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Posted: 10 years ago
PART..20
flashback
ak-naitik mai wo aaj..( she stop )
when sneha knock at the door..
naitik got up from akshara..
ak-mai dekhti hu..
she quickly open the door..
sn-kya kar rahe ho tum dono..naitik se kaho jaldi ready ho jaye..sab aane wale honge..
ak-par di mai naitik se kya kahu ?
sn-wo meri problem nahi hai..jaldi karo hotel me guest aane hi wale honge..
ak-ji..
sneha went from there n akshara again came in the room
nk-kya hua..ab kya kehne aayi thi aapki di ?
ak-amm..kuch toh nahi bas aise hi.
nk-ohhh
ak-naitik chaliye jaldi se fresh hokar ready ho jaiye..
nk-kyu mujhe kaha jana hai ?
ak-pls naitik hum party nahi kar sakte iska matab ye nahi ki aap mujhe aur di ko dinner par nahi le ja sakte..
nk-akshara toh phir sirf aap chaliye naa..sneha ko saath le chalne ki kya zaroorat hai
ak-naitik aise accha lagega kya..?
nk-ok fine..chaliye
ak( excited )-thank u naitik..mai abhi ready hokar aati hu..
she quickly kiss on his cheeks..and ran from there..
nk-aree akshara wo baat..
but she was no where..
after some time naitik got ready..and came in the hall." calling akshara akshara " but sneha came there wearing a black backless gown..naitik again igore her..
nk-akshara jaldi aaiye
akshara from upstairs " ha aa rahi hu "
sn-thanks naitik
nk-kis baat ke liye ?
sn-mujhe bhi apne saath le jane ke liye
nk-iske liye mujhe nahi tum akshara ko thanks kaho..ye unhi ka idea hai
sn-yaa..waise meri dress toh theek hai naa..
nk-ya its good..
sn(smile)-thanks
naitik became uncomfortable..
but atleast akshara came there..
naitik's eyes glued on her..when he saw akshara in a black saree..
ak-mai theek toh lag rahi hu naa..
naitik gave thumbs up to her..and a naughty flying kiss..but akshara gave a glare look to him..
sn(angrily)-ab chale akshara.
ak-haa di..
sneha start walking fastly and naksh behind her.
nk-akshara hum yahi ruk jaye kya ?
ak-ji nahi..
they reached towards the car..
naksh sat on the front seat n sneha on back seat..
on the way..
nk-toh kaha chalna hai hume ?
ak-hotel palace..
nk-good aapne toh sab soch rakha hai.
ak-hmm..
akshara was feeling something on her back..and naitik notice it..
naksh eyes through their eyes..without talking
nk-kya hua ?
ak-peeche kuch problem hai
nk-dikhaiye..
akshara shift a little from her seat..
nk(smile )-..
because akshara inner was visible from her blouse..
ak-hasiye mat naitik..
nk-mai theek kar du ?
akshara again gave a glare..
ak-no mai di se kehti hu..
nk-pls akshara..
when sneha interrupt.." hotel aa gaya ".
naitik park the car..and sneha came out..so as naitik..but akshara is not comming..
sn- akshara aa naa bahar..kya hua ?
nk( teases her )-haa akshara aaiye na bahar..kitna late karti hai aap.
sn-sach kaha naitik ye hamesha se aise hi hai
nk(irritatingly)- itna bhi late nahi hua hai..mai toh bas..khair tum chalo hum aate hai.
sn-ok
and she leaves
here akshara trying hard to fix her problem..and naitik came in the car again.
nk-mere bina aap ye nahi kar sakti akshara
ak-ji nahi mai kar longi
nk-theek hai jaisa aap chahe..mai apna bacha kucha bday yahi car me manga loonga..aisa karta hu mai dinner bhi yahi ke liye order kar leta hu
when akshara rememered about party
ak-ohh haa naitik pls ise theek kar dijiye
nk-nahi..
ak-pls naitik
nk-pehle ek kiss
ak-aapko bas na mauka chahiye
nk-haa
akshara came closer and gave a quick peck on his lips..
ak-abhi itna hi..
nk(sadly)-theek hai..par baad me ise poora karna hoga..jab aur jaha bhi ma kahu
ak-mazoor
akshara turn back and naitik dis his work..
nk-ho gaya
ak-ab dikh toh nahi raha
nk-nahi..aur dikhega toh mai hu naa..
ak-ji..ab chale
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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naksh together enterted in a hall..which was fully dark
nk-yaha toh kitna andhera hai akshara..hai naa
ak-...
nk-akshara..
when all the guest said together.." HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAITIK " and lights get on..
nk(surprised)-thank u so much..
akshara came near him..
ak-kaisa laga hamara surprise ?
nk-bahut pyaara..thank u akshara..
akshara dragged him in the hall..
" oooye naitik " " saari baatein biwi se hi karega..ya phir hamare liye bhi bachayega..
