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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
grt part hate antra n want to read loving natik not dis natik keep cont
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: neeru84

grt part hate antra n want to read loving natik not dis natik keep cont

thanks neeru dear..for liking it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superbb..
keep writing..
please naksh ko seperate mat karo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAMB404

superbb..
keep writing..
please naksh ko seperate mat karo..

thank u sonam dear for liking this part..and don't worry i will never seperate naksh..my ff name is dil se bandhi ek dor..jo hamesha unke dil ko saath milayegi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainanaksh

thank u sonam dear for liking this part..and don't worry i will never seperate naksh..my ff name is dil se bandhi ek dor..jo hamesha unke dil ko saath milayegi..

thanks...and i am waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAMB404

thanks...and i am waiting for next update

ok i will update it soon..aur waise bhi hame aaj ek naya ff padhne ko milega..very excited..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 8
after a while akshara came at the main door of hotel where naitik and antra are waiting for her..
an-uff..na jane kitni der laga hai tumhari dost nk..jaise koi hoor pari bankar aa rahi ho..
nk-its ok an..aa rahi hogi ak..kyunki unka pair..
an-ye lo aa gayi..
and naitik turned to see her..
and a huge smile came on his face to see her..
nk-ak !..wow..
as she was looking really hot and beautiful in red gown..
ak-amm..chale..
naitik is already numb to see her sexy wife..
an-hmm..lets go..kyu nk.
nk-...
an-nk..tum sun rahe ho naa..
nk-amm..kuch kaha tumne ?
an-maine kaha chale..
nk-ya sure..
he want to talk to akshara but could'nt as antra was there..
AT THE PARKING AREA..
ak was about to sit with nk..in front seat..but suddenly antra jump in..
an-sorry ak tum pls peeche baith jao..hai na nk wo peeche baith sakti hai na..
nk-hmm..
ak sadly sat on a back seat..
and nk started driving..but his eyes continuosly
watching akshara..through mirror..
when an tries to come near him..she started squeezing nk's hands..
whcih he did'nt like it..and ak too wathing them..
nk-an pls..
she wishpers..problem kya hai ?
nk-kuch nahi par..and again he saw ak's reaction on this..
ak eyes filled with tears to see them..
and she lost in her own world
AFTER SOME TIME..
there is a guy who was singnled them for lift..
guy-sir pls kya aap mujhe..yahi pass ke disco tak lift de denge..meri car kharab ho gayi hai..pls.
an-ya sure..kyu naitik ?
nk-haa..kyu nahi..aisa kijiye aap car drie kar lijiye mai peeche baith jata hu..
guy-ji
an-nahi nk tum yahi baitho mere pass wo akshara ke saath baith jayega..
nk to himself..aise kaise mai apni biwi ke paas kisi ko bhi baithne doo..nahi
nk-nahi mai peeche jata hu..
and he quickly went near akshara..
and that guy came on the driver seat..
and he introduce himself as alok..
nk-hi..i am naitik singhania..she is akshara sin..
i mean ak maheshwari..my wif..i mean friend
and she is antra..
on hear ak's name alok quickly turned back see her..
al-ak tum..
then she came in her senses..
ak-alok
and happy to see her..
al-wow yaar what a surprise..
ak-tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..
and both started their chatting whole time..
nk-ye akshara se na jane kitna baat kar raha hai..itna khush to kabhi mere saath bhi ahi rahi..hmmm..
and they all reached at the same disco..while entering inside..naitik holds ak's hand..
nk-ak mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai..
ak-ha toh kahiye..
nk-pehle andar chalye phir..
and all went in the disco..
nk-ak mai..wo..
when suddenly alok came and take akshara on the dance floor..and she went with him happily..and start dancing with him..
