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Posted: 10 years ago
oyyy ab likho..
noplss i dont know i want update witin no time samjhiii...
warna accha nahi hoga 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha


oyyy ab likho..
noplss i dont know i want update witin no time samjhiii...
warna accha nahi hoga😲

ha yaaar update kar doongi..par raat tak abhi thoda padhai kar lu..ok
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

ha yaaar update kar doongi..par raat tak abhi thoda padhai kar lu..ok

okeii padai hain isliye i am nt saying anything..
read nicelyy...
but update soon with same conditions 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hinusha


okeii padai hain isliye i am nt saying anything..
read nicelyy...
but update soon with same conditions😛😛

ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
atleast nw u start na ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART..9.
naitik became irritated by this..and akshara became releaved..
nk-uff ! ye itni morning me kaun tapak pada ?
akshara starts laughing on his condition.
nk-hasiye hasiye..baad me batata hu..na janee logo ko mere pehle pehle romance se kya problem hai..
he quickly came out from bathroom and went to open the door..
nk-mohit tu..
mo-ha kyu mai aa nahi sakta kya ?
nk-aa sakta hai..chal andar aa ja..
mohit came in the house and start laughing..
nk-pagal ho gaya hai yu hass kyu raha hai ?
mo-tujhe dekhkar..shadi ke agle hi din tera kya haal ho gaya hai..
naitik quickly look at himself..and became embarassed..
nk-ha wo mai..
mo-mai samjah gaya ye naye naye pyaar nayi nayi bahar ka asar hai..
nk-tu bhi naa..
mo-acccha bata kaisi rahi ?
nk-kya ?
mo-aree bhabhi ke haath ki chai..pi ya nahi..
nk-kaha yaar..actually akshara ko kuch banana nahi aata..
mo-aree waah ! tu toh bahut lucky nikla..
nk-ha wo toh hai..(smile)
when akshara came there..
ak-radhe krishna mohit ji
mo-radhe krishna bhabhi..kaisa raha aapka pehla din yaha
ak( while looking at naitik)-bahut accha..
nk-mohit pls tu meri help karega ?
mo-ha kyu nahi..
nk-tu mere saath shopping par chalega..?
mo-par abhi do din pehle toh gaye the
nk-mere liye nahi akshara ke liye..
mo-kya ? iske liye tu bhabhi ko le ja
nk-actually mai inka ye lehenga dekhkar bahut irritate ho gaya hu..ab ishe kuch naye roop me dekhna chahta hu..
mo-theek hai mai chalta hu..agar bhabhi ko kooi problem na ho
ak-ji nahi mohit ji aap dono chale jaiye..
nk-theek hai mohit mai ready hokar aata hu..
mo-ok..
naitik quickly take bath..and getting ready for shopping when akshara call him
ak-naitik.
nk-hmmm..
ak-wo maine kuch list banayi hai apne samaan ki..aap sirf yahi laiyega..
nk-ok..
she handover that list to naitik..which he kept in his pocket..
nk-aap apna khayal rakhiyega..mai jaldi aa jaunga..aur koi bhi problem ho mujhe phne kar dijiyega..
ak-ji..
nk-bye..
ak-bye..
naitik went with mohit..and here akhara start doing her work..as she wanted to change naitik's bachelor room into a couple room..
naitik and mohit came in a shopping mall..and they entered in a ladies shop..
mo-yaar naitik mujhe tere liye kya kya karna padta hai..aaj tak mai sweetheart ke liye kabhi ladies shop me nahi aaya..
nk-tu toh aise keh raha hai jaise mai hamesha yahi baitha rehta hu..
mo-nahi yaar par yu hum ladko ka ladies shop me aana..mujhe bahut sharam aa rahi hai..
nk-tu aisa kar yaha par khada reh mai kisi ladki ko akshara ki ye list de deta hu..wo saara samaan pack kar degi..
he put his hand in pocket but list got missing..
nk(tensed)-ye akshara ne jo list di thi wo kaha gayi..?
mo-uff ! kho diya tune kya..ab kya karenge..?
nk-marr gaya..
mo-haa..
nk-accha tu ruk mai aaya..
mo-ha jaa..
naitik came at the counter..and said
nk-excuse me ! i need some help..
girl-yes sir
nk-actually i want to byu some stuffs for my wife..her shopping list is missing..so can u purchase all the girly stuff for my akshara..
girl-sure sir..m
an she was about to go when naitik stop her
nk-suniye
g- ji
nk-bhale hi pasand aapki ho par wo meri akshara ke liye perfect ho..pls..
g-don't worry sir..hamari shop me aapko sab kuch best milega
nk-ji thanks
naitik again came near mohit..
mo-kaam hua ?
nk-haa..
mo-par kaise ?
nk-bas maine shop owner ko keh diya..
mo-aree waah ! mera smart dost..accha hal coffee pite hain..
naitik told that girl he is in coffee shop..if she wants to ask him$ anything than she will come there..
in coffee shop..
mo-ek baat poochu ?
nk-hmm..
mo-tu iss shadi se khush toh hai ?
nk-hmmm..
mo-aur bhabhi.?
nk-pata nahi..par mai koshish karoonga ki akshara ko hamesha khush rakhunga..
mo-good..accha ye bata bhabhi ko honeymoon par kaha le ja raha hai ?
in their talking that girl came in the cofee shop..
nk-honeymoon par..
she listen only these words and withour saying anything she went from there..
nk-abhi kuch socha nahi..
naitik saw mohit face
nk-kya hua ?
mo-kuch nahii shaya abhi wo ladki yaha ayi thi
nk-kaun si ladki ?
mo-wahi jo bhabhi ke liye samaan le rahi thi
nk-accha..chal dekhte hai
they both came again in the shop..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
here that girl is already waiting for them..
g- ye lijiye sir aapki wife ke liye saara samaan ready hai..
nk-ohh ! thank u so much madam..
d-ji sir isme thank u ki kya baat hai ? ye toh hamara kaam hai..
nk-ya..
he paid the bill and take all the bags and some gave to mohit..
nk-ek minute mohit..
mo-ab kya lena hai..?
nk-bas ek kaam aur..
he gave all the bags to him
nk-ye le tu car me chal mai aata hu
mo-theek hai..
and mohit went from there..
naitik came near the statue..where he saw a beautiful hot and sext nighty for akshara..
nk(st)-pata nahi akshara ko mera gift kaisa lagega ?..par ek baar de toh sakta hu..bhale hi wo kabhi pehne ya na pehne..
he quickly buy it..for akshara..
IN EVENING..
naitik and mohit came back again..and aksara is very happy..
mo-uff ! bhabhi aaj aap ke chakkar me mai marr gaya
nk-mai bhi..thak gaya..
ak-mai aap dono ke liye kuch bana ke laati u
mohit quickly got up from sofa..
mo-nahi nahi bhabhi..mujhe late ho raha hai..aap ye sab apne pati ko bana ke khilaiye..accha mai chalta hu..
nk-bye..
ak-mohit ji kitne acche hai naa..
nk-kyu mai acccha nahi hu kya ?
ak-kya naitik aap bhi naa..
she was about to go..when naitik hold her hand and make her sit on his lap..
nk-kaha bhaagi ja rahi hai..
ak-nk jane dijiye naa..
nk-abhi nahi..apna saara samaan nahi dekhengi..jo maine itne pyaar se select kiya..
ak-aapne sab choose kiya hai.
nk-hmm..
ak-toh sab bahut hi acha hoga
nk-accha toh mujhe koi gift nahi milega..aakhir aapki ek ek dress par maine itni mehnat ki hai
ak-ji naitik..bataiye aapko kya chahiye..?
he pointed towards his lips.." kiss "..
akshara came near his cheeks..but he stop her
nk-maine jaha point kiya waha..
ak(shyly)-naitik pls abhi nahi..
he tightened his grip on her waist
nk-toh kab ?
ak-sab kuch dekhne ke baad..
nk-kya ?
ak-dhatt !..mai kapdo ki baat kar rahi hu
nk-ohhh ! toh jaldi dekhiye naa..
ak-ok..
naitik put all the bags on table..and akshara was about to open..
nk-ek minute akshara
ak-kya hua naitik ?
nk-sabse pehle mera gift
ak-mere liye
nk-aur nahi toh kya
ak-thank u naitik
nk-ye lijiye
she take that gift and put it on side
nk-aree apne use rakh kyu diya ?
ak-aapka special gift mai baad me dekhungi..
nk(smile )-hmm..accha chaliye jaldi se ab apna suits dekh lijiye
ak-ji..
she happily open that bag but suddenly naksh's smile changes into shock ??
PRECAP-NATIK STOP AKSHRA TO OPEN HIS GIFT :(
BUT WHY ?
HEY FRIENDS SORRY FOR LATE UPATE BUT HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS PART..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

ha pranu bas start karne ja rahi hu..

i will be w8ong hope we get naksh romantic moments in this part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part i am loving it slowly slowly naksh love is growing up...
bechari akshi her shyness and baat baat pe rona(same like u 😛)
she doesnt know hw to cook lol its so funny part and ye lst me khabab mein haddi koun tha????😡
precap seems interesting hope we get naksh bonding and love growing gradually and their nok jhok in all parts... gr8 going sonal... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
super duper hit!!!! what a part sonal... just loved it all over again... ur wrk is excellent. .. plz continue soon... and thanks for updating today... update next part soon too.. 😊

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