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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

sonal its really really amazing and sweet part pls wrote soon next part

thank u sooo much pragati dear for ur lovely comment..
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Posted: 10 years ago
meri comment ka koi jawaab nahi 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avinaksh

Please update na now

areyy avi sonal is busy...
i know u and me cant w8 for ff... 🤣
but kya kare we need to understand her and w8 until she finds time to update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
kuch bhi ho jaye mai kal pakaa update karooongi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-12.
NEXT MORNING..
in kitchen
naksh were sleeping in sitting position together..when akshara wake up and saw naitik still sleeping..after that she got up from there and about to wake him up..but seeing his cute face she leave it..
akshara came in nandini's room..
and shouted " naaaiitttiiikkk "
naitik quickly wake up and ran upstairs in the room..
nk-akshara kya hua ? aap itni tez se kyu chillaai ?
ak-naitik nandini didi yaha nahi hai..
nk-ha toh isme kya hai shayad wo mere room me hongi mohit ke paas..
ak-hmmm..
nk-aur haa pls aaj se aap mujhe aise mat daraiyega..
ak-matlab.?
nk-aree meri jaan nikal gayi thi..
ak-kya naitik aap bhi..chaliye hum nandini di ko dekhte hai
nk-ya right..
when naitik's phone bell rings..
nk-hello !
its mohit..
nk-aree yaar didi kaha hai ?
mo-ghar par apne room me.
nk-par yaha par di nahi hai
mo-aree waha kaise hogi..wo apne ghar par hai.
nk-matlab tum dono
mo-ji haa hum apne ghar wapas aa gaye
nk -par kya hua ?
mo-kuch nahi bas ye sab kal hamara plan tha
nk-plan..
mo-hmm..kyunki mai aur sweetheart aap dono ko ek surprise dena chahte the..
nk-surprise..wo kaise ?
mo-acccha pehle ye bata tu hai kaha ?
nk-di ke room me
mo-accha toh side par jo table hai waha dekh
naitik did the same..and he found an envelop
mo-ab use dekho aur haa usme jo kuch hai sab padh lena..bye
nk-ok.
ak-isme kya hai naitik ?
nk-pata nahi dekhta hu
he quickly open it and found " holiday trip to shimla "
ak-wow ! holiday trip
nk(st)- holiday nahi madam..honeymoon trip..thank u mohit and di
nk-hmmm..
he read a letter too..in which everythjng was already done by mohini.
ak(excitedly)-naitik hum kab jayenge shimla..?
nk-aaj..
ak-toh mai jaldi se aapka aur mera bag pack kar leti hu..
nk-par aapke kapde
ak-wo maine maa se kehkar kal raat ko hi mangwa liye the..
nk-good..toh chaliye mai bhi packing me madad kar deta hu..
ak-ji nahi mai janti hu aapki madad..aap rehne dijye mai kar loongi.
nk-ok..
and with this naksh getting alreadyy to go to the evening..
IN FLIGHT..
naksh were sitting at the last seat..where no one can disturb the newly weds..
akshara is smiling like a hell..which was noticable by anyone so as naitik..
nk-kya hua ? aap itna kyu has rahi hai ?
ak-wo kya hai na naitik aaj mai pehli baar plne me baith rahi hu naa isliye..
nk(shocked)-what [ pehli baar wo kaise ?
ak-kyunki isse pehle mai aaj tak kabhi baha nahi gayi..
nk-ohhh ! kabhi aap bahar ghoomne nehi jaati thi ? i mean apni family aur friends ke saath
ak-nahi..bau ji toh kehte the..par maa ne kabhi nahi kaha..bas di ko hi wo bhejte hai..
naitik holds her hand..
nk-koi baat nahi..ab mai hu naa appke saath toh apko poori duniya dikhaunga..ok
ak(blush)-ji..
on this he wants to came near her but akshara pushed him back
ak-naitik kya hai yaha plane me..
nk-ha toh isme problem kya hai..
ak-problem hai kitne saare log hai aur koi dekh lega toh
nk-toh dekh le waise bhi hame kaun pehchaanta hai
ak-shhh !
after three an hour naksh reached at their hotel
and akshara's excitement became double..
recp- welcome sir..in ur honeymoon destination..
naitik thanked her..but akshara sayss " sorry its our holiday destination "
by this naitik look at her with a strange look..
recp- ohhh !
she handover the keys to naitik..and both came in their honeymoon sweet..
It was a beautiful room..made by wood..
full off covered with roses..thei bed too looking like a heaven on earth..the fregnance of love is filled in the room already..
ak-wow ! beautiful room
nk-accha laga aapko
ak-bahut..pata hai aisa room maine pehli baar dekha hai..m
naitik just smile on her cute talks
ak-naitik
nk-hmm..
ak-mai abhi ready hokar aati hu phir hum kahi ghoomne chalenge
she quickly ran to get ready
