nd cute ruchi..
naitik and mohit were too cute with their act..
lovely and nice part
sorry for the late comment..
but do update next part sooon
okeeeii

No sry dear nd thanku sonal for ur vry sweet comment...ya I will do update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gm to all of u my frds nd happy Sunday 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

hi ruchi... plz update

Hii avi ya likhne ja hi rhi thi bas...bdw ur dp pic is so hot socha ab bol hi bol du 😉
Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-5
Natik saw room nd went in room there is vry dark because lite was gol Than he heard some voice
Ak-are ye lite b gol ho gai sudden she saw that someone is here are tum aa gye maine akle ne practices ki aaj ab ja k aaye tum haa
Na-not say anything hmn
Ak-hiii teacher m mujhe bola h tumhara parter aaj aa jayga dekho tum aacha to gate ho na hame s comptision jittna h
Na-confused lagta h y mujhe koi aur samaj rhi h
Both dont saw to each other because their is so dark
Na-v aap bhut aacha gati h maine abhi suni aapki aavaj
Ak-thanku but wbu
Na-mai v nhi m v
Ak-kya nhi nhi chalo ga k sunao koi b song mujhe lite nhi h par gana to suna hi sakte ho na chalo pls
Na-kya nhi m v nhi
Ak-normal girls sarmati hai par tum itna kyo sarma rahe h thoda sa
Na-kya mar gya natik (man hi man) tu to itna besura h y sunegi to bhag jaygi clg chod k par y jiddi b bhut h kuch sunnane k tayar hi nhi
Ak-pls hloo start to karo kha kho ralhe ho
Na-v m thik h if u r interested than gata hu
Ak-hmm pls thabhi to bol rhi hu chalo
Na-tttuuummm hiii hooo abb tumm hii ho ho meri jindagiii abb tumm hii hoo with loud voice(vry besura)
Ak-her hand on her eyes nd said baap re pls pls chup karo tum chiila kyo rahe ho esse gana kon gata h m har jaugi esse
Na-maine to mana hi kiya tha par tum suni hi nhi meri bat
Ak-mujhe kya pata tum itne besure ho mujhe laga sayad koi aachi aavaj hogi tumne to gane ko hi pura tod Diya
Na-itna b bura nhi tha janta hu thoda bura tha
Ak-thoda nd laugh than come close to him nd nd She thakraofi something nd nd falls but she took natik hand nd both falls dowm on flour nd than natik upar nd akshi nicche than light come akshi close her eyes nd natik saw akshi his hend on akshi shoulder nd he vry tightly pakdofy akshi nd natik said waaw than swly swly akshi open her eyes nd saw natik nd natik is lost in akshi beauty
Ak-choddo mujhe kya badmiji h kon ho tum kya nam h tumhara natik still paktofy
Na-nhi pata nd lost u r so beautiful
Ak-ek tappad padega badmiz kahi k
Na-dont know what he said sab manjur h
Than akshi will try to stand up but but she again falls nd her hair on natiks face covered completely
Ak-kya h y sab nd her breath touches on natiks
Na-just fell it nd again lost nd smile
Ak-kitna batmiz h y iski to sikayat karni padegi mujhe she hit on natik s cheats chodo mujhe kitna tight pakda h isne
Na-nhi
Ak-chodoo with loud voice nd said aaa bachoo
Than natik comes on persent nd chodofy akshi nd
Na-sry sry I m really sry
Ak-badmiz kahi k sab ladke ek jaise hote h janti hu ladki dekhi nhi phhir sry
Na-hloo badmiz kon m
Ak-aur koi h kya yha jisko batmiz bolugi
m
Na-ek to m sry bol rha upar s tum y kya bakwas h
Ak-mujhe tumse koi umid b nhi h janti hu tum logo ko sab k sab
Na-tum jab s kya bakwas kar rhi ho
Ak-ek to besure upar s batmiz
Na-dekho bhut
Ak-kya
Than teacher come nd said kyo halla macha rakha h akshra tum y ladka kya kr rhe ho tum
Na-mem v m iski aavaj sun k
Ak-mem y mere sath badmizi kr rha tha mujhe pakad k
