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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Waise princess agar tumhe kuch aur dekhna h to tell me..in next part

i want naksh cute frndship and togetherness...
i dont want in future like a twist where akshi chooses someother person due to mu and fight happens btw naksh like dat all plss...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha

i want naksh cute frndship and togetherness...
i dont want in future like a twist where akshi chooses someother person due to mu and fight happens btw naksh like dat all plss...

Oo dear u should defiantly watch naksh frdship...but dear suppression to dikhana hi padega but mu is not like that jaisa tum soch rhi ho..yaa mai dhayan rakhugi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Oo dear u should defiantly watch naksh frdship...but dear suppression to dikhana hi padega but mu is not like that jaisa tum soch rhi ho..yaa mai dhayan rakhugi..

okk gud...
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Posted: 10 years ago
ruchi both parts are outstanding.. superb.. wow naksh friendship yyay.. precap is good waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally. ... naksh best friends ban gye 👏 majjja aa gya... loved their cutest scenes sooo much...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

ruchi both parts are outstanding.. superb.. wow naksh friendship yyay.. precap is good waiting eagerly

Thanku pragati for ur vry sweet comments. .😃 Yaa I will update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avinaksh

finally. ... naksh best friends ban gye 👏 majjja aa gya... loved their cutest scenes sooo much...

Thanku avi for ur cutee comments yee naksh r frds...
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Posted: 10 years ago
update next part asap... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha

update next part asap... 😆

Yaa picha pilla😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-10
Naksh in clg
Ak-varsa tu sachi thi maine natik ko samjhne mai bhut badi galti ki
Va-mai to hamesha bolti thi ki natik dil ka bhut aacha hai
Ak-are mera singing comptision. Mai ja rhi hu sohurya mera wait kar rha hoga
Va-kon shorya koi new boy hai kya
Ak-haa v mera partner hai isme hum ganna sath mai gayge bas 2 din bache hai mai chalti hu
Va-okk but wb ud bdy
Ak-are wo to one month k bad h na abhi se kya
Va-okk dekte hai kuch karege
Akshi went than natik saw akshi
Na-hii kaha ja rhi ho
Ak-v mera singing comptision hai na do din mai to rehsal
Na-oo all d best mai janta hu meri best frd will be win..
Ak-natik bhut log hai they r also so good I m really norvous
Na-mai hu na tumhare sath nd remember ur moms blessing b to nd payal her love..
Ak-haa natik meri payal b than she saw her one payal is not there
Ak-oo my god meri pyal kha hai than she cry
Na-yhi hogi dekho dont cry they saw here nd there but payal is not found
Akshi badly crying. .
Na-akshi dont cry pls mil jaygi dont he clear akshi tears from his hand..
Ak-set her knees meri mom ki nisani mai kaisi jitugi I lost my every thing natik
Na-he sit on floor nd said dekho ek pyal k kho jane se tum apna viswas mat kho mai janta hu bhut kimti thi v par ek payal tohai na tumhare pass chup ho jao aacha tum aaj kaha kaha gai thi
Ak-nhi natik meri maa ki thi v mai to bas practice ki aur haa washroom gai thi bas
Na-to dekho sayad waha hogi
Ak-mujhe nhi dekhna I lost my payal mai ja rhi hu ab mai jittne wali nhi hu ...cry nd went
Na-jo b ho is tarah tut nhi sakti tum mai dekhuga lauga jaise b ho ..
Than he went practice holl but akshi payal was not there ..than he goes girls washroom ..but stop
Na-are yr mai yha kaisi jau par akshi k face ki hassi v to lani hai he saw here nd there but no girl is there than swly swly he entered
Na-mai gya koi dekh lega to I m finish jaldi jaldi kar he saw here nd there but payal was not finding. .but suddenly in side corner
Na-ye gunguru kaise bikhre hue hai nd saw are y to payal ke matlab ye gunguru akshi k payal k hai waaw great not bad natik singaniya ..but ise banau kaise ise to dukan mai dena padega...sry akshi thoda wait karna phir pyal tumhare pass than one girl came nd shouted bacchao
Na-are yr ye kaha se pls chup karo
Gir-ladka girls washroom mai boy
Na-dekho pls suno mai yha apni frd ki payal kojne aaya tha tum chila k clg ko mat bulao sry mja rha hu
Gi-saw this but natik khaskofy
Na-baap re bacha marte marte but y ready ho jaygi thabhi akshi ko dunga
Here akshi was so sad
Ak-maa mai apki ek chiz b samal nhi pai ab mai kya karugi than natik came
Na-akshi sad ho
Ak-haa tum jante to ho
Na-(man hi man) parso tumhe tumhari payal mil jaygi
Dekho jo ho gya so gya ab aache se gao aur uncle anty tumhe dekh rahe h unhe proud karvao
Ak-kosish karugi natik mere liye sab itna aasan nhi hai
Na-kosish to karo
Ak-hmm
Than comptision all frds say to all d best to akshi
Ak-ye natik nhi aaya abhi tak bas 15 minate bache hai mai khabhi bat nhi karugi esse mere sabse imortant day wale din nhi aaya ye
Than natik came akshi saw him but gave anger look
Na-sry akshi wo mai late ho gya I m realy sry gussa ho
Ak-mai kon hoti hu gussa karne wali frdship to meri h na tumhe kya matlab mai to important hu nhi na
Na-nhi essa nhi hai dekho pls meri bat suno
Than one man came nd said tumhari turn 10 minate mai hai ready
Ak-vry norvous no no mai nhi ga paugi mujhe nhi hoga mai ja k mana kar deti hu ..
Than she was about to go but natik hold her hand
Ak-chodo mujhe
Na-nhi tumhari ek chiz hai mere pass vo le lo phir jao
Ak-mujhe kuch nhi chahiye
Than natik came so close to akshi nd he nikalofy payal ..akshi saw payal nd become vry happy
Ak-yyeee meri payal tears came ..tumhe kaha se mili ..maa thanku so much for
Than
Na-ye tumhare liye mai girl washroom mai gya waha bikhari hui thi mai to tumhe usi din de deta but shop mai time lag gya abhi ise pick kiya aur aaya
Ak-u r such a best frd natik tqq nd kiss natiks hand
Natiks was just lost when akshi touches her lipe on his hand felt so hpy
Na-wo wo tum ab lush ho na
Ak-haa bhut bhut ruko mai pehen leti hu
Na-no kya mai pehna du
Ak-par wo she thought but say ok
Than natik set his kness nd took akshi foot in his hand he was literally capofy to touch akshi
Na-man) ye mujhe kya ho rha hai kyo meri herat beat tej ho rhi hai kyo mujhe ajib sa lag rha hai mera man tumhe hug karne ka kyo kar rha hai than he swly close d payal from his mouth his breat touches to akshi foot she felt
Ak-(man me) ye kya hua mujhe she bite her lipe nd feel this air ...than voo natik ho gya kyya vry Low voice
Na-bas ho gya again his breath touch
Akshi felt again nd close her eyes pls natik
Na-ho gya
Ak-she open her eyes ho gya mai nhi ga paugi
Than name allowance akshra maheswari nd shorya dhoyra
Shorya in stage but akshi
Na-jao name aa gya
Ak-mujhse nhi hoga she hold natiks hand
