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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: hinusha

tumhari time pass hojaayega and u gain english knowledge 👍🏼

But after exam dear not now tumhare comments ka wait to rehta hai nhi to heart attack aa jayga😆

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

wow its awesome and very good part update soon waiting

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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

So my natkat frd ka comments jo mera task hai try karti hu avi okk but u gave me comment isko pad k oki

Ruchi this part was so good.I just loved it ..itna aacha tha ki man kar rha tha padti hi jau chodu nhi..sab kuch notice kiya..maja aa gya pls update kr do na jaldi

I thought iska opposite yhi hoga dont know but mera task complete ho gya...but but

Kya jamana aa gya part b kud update karo phir comments b kud updatd karo not fair naughty avi..😊

well done ur task is complete!!!! bikul sahi interpret kia h!!!!
maza aya na??? comment padh k bhi aur task kar k bhi 😆 🤣

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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: hinusha

hahahahahah very very gud commennt avi...
i think ruchi ko heart attack aajayega...😊
happy to see ur dis type of comment...

thank you pranu di

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: avinaksh

thank you pranu di

my pleasure aviii😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
wow its awesome and very good part update soon waiting

Thanku pragati for ur sweet comments. .yaa I will update soon😛

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: avinaksh

So my natkat frd ka comments jo mera task hai try karti hu avi okk but u gave me comment isko pad k oki
Ruchi this part was so good.I just loved it ..itna aacha tha ki man kar rha tha padti hi jau chodu nhi..sab kuch notice kiya..maja aa gya pls update kr do na jaldi
I thought iska opposite yhi hoga dont know but mera task complete ho gya...but but
Kya jamana aa gya part b kud update karo phir comments b kud updatd karo not fair naughty avi..😊

well done ur task is complete!!!! bikul sahi interpret kia h!!!!
maza aya na??? comment padh k bhi aur task kar k bhi 😆 🤣

Naughty girl next time normal comments dena kahi essa comments dubara pad k mujhe heart attack aa jaye..phir next bhul jana dear😆😆

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Part-11

Ak-turn saw seneha tum

Se-wo mai b natik k liye kuch lai thi tumhara ho gya ho to mai kila du

Ak-bilkul

Seneha sit nd gave laddu to natik but natik

Na-mera pet bhara hai sry dont eat ..sry tum bura mat manna

Ak-pls natik seneha bhut pyar se lai hai ek bite kha lo..

Na-auu m oki tum bolti ho to ek le lera hu

Seneha happy nd gave laddu howz it

Na-ate nd eiii nd nikalofy all ladu in plate bhut bura hai suger nhi Sault hai isme ...

Seneha-sry wo galti se book mai padte hue banana to

Naman nd mohit laugh loudly nd said agar banana nhi aata to kyo banai tum seneha become angry nd leave..

Ak-kya gyss usne try to kiya tum log b na

Na-par akshi jo bura hai v hai jo aacha hai vo aacha ...namak k laddu to nhi kha sakta nd gives smile

Ak-smile mai ghar chalti hu gyss byy natik

Na-byy

Than next day in clg

Varsa-are akshra tu party degi na tere bdy aa rha hai na

Ak-nhi yr bdy mai bacchi to nhi hu ab ye sab aacha nhi lagta hai tu bolna na mai tum logo ko sare frds ko cantin mai kuch kila duggi ok

Va-par yr bdy ek year mai ek bar aata hai kuch to aacha tu natik ko best frd bolti hai na usse bataya

Ak-mai kaise bol sakti hu vo puchega to bata duggi tu b na its not big day yr chal I am going

Va-nhi esse kaise meri frds ka bdy special ho hona hi chahiye mai natik ko batati hu uski help b le lungi .

Than she goes nd said

Va-natik mujhe kuch

Na-wo varsa mai tumhare pass hi aa rha tha I asked somthing to u akshi ka dob kab hai

Va-yhi batane to mai aa rhi thi after 1 month pls do somthing for akshi she said mai kuch nhi karugi pls we will do

Na-tqq essa to ho nhi sakta hai kuch to jarur karuga ..party sare frds milkar oki iski preparation abhi se start but but we dont talk about this to akshi ...got it ..

Va-aacha tum gift kya doge usse m to aachi si jewellery dungi wbu

Na-I thought something u will saw on her bdy..

Va-oki bbyy

Na-bbyyy she leave..akshi ye tumhare liye shocking hoga I know but for u I will learn music I know u love music. ..

Than here akshi sit nd natik came

Na-akshi kya kar rhi ho

Ak-dekho na ye qu ban hi nhi raha hai pls help me na

Na-ye bhut easy hai nd explain to her

Ak-tqq mujhe kitna aache se bataya pls mujhe uthelo b pada doge bilkul nhi aata h

Na-sure meri best frd ke liye kuch b

Ak-tqq

Na-bar bar tqq ab agar bola na frdship end nd stoodup but akshi hold his hand nd said

Ak-swly aage se nhi bolugi mafi ..nd smile

Na-thik hai nd sit aacha tum apne bdy par kuch kar rhi ho

Ak-wo wo ye varsa ki bachi kuch nhi digest hota ...kuch nhi

Na-mai tumhe kuch gift du to tum mana to nhi karogi

Ak-mere frd jo b mujhe d mere liye sabse best h bas tum sab ki blessings hi khafi hai

Na-akshi uske alava hum d b kya sakte hai

Ak-matlab tum is month

Na-mai bhut busy rahuga sayada jayada bat b na kar pau bdy to hmm wish to kar hi dunga

Ak-man me bas yhi value h meri sab ek jaise hai koi kuch kar b sakta hai...koi bat nhi tum wish kar do bhut hai