Na-nhi mem y giri thi mere upar m nhi ek to ese bachaya upar s
Than akshi frd come karisma varsa nd natiks frd naman nd mohit
Every one-kya hua
Both-isse ek sath
Teacher-dono say sry to each other warna suspend ho jaoge
Ak-nhi mem mujhe nhi m bolti hu
Na-ji mem m b bolta u
Than both of them say
Ak-sry
Na-I m sry
Ak-par mem m is besure k sath gana nhi gaugi
Than everyone laugh vry loud
Na-mem is ladki s bol dijiye mujhe b nhi gana aur mujhe esse mat bole
Te-wait wait what is this he is not ur partnr v aaj nhi aaya kal aayga
Ak-thank god bach gai m nhi to pakka har jati
Than mohit nd naman laugh
Na-gave vry anger look
Ak-thanku mem chale varsa aur karisma
Both said yes than leave
Mohit-y sab kya h y vhi h na jiski aavaj kaisi lagi
Na-chup kar gusaa aa rha h iske upar ek to mujhe gana gane ko bola nd phir bolti h besura nd khud mere upar giri nd mujhe bolti h ki m ise ched rha hu
Naman-dekh natik besura to tu h hi bechari n galt kya bola nd laugh
Na-hit him
Mo-kittni cutee h yr chod na
Na-cutee my fut mirchi h thikhi sunti nhi h kisi ki jiddi h bilkul
Mo-tu kon sa kam h tu b to jiddi h aachi jamegi
Na-chod yr chal ab
Here akshi nd her frd
Ak-kitne bure h yha k ladke koi sence hi nhi h
Kar-nhi yr essa nhi h sab aache h s galt fehmi ho gai tujhe
Ak-koi nhi hui aakdu I just het him
Varsa-nhi m janti hu usse v bhut aacha tu essa mat bol
Ak-tu nhi janti varsa usse mujhe kitni tight s pakkda tha
Va-laugh to enjoy kar leti kitna cutee h yr teri jodi aachi lagegi uske sath
Ak-chup kar ab to bilkul nhi y aakhiri ladka hua na tab b esse pyar na karu
Va-haha chal na meri pyari saheli ki tarah has d
Ak-tu b na smile
Va-cutee tha na nd laugh
Ak-ja teri meri dosti khatam tu kar l shadi itna pasand h to
Va-m to tere liye bol rhi thi aacha chod tu jab gusse m hoti h na to bhut aachi lagti h
Than teiro reached in their class nd in class nd akshi shocked to see natik
Ak-y yha b aa gya ab iske sath baith k padna
Ka-yr dekh na puri class full h bas uske aage ki tin chair hi khali h
Ak-mujhe nhi baithna
Here na-his hand on his forhed are yr y yha b
Ritu-waaw kitni beautiful h yr
Na-chup kar a yr mirchi h puri
Va-chal varna teacher aa jaygi l aa gai chal
Ak-nhi nhi tu b but she went nd sit nd just behind natik??????
So so so gys plss enjoy this part nd press like button nd pls give ur comment s I m waiting agar aacha laga to pls like button dabane m kanjusi na kare...

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
super cute super nice and super funny. ... and all the good words I can say! !!! loved it. ... waiting for the love story to start...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very cute cute part yaar..
naitik mr. besura..🤣
love it
and their nok jhok too..
awesome..
pls do update new part tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: avinaksh

super cute super nice and super funny. ... and all the good words I can say! !!! loved it. ... waiting for the love story to start...

Thanku avi for liking this part nd commenting pls back page m dekho tumhari dp k liye maine b comment diya h 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

very cute cute part yaar..
naitik mr. besura..🤣
love it
and their nok jhok too..
awesome..
pls do update new part tomorrow
okeeeii

Thanku for ur vry lovly comment. ..sonal pls u also do update next part I m waiting ...I will try to update it tomorrow. ...precap to kisi n pucha hi nhi 🤣

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