naksh came towards mohini..and hug them..
mo-happy birthday yaar
nan-haapy bday naitik
nk-thank u di..par aap dono jaipur se kab aaye
mo-bas bhabhi ne phone kiya aur hum yaha
ak-thank u didi aur mohit ji..jo aap dono itne short time me yaha paye
nan-kyu nahi akshara aakhir mere bhai ka bhi bday tha..
nk-accha aap sab baatein kijiye mai ajay se mikar aata hu..
mo-haa jaa bhabhi ne hamare saare collgege friends ko bulaya hai..actually mai bhi tere saath chalta hu..
naitik n mohit went from there..
but akshara start looking at here n there
nan-kise dekh rahi ho ak
ak-sneha di ko
nan-tumhari behen..right ? wo yaha
ak-ha didi di ab hamare saath hi rehti hai
nan-par kyu i mean tumhare maa bauji
ak-wo abhi nani ke yaha gaye hai
nan-aur naitik ko koi problem nahi hai
ak-nahi di..par mai samajh sakti hu aap kya kehna chahti hai..
nan-dekho akshara..mujhe galat mat samajhna par yu sneha ko apne aur naitik ke saath me rakna mujhe ye theek nahi lagta..aur baaki tum khud hi samajh sakti hai
nandini patted her shoulder and leave..
ak(st)-par agar di hamare saath nahi toh kaha rahegi..
here naitik and mohit talking to eachother..when akshara came
mo-aree bhabhi aap..ab aap hi ise samjhaiye ki mujhe bhi laldi se fufa banaye aur nandini ko bua
naksh look at eachother
mo-aree ek doosre ko mat dekho hamari baaton par dhyaan do
nk-haa haa denge..par abhi nahi..actually hum abhi teri tarah buddhe nahi hue..kyu akshara ?
ak smiles..n said " nk aapne di ko dekha " ?
mo-ha shayad abhi bahar gayi thi
ak-acccha mai dekhkar aati hu..
naitik holds her hand.." aap rukiye mai dekhkar aata hu "
ak-hmm..
akshara start preparing for cake cutting n here naitik came outside in search fr sneha..and saw that she was comming with a big gift..
sn-sorry nk mai bina bataye chai aayi
nk-its ok..wo akshara andar pareshaan ho rahi thi..waise ita bade gift ki kya zaroorat thi
sn-kyyu nahi tum dono ke liye aaj itna bada din jo hai
nk-matlab ? bada din kyu
sn-tumhe akshara ne kuch bataya nahi kya ?
nk-kis baare me ?
sn-ohh lagta hai surprise rakha hai..
nk( confused )-kaisa surprise wo toh mujhe mil gaya
sn-isse bhi bada surprise hai naitik..akshara is pregnent..
nk(shocked)-what ?
sn-haa..aur tum papa banne wale ho
naitik'S eye filled with tears..
nk-sach..mai papa..par tumhe
sn-aaj mai doctor ke paas gayi thi akshara ko lekar..wahi se pata chala
nk-wow ! hum dono ke liye isse accha surprrise
kya ho sakta hai..mai papa aur ak mumma..mai abhi jakar akshara se poochta hu..
sn-aaa..aaa naitik aisa karo ye announcement tum andar sabke saamne karna
nk-ya good idea..thanks
naitik quicklyy went in..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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akshara was blowing candle for cake cutting..and she saw nk and sn came there..naitik came and stand beside her..his smile was unstopable..
nk ( whisper )-I LOVE U AKSHARA
ak-I LOVE U TOO NAITIK..par aap itna smile kyu kar rahe hai ?
nk-bas aise hi aap par pyaar aa raha hai
ak-naitik koi nayi baat bataiye.
when nandini says " aree ab cake bhi kaat do naitik "
nk-ji didi..aur cake cutting ke baad mujhe aap sab se apni life ki sabse badi khushi share karni hai..
he happily look at akshara
ak-kaun si baat ?
nk-abhi bataunga naa..
akshara nodded her head..
after that naitik cut the cake..and firstly feed it to akshara..and kiss on her cheeks
akshara too feed him..
and naitik pointed to kiss him..
ak-yaha par
nk-aap bhool gayi
akshara too kiss him on his cheeks
mo-ye lo yaha bhi shuru ho gaya..laila majnu ka romance..
and akshara became shy on this..
all guest gave their present to naitik..so as sneha..
sn-naitik ab toh wo baat bata do..
nk-hmm..
naitik-attention my friends..thank u soo much ki aap sab yaha meri khushi me aaye..aur hame itna pyaar diya..par ab mai chahta hu ki aap sab mujhse aur meri lovely wife akshara ko dheer saari wishes de..
mo-ha kyu nahi nk par baat kya hai ?
akshara became confused by nk's word
nk-hmm
he came behind akshara and hug her from back.and sneha smiling while watching them
ak-naitik..?
he put his both hands on ak's tummy
ak-nk ye kya ?
nk-mai aap sab ko ye batana chata hu ki my loving wife akshara is pregnent..aur i am going to be a father soon..
akshara's eye became red and teary with his sentences..
nan-kya ? sach akshara..congrats..
mohit came n hug naitik
mo-congrats yaar..ye toh sach me badi baat hai
akshara was about to say but all were giving them blessings..
but now she didn't want to hide anything
she came near naitik and make him to face her
nk-ak kya hua ?
ak(shouted)-kisne kaha ye sab aap se ?
nk-aap aise kyu keh rahi hai
ak-pehe bataiye ye sab aapse kisne kaha ?
nk-sneha ne..
nk became confused.." akshara "
ak-nahi hu mai pregnent..
she started crying loudly..and sat on the floor
naitik-ak aap yu..pls roiye mat
ak-nahi hu mai pregnent naitik..i am sorry.
naitik's eyes became teary
nk-koi baat nahi akshara..
ak-i am sorry..
she hugs him..
ak-mai kabhi maa nahi ban sakti..di ne aapse jo kuch kaha wo galat hoga..
nk-ak aap aise kyu keh rahi hai ?
ak-doctor ne bataya tha mujhe
nk-its ok akshara..mai hu naa aapke saath aur hame kya chahiye..aap rona band kijiye..hmm
he wipe her tears and make her stand
mo-its ok bhabhi ye sab toh hota rehta hai
nan-ha akshara nk hai naa tumhare saath th phir kyu rona..sab theek ho jayega
sn-aise kaise theek h jayega jab doctor ne khud kaha
by her word naitik came infront of her
nk-jab tumhe pata tha toh ye sab kyu kiya [ angrily )
sn-kyunki mai tumhe dikhana chahti thi..ki akshara tumhare liye kuch nai kar sakti..wo tumhe koi khushi nahi de sakti..
nk-acche toh tumhe itni problem kyu ho rahi hai..ye hamari life hai..aur isme tumhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai..GOT IT
naitik turn to go back
sn-tum akshara ko divorce de do naitik..phir hum dono shadi kar lenge naitik..mai tumhe har khushi de sakti hu..wo bhi jiska sapna ye akshara kabhi poora nahi kar sakti
naitik turn to slap her..but akshara stop him.
ak-nahi naitik..
nk-par akshara ise dekha naa..aap abhi bhi iska saath dengi..
sn-dekha naitik ye tumhe kabhi khush nahi rakh sakti..hamesha apni baat manwaati hai..iski wajah se tum hamesha bina bacche ke..
ak( angrily )-bas di..ab aur nahi..aaj aapne apni hadeein paar kar di..mai har baar aapki baat sutni rahi..par agar aapne mere pati ko kuch kaha ya aapki wajah se unki aankhon me aansu aaye..toh mai aapko kabhi maaf nahi karongi
sn-itni hi chinta hai apne pati ki toh unhe khush kyu nahi hone deti.karwa do apne pati se meri shadi
akshara slapped her.." ab nahi di "
she holds sneha's hand and dragged her twards the hotel door..
ak-aaj se marr gayi aap mere liye..
sn-theek hai akshara..par tum bhi kabhi khush nahi reh paogi
ak-jab tak naitik mere saath hai..mujhe kisi aur ki parwaah nahi..
and she went in..
when he listen some knock at the bathrrom door and naitik's flashback came to an end..
PRECAP-NAITIK BECAME ANGRY IN BUSINESS PARTY WITH AKSHARA..HW SHE MANAOFY HIM ?
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

good morning to all my friends

gud mng...
cryu i have another wish in ff kya u will fulfill it????
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--


gud mng...
cryu i have another wish in ff kya u will fulfill it????

yup batao naa..
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Posted: 10 years ago
you said 1 yr is over na...
so nw u bring remarriage track of naksh on their anniv as they didnt enjoy it properly first time...
this time with all happiness u update remarriage track if possible...
its only my wish dear...
if possible pls do it... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
sach kahu toh mai bhi naksh ki anniversry likhne wali thi..isiliye one year ka leap kiya..
par socha tha aise hi mana lenge..toh theek hai ab mai naksh ke remarriage dikha dungi..
maza aayega..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

sach kahu toh mai bhi naksh ki anniversry likhne wali thi..isiliye one year ka leap kiya..
par socha tha aise hi mana lenge..toh theek hai ab mai naksh ke remarriage dikha dungi..
maza aayega..

haa par naksh ki remaariage likho beech mein ur marriage math lekar aao 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
meri marriage means ? TWIST WALI
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

meri marriage means ? TWIST WALI

nahi kahi xcitement mein akshi kijagah cryu na likhde tum ..jaise kal ki part mein my body likha... 😆😆

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