Na-laugh nd said byy

Ak-byy ab to cantin m b kuch nhi dungi maine socha tum to kuch karoge hi ..baki sab to thik hai par chodo

Here natik talks to mohit

Na-pls mujhe song nd gitar silhna hai pata karke bata nd tell every thing about party

Mo-woo gana natik tu gya bhai m bata dunga class k bare m tu sikh to payga na party we r doing...akshra k liye itna sab tu janta hai frdship se aage ja rha h ye bandan

Na-tu bakwas mat kar jo bola h utna kr nd went

Mo-ruk yr dost dost to rha nhi ladki mili gayab

But felt hpy for u

Than natik goes to classes

Teach-pls sing a song

Na-mujhe kuch nhi aata sir

Te-kuch b dekhna hai

Na-aaa tum hi hooo

Te-pls pls esse nhi pehle riyaj karo subah uth k 5 00 tum aacha gane lagoge dekho saaa ree gaa maa swly se

Na-he sing nd learn

After some day natik sikhofy song nd here akshi

Ak-varsa y natik kaha hai aaj kal mujhe studys mai uski help chahiye thi 4 days se to face b nhi dikha

Va-dont know meri bat nhi hui yr

Than she saw natik nd said

Ak-natik ruko kaha ho tum pls meri help mujhe samjha do na

Na-man are yr mujhe class jana hai ...vo mai tumhe kal batau to chalega abhi mai bhut busy hu

Ak-thik hai jao tum mujhe kuch nhi chahiye byy...man hi man mai tumse khabhi bat nhi karugi do din mai mera bdy hai tumhe to kuch jao ...

Than bdy day in home akshi...more part coming soon..

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Akshi To suresh

Ak-uncle aaj mera bdy hai

Suresh-to kya karu mai mujhe kuch paise chahiye do mujhe

Ak-wo party dena tha mujhe thode se hi h

Su-koi jarurt nhi h clg jati ho thik nd take all money

Than varsa call to akshi nd said

Va-tu rat ko hotel chalegi na hame projects k liye jana hai uncle ko bol dena

Ak-kya par thik h bol dungi

She talk to her uncle nd goes to clg in clg every one stands narishma shava natik mohit nd said hpy bdy to u hpy bdy to u hpy bdy dear akshra hpy bdy to u

Than all took cake

Ak-tqq every one than she cut cake nd feed all nd said sry gyss mai money nhi la pai hu to party tumhe bad mai d dungi

Mo-koi bat nhi akshra hamari blessings tumhare sath hai..

In evening akshi felt sad becuse she not gave party to his frds than varsa came nd said r u ready ..

Ak-kaha jane k liye

Va-project

Ak-tu itna saj k jaygi

Va-hum chal y shadi pehen aur chal

Ak-par varsa dont lisan anything akshi wore beautiful sari color red...looking gorgeous. ...then karishma varsa akshi trio reached hotal

Ak-tum log teaches kaha hai y mujhe itna ready kar diya hai

Kar-yr wo sab aa chuke hai tu chal na

Than they reached in hall nd here is vry dark akshi said varsa bhut dark hai than sudden lights on nd akshi saw hall is fully decorated there is some pics of akshi with varsa alone she is vry hpy to see all this nd shocked

Than all frds came nd throwing rose pattle on akshi nd said hpy bdy but but not natik ..

Ak-tqqq gyss ye sab kab varsa tu na bhut buri h karishma tu isi liye mujhe itni ready kari my best frds tqq for surprise she saw here nd there nd ask where is natik

Mo-sari tayari usi ne ki hai holl booking varsa se pic collect ki ..hamne bas help ki h

Ak-felt so hpy but where is natik than he swly come with buke nd said hpy bdy dear akshi hpy bdy to u

He wore black colored jecket nd jeans look so hot akshi saw natik nd becoming vry hpy ...

Natik saw akshi nd stop nd continue saw to her lost

Dont say

Every one natik kha h gift d

Na-in persent kya haa

Gave buke nd said

Na-aap bhut I mine tum tum bhut sundar lag rhi ho again lost chand b tumhare samne sarma jaye lost nd saw kitna lucky hoga vo jo tumhe payga

Akshi Blass she also looking natik eyes nd lost

Ak-aur

Na-kittni tarif karu rat kam pad jaygi maine ek pari ko b itna musam aur clean nhi paya jo tumhe dekh k paya hai

Ak-tum jhut bol rhe ho she also lost

Na-tarif to hum kar nhi sakte hai so jhut hi sachi par heart se bola hua jhut sach hi hota hai

Than all frds laughs both break their talks came in persent

Na-wo mai yha nhi tha

Ak-wo mai yha nhi thi

Every member laugh hame pata h than mohit said natik tera gift

Both blass natik said yes nd went akshi confused aftersome time

Natik with guitar nd sing..

Dil aaj kal meri sunta nhi (akshi shocked) natik saw akshi nd sing ..

Dil aaj kal meri sunta nhi dil aaj kal pass rehta nhi ye tujhse milne ko chahe ye teri hi karta hai batein kya tum ho kya tum ho wahi kya tum ho haa tum ho wahi ...dil aaj kal pass rehta nhi dil aaj kal meri sunta nhi ye tujhse hi mil k hua hai jo teri najar ne chuva hai nd (saw akshi ) kya tum ho kya tum ho wahi la la lll la hmm hmm nd finish d song ...akshi saw natik nd alone clapping nd goes hug to natik

Ak-tqq natik mere liye natik also hug akshi first time his hand on akshis back both r vry hpy not saw that aur koi b hai than???????

So gys this is long part for u hope u all r like it so pls gave ur comments nd press like button ..pls pls waiting for ur comments. ..

Sry for mistakes. ..

Precap-naksh dance nd natik saw akshi every where

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago