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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

ruchi its really really awesome... superb mind blowing perfect part... love it.. precap is so much interesting.. waiting waiting and waiting for next part

Thanku so mach pragati for ur vry lovly comment yaa I will try to update soon... gud morning pragati
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Pragati tum ek ff start karo na cutee sa jaise pehle likha tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ruchigarg


Pragati tum ek ff start karo na cutee sa jaise pehle likha tha

possible nahi hai yaar m busy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

possible nahi hai yaar m busy

Koi bat nhi take ur time nd phir bad m likhna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-4
Next morning natik wakeup nd
Na-pata nhi akshra rat m soi b ya nhi m ek housemaid ko bol dunga v sara kam kar degi than
Ak-gm
Na-are tum aur so jati itni jaldi kaise uth gai gm
Ak-v rat ko m thik hu
Na-tum chinta mat karo m tumse kuch nhi puchuga
Ak-thanku natik
Na-smile m jata hu abhi housemaid ko bol dunga v aa jaygi
Ak-thik h
After one day natik asked to maid that akshi had food properly maid said no
she is not happy than natik thought mujhe akshra ko hasana ya kul k rulana hoga than in fom house
Na-hii akshra kaisi ho
Ak-thik hu
Na-y kya lunch esse hi rakha h kyo nhi liya
Ak-man nhi h than mohit came nd saw akshi sad
Mo-hloo dosto mujhe wish karo now m shadi suda hu
Na-congress yr koi problem to nhi h
Mo-haa yr bauji gussa h Par time k anusar sab thik ho jayga
Ak-congress mohit nd thanku madad karne k liye m tumhare liye bhut kush hu
Than natik do isra that akshi ko kush kaise karo than mohit got an idea
Mo-chal yr ek play krke h wahi m girl tu boy
Ak-looking mohit confused
Na-haa haa nd stoodup
Mo-darling tum bhut bure h mujhe bola ki tumhe note2 dunga aur diya y gada sa cell phone nd hand ko natik soldier par markar
Ak-confused but little smile come on face
Na-tu hi to bola tha I mine boli thi ki man gya h tu shitt matlab man gai jo tune mujhe boli ki jo dena h dedo nd his hand on mohit face
Here akshi saw this some smile come on her face
Mo-tu b na yr kam I mine tu b na jannu tune mujhe bola tha na ki tu mujhe dega lekin marji s to kuch dena hi nhi h nd turn
Na-tu gussa kyo ho rhi haa m dunga na ab nd natik also turn nd his hand on mohit face
Akshi continue looking both of them nd now she is not controlling his smile nd laugh vry loudly 😆
Natik nd mohit saw this nd became hpy plan jo sucessfull ho gya
Ak-with loud laugh mohit tum b na janti hu tumko tum to clg k din s pagal ho pata h mujhe par natik tum tum kabse pagal ho gye nd laugh she forgot every thing nd dont know what she said but but now in persent she stoped
Ak-vry loudly crying kyuuu kyuu
Mohit natik saw sudden she cry
Mo-ja chup kara
Na-nhi ro lene d sara dard nikal jayga
Ak-vry cry kyo kyo mujhe itna hasa rahe ho kyuu mujhe aklea nhi chod dete m thak gai hu kyu y sab ho jata sab badal jata h nd her hand on her hair kyoo loudly crying than she is taking her hand in natiks hand nd said kyoo kar rahe ho mat hasao mujhe tum mera sath to nhi chodoge na ab durd nhi seh paugi m tut gai hu puri tarah pls natikkk pls mat hasao
Na-dekho jo hua m use badal to nhi sakta par wada h tumhara sath nhi choduga has k to dekho y hasi oos ki bund ki tarah har jagah fel jaygi tum to hasna mukurana ekdom hi bhul gai ho has k dekho jo problem h na kaise dur bhag jaygi
She listan all this stop crying
Ak-think thanku nd sry
Na-nodded
Ak-smile
Mo-chalu m ab thik ho na
Than mohit went nd natik feed food to akshi
In night natik in his home akshi in fomhouse than thought
Flash back few years back in clg day first year