nk-par akshara meri baat..theek hai aap bahut se kapde pehen lijiyega bahar bahut thand hogi
ak(from washroom)-ji
naksh came out from the hotel to explore the beauty of shimla..
ak-ammm..yaha toh bahut thand hai naitik
nk-ye toh kuchj bhi nahi hai akshara waha mountain par toh snowfall bhi hota hai
ak-accha toh jaldi se chaliye naa
nk-par agar aapkoo thand lag gayi toh
ak-kuch bhi ho mujhe jana hai
nk-theek hai agar aapko thand lage toh mai u aapse chipak jaunga
he came near her and hug her from behind
ak-naitik pls holidays par aisa nahi karte
nk-kya ?
ak-ab itna sochiye mat aur chaliye..
nk-yaa..
naitik thought why akshara is saying like this..?
they came together on a mountain where so many people were already there..
ak-yaha se ye seher kitna sundar dikta hai..hai naa natik..?
nk-hmm..
ak-kya hua aap aise udaas kyu hai ?
nk-kuch toh nahi mai theek hu
ak-pakka
nk-haa pakka..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nk-akshara mai wo..
he touched her hand when she again saw something..
ak-naitik chaliye na hum uss hotel me chale mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai..
nk-chaliye
they came in a restaurant..naitik order some chineese food for akshara and coffee for himself..he drank his coffee while continuously watching akshara..
ak-naitik next time hum maa bau ji nandini di aur mohit ji ke saath yaha aayenge..ok
nk-...
with no answer she look at naitik..
ak-naitik aap mujhe sach me pareshaan lag rahe hai..bataiye na kya hua ?
nk-akshara aapko pata hai na hum yaha ku aaye hai ?
ak-haa..holiday par..shimla ghoomne..moht ji aur didi ne hame ye holiday package gift kiya hai
nk-ha wo toh hai par..kya aapko itna nahi pata ki unhone hame ye holiday kyu gift kiya hai..
ak-naitik bataya naa shimla ghoomne ke liye..
nk-uff ! aap itni bhooli kyu hai ?
ak-kya hua naitik maine kuch galat kaha kya ?
nk-nahi bilkul nahi yaha saare couples toh yaha shimla ko pyar karne aate hai..aur ha kabhi kabhi toh family ke saath bhi aate hai
ak-naitk aap aise kyu bol rahe hai..
nk-akshara..akshara hum yaha apne honeymoon par aaye hai
ak-honeymoon par ?
nk-haa
ak-par honeymoon toh pati patni decide karte hai..
nk-ji nahi kabhi kabhi gift package me bhi milta hai..aur aap itna nahi samjh payi..yaha tak mujhe apna haath bhi pakadne diya.. :(
ak-sorry naitik..mujhe laga ki hum yaha
nk-akshara agar hum yaha holiday par bhi aate toh kya aap mujhe apne aapko touch bhi na karne deti..
ak-sach naitik i am sorry..
nk-its ok..accha aapka khana ho gaya
ak-ji
nk-toh ab..
ak-ammm..ab dance
nk-dance..wo bhi yaha par..
ak-haa..maine films me dekha hai hero heroine apne honeymoon par..aise hi snow wale mountain par dance karte hain..
nk-akshara ye filmy nahi real life wala honeymoon hai..aise nahi hota hai isme
ak-accha toh phir kya hota hai isme..?
nk-isme pehle hum ek doosre ke kareeb aate hai..phir ek doosre ko dekhte hai..par kiss karte hai..aur phir (stop)
ak-theek hai theek hai uske aage mujhe pata hai..
nk-aree waah ! iska matlab hai aapko kuch sikhana nahi padega..
ak-mr. naitik singhania aapne abhi tak mujhe jana hi kaha..
she quickly got up..hold naitik's hand..and dragged him towards the snow fall..
" pyaar hai tujhpe aa raha " song start..
akshara start sing
" pyaar hai tujhpe aa raha
paas aa ab a door ja "
(she came near him )
" sun zara mujhko thaam le
dil mera bas me naa raha "
(naitik hold her from behind)
" kwahishon ko naye jase parr mil gaye
pyaar ka aasmaa mil gaya "
" saath rehn mere umar bhar ke liye
mujhse hona na ek pal juda
( they started throwing snow on eachother)
" bin tumhare jee na paye
maagte hai dua yahi
rishta hai ye bas pyaar kaa..
( akshara started ran from there nd natik behind her )
while running she falls down on snow..and naitik too came over her..
nk-hmmm..ab kaha jayengi ?
ak-kahi nahi..bas aapke pyaar me khona chahti hu
nk-accha toh ab aapka next filmy gyaan kya kehta hai
ak-hotel chale..
nk-ji nahi akahara..films toh maine bhi dekhi hain aur hamesha song ke baad..
ak-naitik..
nk-kya naitik..ab jab saare kaam film ke hisaab se karne hai toh ye kaam poora kiya bina mai aapko yaha se nahi jaane dunga..
ak-accha toh kya karenge aap..
he came near her neck open her jacket's zip..and bite on her neck..
akshara moaned with his passion..
nk-ye karoonga..aur aap ?
akshara quickly push him another side..now naitik lay on the snow..she came over him and sat on him..
ak-ab meri baari..
she too open his jacket's zip and start kissing his neck..
nk-akshara sab kuch yahi hoga..ya phir

nk(st)-wow ! akshara toh badi fast nikli..
ak-haa kyu nahi..par usse pehle..
she came near his lips and start kissin there passionately..
the beauftiul mountains too became shy to see their passionate love..
after that
they return back to their hotel room..

PRECAP..NAKSH HOT POOL ROMANCE..
HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS PART..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanksss a ton for ur update...
lst mein short but sweet romance akshi ne icecream haathon se khaaliya🤣
and naitik thinking mohit as akshi was just 😆😆😆
do update when u have time...
and naksh hm w8ing for it...
once again tqqq for updating sonalji... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

thanksss a ton for ur update...

lst mein short but sweet romance akshi ne icecream haathon se khaaliya🤣
and naitik thinking mohit as akshi was just😆😆😆
do update when u have time...
and naksh hm w8ing for it...
once again tqqq for updating sonalji...🤗

thank u ssooo much pranu for ur sweet comment..btw ek baat notice ki maine iss part me akshara ko crying baby nahi banaya 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

thank u ssooo much pranu for ur sweet comment..btw ek baat notice ki maine iss part me akshara ko crying baby nahi banaya 🤣

haa maine notice kiya tha...
actually woh icecream waali baat pe she should have cried but u didnt mention i knew it 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--


haa maine notice kiya tha...
actually woh icecream waali baat pe she should have cried but u didnt mention i knew it🤣

mai use waha par rulaati pt tumhe yaad karke nahi kiya..

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