my second os:-natik ka sweet surpirse update on (page 3) - Page 2

Originally posted by: avinaksh

wowww superbb os ruchi... very well done! !! and don't say u r not a good writer. ... u seriously wrote very well... u must continue. ..
plz keep writing

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

just simple and so beautiful os ruchi.. m enjoyed it fully loved it.. you are also a good writer.. congo shango to you for ur first os.. keep writing more os like this

Originally posted by: hinusha

very nice oss.. great going dont say like dat madam...

hw many sry does u say????? ha?????/ u have tried and it was gud i never tried anything na...😭

congos for ur first os finally u made it🥳👏

a simple and different os... 😊

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Thanks pragati for sweet comments ya I wrote many parts like this I try to wrote one ff vry soon

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Thanks my dear frd pranu for ur lvly comments dont understiment ur self u dont know hindi to engish m likho jast think ur imagination nd print it dear u r so talented dont say again tumse nhi hoga jisko bhagna h v bhage hum to hamesha rahege tumhare liye dear

Originally posted by: avinaksh

Aur ham bhi hain

Originally posted by: hinusha

dat means i am irritataing u all na...

u people write i will encourage u all..anyone should be there na to encourage u all am here... its enough...😊

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Ya avi m aacha sa ff likhne ka try krugi hope u like it

Gud mrng to all my frds