Natik with his best frd mohit nd naman
Rituraj tero sit in canteen nd buddy talks
Mo-yr y clg life to aachi hogi na gys
Rituraj-haa yr par dekh na koi girl dang ki nhi h mujhe to bas
Na-yar tu na bas girl girl kya rakha h in ladkiyo m sara din bas
Mo-kya natik kud ko kisi ko dekhta b nhi hame kyo rokta h
Ri-chod na ise pata nhi kiske karam fodega y jo tujse pyar krgi v duniya ki sabse badi pagal
Na-aacha aur jo tujhe karegi v to roygi hamesha
Mo-yaa sachi bola yr roygi hamesha
Ri-vry funny than
Hiii natik
Na-turn hii sheneha
She-kaise ho kya chal rha h
Na-kuch nhi not interested
She-v mujhe notes chahiye thi
Na-haha tum lunch k time p lena kk
She-ha m aa jaugi
Na-kk byy
She-byyy
Mo-ehmm ehmm yr tu usee bhav kyo nhi deta tujhe school k time s
Ri-kya matlab mujhe nhi pata hum to abhi frd bane h bata na yr
Na-kya mohit chup kr
Mo-haa wahi medam isse pasand karti h aur y nhi
Ri-kya yr kam s kam time pass to kr l with laugh
Na-aacha nhi nhi mujhe nhi karna kisi ki felling ko hurt nhi karna
Ri-to kya karna h gyss chill itne beautiful faces h enjoy kro kya pyar vyar
Mo-tu chup kar aacha to iske jaise nhi to kaisi chahiye
Na-simple si pyari si duniya s nayari si jiska dil saf ho than than he heard voice
Ri-hahaha essi ladkiya aaj kal hoti hi nhi
Mo-tu na hoti hogi yr every thing is possible natik agar sacha pyar ho na sab mil jata h
Na-hope hogi sayad phir he heard voice binn y naman nhi aaya
Mo-haa yr pata nhi
Na-y na late ka late hi than phir voice binnn tumhare gyss gyss koi aavaj sunai di kya
Ri-haa teri wali ki bat aate hi l v aa gai
Mo-haha shut up
Na-haa yr sach kuch sunai do d rha h
Mo-v singing comptision h yr gala fad rhe h sab
Na-kya than phir binnn tumhare jii par hamars clg m
Mo-haa yr
Ri-y log b na kya kya krte h
Na-again this time binn tumhare m ja rha gys
Mo-sunn sunn kha bhag gya teri bakwas na rituraj sab bhag jate h
Here natik is going to hall to listan d voice such a pretty voice close
Voice ristha h yeee bas pyarr kaa
Na-run kitni pyari voice k yr kon h y girl waaw I love this voice run run but when he reached but aavaj band
In hall stage
Na-yha to koi nhi h yr shittt than he goes to teacher
Na-hlooo mem v
Mem-haa kon ho tum
Na-m v mem natik abhi v
M-haa kon
Na-jo gana ga rhi thi kon h v I mine bhut beautiful voice thi mem
M-kon jo abhi gai v to akshra thi bhut aachi aavaj h aaj uska partner nhi tha comptision k liye tayari nd went
Na-are yr y mem na kuch bataya hi nhi ek bar to dekh k rahuga usse than he saw room
Na-waaha practice ho rhi h sayad par pehchanuga kaise
Nd went room ???????
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Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
nice sweetu...
cute one but hwere is d precap??
no need to ask req for comments those who like will comment na...
dekthe hain flashback mein kya kya twists and turnings hain...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: hinusha

nice sweetu...

cute one but hwere is d precap??
no need to ask req for comments those who like will comment na...
dekthe hain flashback mein kya kya twists and turnings hain...

Yaa I will try to give u turn nd twists maine socha samaj jaoge 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Yaa I will try to give u turn nd twists maine socha samaj jaoge 😛

lets see ... will u impress me or not 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: hinusha

lets see ... will u impress me or not 😆

Dont know princess ko kush karna I think aasan nhi its vry difficult 😆precap nhi samjhi😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Dont know princess ko kush karna I think aasan nhi its vry difficult 😆precap nhi samjhi😳

accha ji...😃 ha mein tum jitni samajhdaar nahi hoon na isiliye samjh nahi aayi😉

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