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Posted: 10 years ago
ok ruchu i will wait..
par haa mai force nahi kar karoongi..ok
jab time mile tab karna..
we can understand..okeeei
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyccc part. dear well done...I don't have any word about your off u ryt mind blowing story...plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

ok ruchu i will wait..
par haa mai force nahi kar karoongi..ok
jab time mile tab karna..
we can understand..okeeei

but mein force karoongi kal madam is so free so she will update...
and ha jaldi se in reality unite dem also sweetu... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

ok ruchu i will wait..
par haa mai force nahi kar karoongi..ok
jab time mile tab karna..
we can understand..okeeei

No dear sona nd princess mere pass time hai so I will write thanku for understood😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

but mein force karoongi kal madam is so free so she will update...
and ha jaldi se in reality unite dem also sweetu... 😃

Yup princess😳 true said I also want to write naksh love story nd romance now😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Yup princess😳 true said I also want to write naksh love story nd romance now😛

jaldi se unite dem warna 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

jaldi se unite dem warna 😡

Warna kya🤣
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PART...21
Naitik became shocked to see akshara in his shirt ( ya she is wearing nk's shirt )
ak-sorry nk...
nk-mujhe aapse baat nahi karni.
ak-maine wo aise hi frustation me keh diya tha
nk-toh mai kya karu ?
ak-sab aap ne hi kiya hai... aap hi mujhe itna pyaar karte hain ki mai apne hisse ka attention kisi aur ko dete hue kaise dekh sakti hu ... aap ne naa meri aadat bigaad di hai.
nk-maine nahi aapne meri aadat bigadi hai..jo bhi ho iss waqt mai aapse gussa hu..pls aap mujhe manane ki koshish na kare...mai nahi maan ne wala..
he leave akshara and about to go.
ak-toh iska matlab aap mujhse hamesha naraaz rahenge
nk-hmmm.
ak-toh theek hai aaj se mai bhi aap se gussa hu.
naitik stop on his place...but akshara went from there to her bedroom..
nk(st)-aree ! bas itna hi manaya... aur khud hi chali gayi... kahi akshara mujhse sach me gussa toh nahi ho gayi...koi nahi agar abhi baat nahi bani toh kal tak apni cute akshara ko mai khud hi mana lunga..he smile and went towards his bedroom..
here akshara(st)-ye naitik bhi naa...waise toh mujhse kabhi gussa nahi hote aur aaj..par wo bhi apni jagah sahi hai..maine kaam hi aisa kiya hai..unhe dukhi kar diya..I HATE U AKSHARA...par koi nahi abhi baat na bani toh kal subah apne cute pati ko mana lungi..ab mai apna new formula try karti hu.
she was talking to herself when nk came and sat on the sofa..( with fake anger)...
there was a pin drop silence in the room...
naksh ki talk in mann hi mann..
nk(st)-akshara ab toh mana lijiye..i promise mai jaldi se maan jaunga
ak-mai aayi thi nk par aap nahi maane
nk-toh theek hai.GOOD NITE
ak-GOOD NITE.
both lay on their respective place...akshara on bed n nk on sofa.
but their eyes watching each other.
akshara start her plan no. second.
ak-uff ! iss AC me bhi kitni garmi lag rahi hai...she quickly open her shirt's upper two buttons.
here naitik became happy to see her...but his bad luck he can't do anything.
he turn to the otherside...
akshara-uff ! ye mujhe itni garmi kyu lag rahi hai..
she again open her shrit's one more button.
nk(st)-jitna tadpana hai mujhe tadpa lijiye madam...aaj maine bhi kasam khai hai...ki mai nahi maan ne wala.