an-kitna accha pair lag raha hai na..akshara aur alok ka..
nk-hmmm..kya? pagal ho gayi kya ?
an-maine aisa kya kaha..dekho dono kite sweet lag rahe hai..ek saath dance karte hue..ek dum perfect couple..
nk-mujhe nahi lagta..
an-tumhare lagne na lagne se kya hota hai naitik..wo dono college friends hai..na jane kabse ek dusre ko jante ho..
nk-ho sakta hai..
an-kyu na hum unhe shadi karne ki advice de..
nk-bas antara mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna hai..
an-accha baba theek hai..ab hum dono chale dance karne ke liye..kab tak yaha sabko dekhte rahenge..
nk-hmm..chalo bas ye drink khatam kar lu...
and naitik and antra too went on the dane floor...
aur waha sabhi couples ka competetion start ho jata hai..paper dance..
ak and nk continuously watching eachother..
nk to himself..kitna maza aa raha hai akshara ko mere bina..
ak to herself..kyu aapko nahi aa raha hai antra ke saath..
nk-kyu nahi aa raha hai..jab aap khush hai uiss alok ke saath toh mai bhi khush hu..
ak-mai aapke bina kaise khush reh sakti hu naitik
Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nk-ha wo to dikh hi raha hai
(tihs is naksh ki dil to dil wali baat)
an-naitik kaha kho gaye ?
nk-kuch nahi..
an-dekho na saare couples out ho gaye hai bas hum aur aksshara alok hi bache hai..aur mujhe wo crown kisi bhi tarah se jeetna hai..ok
nk-hmm..
an-chalo ab mujhe apni baaho me le lo..warna mai iss paper se gir jaaungi..
naitik was about to lift her when he saw alok is doing same with akshara..so he quickly went out from the paper and they loss the game..
ak to herself..mai janti thi naitik aap yahi karenge..
alok-wow akshara hum jeet gaye..
ak-hmm..
and naitik was watching them..
alok-toh chaliye madam ab wo crown aapka hua..
ak-ohh..thank u alok..
and again seeing nk's reaction...
when manager calls them..
alok-kya baat hai ?
ma-ji sir wo crown madam ka tabhi hoa jab aap sabke saamne ek romantic dance karenge..
alok-ye kaisa rule hai ?
ma-ji sir wo actually aaj hamare disco ki 10aniversary hai..isliye yaha ye sab games hai..aur aaj hum yaha perfect couple chun rahe hai..
alok-ok..hum ready hai..
ak-nahi alok mai ready nahi hu..
al-par kyu akshara problem kya hai..
ak-mujhe theek nahi lag raha..
al-par..
when suddenly nk interuppt in between..
nk-ha akshara kyu nahi..jab itna sab kar liya hai toh ab isme kya problem hai..
and akshara is shocked to hear naitik's word..
ak-nahi..mujhse nahi hoga..
nk[in anger]-pls akshara dekho na alok kitna insist kar raha hai..
alok-pls ak..
ak-theek hai..agar naitik yahi chahte hai..toh mai karongi..
nk's eyes became red on this and he quickly went from the dance floor..to the bar..
and here akshara and alok start their dance..on this nk moved his face on the other side..
an-are u ok naitik kya hua ?
nk-kuch nahi antra mai theek hu..
an-lagta toh nahi..
nk-maine kaha na..mai theek hu..
and here..
akshara is so much worried for naitik..as she can see that he did'nt like it..
but..
while dancing..alok hold her back..which she did'nt like..but naitik saw this..
and antra start her cuteness puraan again in front of naitik..
an-kitne cute lag rahe hai dono..perfect couple ..soo hot..soo much in love..aur unka dance kitna passionate..hai na naitik..
this word was enough for naitik..
nk-bas bahut ho gaya..ye dono tumhe bahut hi hot lag rahe hai...bahut passionate..kyu..
an-hmmm..
nk-mai abhi tumhe dikhata hu..ki kya hota hai passionate love..
he quickly went on the dance floor and suddenly holds akshara's hand and pulled her close to him..
hope u all like it..
Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
loved it very very much...
jaldi se unres karo..
i am waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
excellent part raina
but why i have to always wait for next part ?
waiting for naksh passionate dance.
pls update soon
pleeese

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