Na-akshi jao just close ur eyes nd dont think ki tumhare samne koi khada hai just feel ki tum apne papa mom k liye gaa rhi ho just go jaha b hai wo proud karege hamari beti ne try to kiya
Ak-listen this I m going natik nd smile
Na-jao all d best nd gave signal
Than in stage natik is in frount of akshi he gave smile akshi saw only natik nd both r singing
Akshi-bin tumhare ji na paye mangte hai dua yhi rishta hai ye bas pyar ka (show natik) laa laa again sing rishta hai ye bas pyar ka
Sorya-sochta hu ki tumhe kud mai esse lu chupa koi kar hi na sake ek duje se juda (varsa show shorya) aa pass aa
Both -bin tumhare ji na paye mangte hai dua yhi llaa laa laa laa hehe hehe ...finish d song
Akshi in back stage
Shorya-sis bhut aacha gya gya tumne
Ak-apne b broo Waiting for result
So-thodi der mai aa jayga
Ak-hmm
Mai aati hu she thought natil jarur mera wait kar rha hoga meri payal usne mujhe aache se tqq bolna hoga
Here mohit mai aata hu natik told
Mo-Are ruk to ye pagal ho jayga baccha aage aage dekho hota hai kya nd laugh
Natik went nd here akshi saw natik
Na-woo tumne bhut aacha gaya
Ak-mai jit to jaugi na bas name aane wala hai
Than she took hand on natiks hand
Na-bas 5 minate akshi
Akshi -haa
Than within few minate akshi nd shorya win d singing comptision
Akshi was just in shocked she dont understood what she say so she is blank now
Na-tumm jit gai she is just surprised after some time
She blasted natikkk nd she suddunly hug to natik natik is standing like a statchue ..akshi hold to natik vry tightly but natik still same he was shocked confused he dont touch akshi capofy
Ak-in hugging position mai bhut bhut kush hu sab tumhari wajah se hai tum mujhe himat nhi dete to sayad mai gaa hi nhi pati tqq for my payal meri mom ki nisani mujhe dene k liye thanku meri life m aane k liye mere best frd banne k liye waaw my mom dreams come true..tqq for everything
After some time she broke her hug nd came in persent
She saw natik mouth open dont say anything he is standing nd shocked
Ak-woo sry excitement mai sry natik she hilayofy kuch bolo
Na-haa nhi
Ak-bura laga
Na-haa
Ak-kya
Na-nhi
Ak-kya bol rhe ho pls say clear I dont understand
Na-in present nhi mai nhut kush hu yee akshi tum jit gai sab tumhari mehnat ka fal hai maine kuch nhi kiya bas frdship ka dhaga banda hai
Ak-oo natik tum bhut aache ho to is dhage ko khabhi tutne nhi dungi mai wada hai
Na-pakka wada
Ak-hmm
Na-jao trofy le lo jao jaldi
Than akshi nd shorya took trofy nd gave speech
Shorya-mai sabse pehle apni sis jisne mera bhut sath doya usse aur apne frd family ko tqq bolta hu tqq
Ak-mai apne maa bauji ko tqq bolugi jo mere jivan kaaadar hai vo is duniya mai nhi hai par mere sath jarur hai mere chacha ji jinhone mujhe itna bada kiya aur apne frds varsa karisma ko tqq bolugi
In between natik is hpy but sad akshi ne mera namnhi liya koi bat nhi h m hpy hu uske nd turn
Sudden ak-par sabse jayda use tqq bolugi jisne main time mujhme himmat jagai mere khatir meri mom ki nishani mere pass laya mera sabse aacha dost natik .
To hear this natik turn nd became vry hpy nd clapping
Both saw each other ...nd gave smile
Than next day natik nd mohit in canteen
Mo-yr kal bhut aacha laga akshi jit gai
Na-ooyee akshra akshi mere liye sirf
Mo-oohoo kyo ji dono pe ek dusre ka rang chad rha hai
Na-mujhe nhi pata mohit par pata nhi akshi ki aankho me chamak dekh k mujhe bhut kushi milti hai v hpy m hpy
Mo-vo bhut aachi hai she is vry nice nd cutee
Na-hmm
Than naman came
Nama-yr natik le aamose khayga
Na-nhi yr mujheghar ka khana khane ka man kar rha hai vo bgajar ka halva
He said nd saw gajar ka halwa
Na-waaw nd saw face akshi tum par tumhe kaise pata ki
Ak-mujhe nhi pata tha ki tumhe ye pasand hai but mere dil ne bola tumhare liye kuch sweet dish leke jau apne hand se bana to pata nhi gajar ka halva hi yad aaya
Na-mera man bhut man kar raha tha khane ka baitho na
Akshi sit nd gave halwa naman nd mohit both says
Dekh pehle hame phir tujhe
Na-akshi what is this make pappy face
Ak-essa ho sakta hai tumhare liye hi to hai but mai apnehatho se tumhe kilaugi
Natik is so hpy so listen this
Na-waaw nice so aaa than akshi feed to him
Ak-kaisa hai
Tino boys make bad face nd nodded
Ak-aacha nhi hai koi bat nhi mai next time aacha banau gi mat khao nd became sad
Na-nhi ye aacha nhi hai balki bhut bhut bhut aacha hai nd smile balki mera man kar rha hai ki jisne b ye banaya hai uske hat chum lu mai nd smile
Mo-to chum le tere samne hi toh
Akshi shy nd dong say
Na-woo woo mai esse hi chup kar tu aa akshi I m waiting
Ak-ye lo aa feed him
Than one hand touches akshi
Akshra ?????????
So so gyss kaisa laga pls pasand aaye hpy ho is part ko padketo pls likhne wale ko b hpy kar do like ka button press karke aur jayada comments karke ...pls comments I m waiting ...I m not so gud but kam se kam try kar rhi hu gyss
Sry for mistakes.
Precap- akshi ka bdy nd natik ki singing preparation nd surprise. .


Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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