ak(st)-kya nk...mai pehli baar aapke liye itni besharam ban rahi hu...aur aap hai ke ek nazar mujhe dekh bhi nahi rahe. :(
she made a puppy face...and angrily closed her eyes.
after some time
akshara again open her eyes to see nk...but he is in sleep
ak-so gaye...wo bhi bina mujhse baat kiye
suddenly she saw a cockroach jump on her...
ak-aaa...aaa...naitik
she quickly got up from bed and fall on the floor
naitik wake up by her voice...but did'nt turn to see her
nk(st)-mere saath rehkar ak bhi nautanki karne lagi...he again close his eyes
but when after some time he did'nt hear anything...then he trun to see ak but she was not on the bed
nk-akshara ?
he quickly got up n came near bed...where he found ak is faint...he became worried to see her like this
nk-ak kya hua aapko ? apni aankhe kholiye...
he take her in his arms n make her laid on the bed
nk(worriedly)-ak...i am sorry maine aapko dekha nahi...pls apni aankhe kholiye...aap garmi ki wajah se behosh ho gayi...mai kya karu
he pour some water on her face...but she is cmming in her senses...
naitik became more panic...
nk-ye uth kyu nahi rahi hai ? ak pls uthiye naa
he hugs her..." mai aapse kabhi gussa nahi hunga " pls uthiye...
with his word akshara smile n said " pakka "
naitik broke their hug.
nk-ak aap ye
ak-mai mazak kar rahi thi...aur aap hai ki serious ho gaye
nk-ak mujhse aisa mazaak pasand nahi
ak-jaanti hu...par aap uthe bhi toh nahi mujhse dekhne ke liya ki kya hua ?
nk-maine socha aap mazak kar rahi hai
ak-pata hai mere upar cockroach aa gaya...aur tabhi mai jaag gayi aur bed par se uthi toh neeche gir gayi...aur phir ye bahana kiya
nk-aap bhi naa
ak-i am sorry nk...pls mujhse maaf kar dijiya
nk-its ok ak...aur waise maine aapko study room me hi maaf kar diya tha...bas thoda natak kar raha tha
ak-pakaa
nk-hmmm..
naksh again hug eachother...
nk-love u
ak-love ui too
naitik came over akshara when...
ak-aaahhh !
nk(worriedy)-kya hua ?
ak-wo mai jab giri naa...toh pair me lag gayi
he quickly got up...
nk-ak aap ne pehle kyu nahi bataya...bataiye medicine kaha hai...mai laga deta hu
ak-nk wo kal hi khatam ho gayi thi...rehne dijiye ye theek ho jayega
nk-aise kaise theek ho jayega...
he quickly took a cloth n put akshara's leg on his lap...n start blowing some air from his muth...nd rub it on her leg...
akshara became emotional
nk-ab theek hai
ak-hmmm..
nk-mai aur kar du
ak-nahi...ab rehne dijiye
nk-ok...
naitik take her leg nd kiss there...
ak-nk pls aap mere pair ko...
nk-kyu ? jab aap par mera poor haq hai...toh inn par kyu nahi
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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with this nk start rub his lips on her legs...n ak start moanning his name...
he again make her laid on bed n come top of her...with his one hand nk start opening her shirt's rest button and kissed her neck sensiously...she was breathing heavily nd moaning...in few seconds nk removed her shirt fully from her body and his shirt too...ak rolled over bed coming top on him...she started kissing his chest wildly bitting him...
when he could'nt able to take her assualt he grab her waist nd roll over bed taking her under him...he layed on top of her kissing her at every place...he kissed her hungrily as he became more agressive...
she moaned his name in pain...he took her lips in passionate yet soft kiss...their bodied entangled with eachother...
after thier love making session she rested herself in his arms...nk covered themselves with blanket...
nk-akshara...
ak-hmmm.
nk-wo party me udaipur se maa ka phone aaya tha...
ak(happily)-sach kya kaha unhone?
nk-yahi ki hum apni wedding aniversary waha sabke saath manaye...
ak-wow !nk ye kitna accha hoga ki hum apni first wedding aniv. waha manayenge...
but with this she became sad...
ak-nahi...aisa kijiye aap maa se mana kar dijiye
nk-kya ak ?
ak-nk mai nahi chahti ki iss wajah se aap ka kaam suffer kare...aur waise bhi aap ne kaha hai ki hum next week jayenge...hum aniversary yahi mana lenge...
nk-ak hamari aniversary ko poore paanch din baaki hai...tab kar mai apna kaam khatam kar loonga
ak-par hum rahenge toh yahi
nk-ji nahi...hum kal hi udaipur chalenge...aur mai apna kaam waha se bhi kar loonga...aur phir hum apni grand aniversary celebrate karnege...hmm..
ak-thank u nk...
nk-isi bahane mai bhi apni saas ka thoda pyaar paa lunga...
ak-hmm..aur dekhiyega maa aapko mujhse zyada pyaar karengi...
nk-accha ab so jate hain...kal mai apne ffice ka thoda kaam khatam kar loonga...aur din ki flight se hum aapke ghar...
ak-ji...
and both slept in eachothers arms...
NEXT DAY...
naitik did his some work in office...n after that naksh pack their bags... and fly off for udaipur...
HERE IN UDAIPUR...
rajshri n vish is super happy that after a long three months her akshara n jamai saa is going to come here...
rj-tum sab se koi kaam jaldi nahi hota...yaha itni shaam hone ko aayi hai...akshara aur jamai saa kisi bhi waqt yaha aate hi honge...aur ghar ki ye haalat hai...
vi-aap chinta kyu karti hai...bas aap apni bitiya aur jamai saa ka acche se swaagat kare
rj-ji wo toh mai karoongi hi...pata nahi dono abhi tak aaye kyu nahi...ji aapne driver ko bheja toh hai naa
vi-haaa...
but he stop in between when they heard..." maa"
rajshri's heart became emotional to heat this word...
rj-akshara meri bacchi...
akshara quickly ran towards her parents n hug them...
rj start crying to see her beti...so as akshara
ak-maa...aap kyu rone lagi...mai aa gayi naa
rj-haa...tu bhi toh ro rahi hai
ak-wo toh bas aise hi...
akshara hugs vish:
ak-aap kaise hai bau ji?
vi-bas aapka intezaar kar raha tha...waise hamare jamai saa kaha hai
ak-naitik wo...
when nk came in...
nk-bas bauji wo kuch kaam tha...
he came n take blessings from rj n vish
rj-aap dono aaiye naa... baithiye...
naksh came in the hall n sat there...
akshara start looking at here n there n beccame emotional
rj-kuch nahi badla hai beta...tu jaisa chodkar gayi thi...tera ghar aaj bhi waisa hai...
ak-nahi maa...yaha sab kuch badal gaya hai...
vi-kya aap dono bhi...jamai saa yaha pehli baar rehne aaye hain aur aap yu baate karne algi...
rj-ji mai abhi aayi
she came with so many sweets n snaks with her...
rj-lijiye jamai saa... khaiye...aur tu bhi kha dekh kitni dubli ho gayi hai...
akshara came near rj n sat beside her...and rested her head on rj's shoulder...
ak-mai kha loongi maa...pehle aap ye bataiye...ki ye ghar itna kyu sajaya ja raha hai...
rajshri n vishambhar look at eachother...
rj-wo beta baat ye hai ki...(stop)
" wo kya batayegi...mai batati hu meri bitiya "
akshara's face became light to see her nani...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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ak(surprised)-nani ! aap ?
she quickly got up...n hug her nani...
nani-akshara ye saari taiyaari teri shadi ki ho rahi hai...
suddenly naitik chocked his tea from his mouth...n akshara became shocked...
ak-kya? meri shadi ?
naitik too got up from his place...
nani-haa beta teri shadi...aur rajshri aur jamai saa ne toh tere liye ladka bhi pasand kar liya hai
akshara angriliy look at them...and with ishara's
she asked them " ye kya keh rahi hai ?"
rajshri assure her to stay quite...
and on the other side vish gave a wink to naitik...so he too became relax...
nani-rajshri...tu hi bata naa akshara ko ki tume ladke ko pasand kar liya hai...aur paanch din baad iski shadi hai...
rj-haa maa mai keh doongi...pehle aap aaiye aur hamare hone wale jamai saa se miliye...
nani-haa kaha hai chora...
rj bring her infront of naitik...
rj-maa ye hai...
naitik take blessings from ak's nani...
nk-radhe krishna nani ji...
nani-ye hai chora ? tune ise pasand kiya hai hamari phool si bacchi ke liye
rj-haa maa kya hua ?
nani-" jitni bhooli dikhe hu utni hu naa" " chaar baatein mujhse bulwa hi lete ho " ladka theek hai...par chora mota laage hai...
akshara giggle on this...
rj-maa kya aap bhi...
nani-theek hai jo bhi hai...apni sneha bitiya ki shadi me toh mai naa thi...par ab apni akshara bitiya ki shadi dhoom dhaam se karoongi...accha baate karte karte mai bhool gayi...mai pooja karne jaa rahi hu...accha jamai sa mai chalti hu...aap bhi naashta karke jaldi se yaha se chale jaiyega...yu shadi se pehle ladke ka ghar aana accha nahi lagta...radhe krishna...
and by this ak's nani went to the mandir...
naksh came ear ish n rj...
ak(angrily)-maa ye sab kya hai ? nani ko kya ho gaya ?
nk(worriedly)-haa maa ye sab
vi-akshara jamai saa aap hamari baat suniye
ak-kya baat hai ?
rj-akshara maa ki tabiyaat kuch theek nahi beta...isliye humne unhe tere aur sneha ke baare me unhe kuch nahi bataya
ak-wo toh theek hai maa...par ye shadi ?
rj-beta unhe lagta hai ki sneha ki shadi ho gayi...aur wo mujhse isliye naraaz hai ki unhe shadi me nahi bulaya...aur galti se mere muh se nikal gaya ki aap apne saare armaan akshara ki shadi me poore kar lijiyega...
vi-haa beta wo toh aapke liye ladke bhi dekhne ja rahi thi...par hum ne kaha ki hum ne pehle se hi ladka dekh rakha hai...
ak-ye kya kiya aap dono ne..
nk(happily)-akshara isme problem kya hai ? waise bhi paanch dino me hamari aniversary hai...toh ise bahane hum phir se shadi kar lenge...ye toh accha hua ki maa bau ji ne mera naam liya...warna aniversary ke din mai apni biwi ki shadi kisi aur se karwa raha hota..
ak-kya nk aap bhi
rj-ha akshara jamai saa theek keh rahe hai...isi bahane hamare baccho ki khushi khushi shadi ho jayegi...
ak-theek hai maa hum ready hai...
naksh look at eachother...and nk gave a naughty wink to akshara...which vishambhar saw
vish cleared his throat..." aham..aham"
and with this naksh became shy...
rj-toh theek hai baccho...hum kal se aap dono ki shadi ki taiyaariyaan shuru kar dete hain...
vi-aap dono araam kar lijiye...phir dinner par milte hain...
rj-haa beta akshara maine tera room saaf karwa diya hai tu jamai saa ko waha le ja
ak-ji maa...
vish and rajsri walking togehter...n naksh behind them...
nk-wow! akshara iss baar hum apni shadi ko acche se enjoy karnege...
ak-haa naitik wo bhi ek saath mikar...
suddenly they heard nani's voice again...
nani-akshara ?
all turned too see her...
ak-ji nani
nani-beta tu aaj se mere saath sona...aapni pyaari naatin ke saath ye kuch samay bita lu...
naitik's eye became shocked..." what "
akshara nodded her head in yes...
nani-aur aap jamai saa...abhi tak toh aapko apne ghar chale jana chahiye beta... zamana bahut kharab hai...ab kal akshara se sagai me milyega...
nk( made a sad face )-ji nani
akshara too became sad...but she can't doo anything
rj-maa...jamai saa ko bhi aaj
nani-naa hamare yaha shadi se pehle aldka ladki aise na mile hai
nk(sadly)-koi baat nahi nani ji...mai apne ghar jata hu...radhe krishna maa bau ji... bye akshra...
with this naitik take his bag and went from there...
and akshara eye filled with tears " bye naitik "
PRECAP-NAKSH KI CHUP CHUP KE NIGHT WALI MEETING...
SO FRIENDS HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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