My 1st poem to NaksH

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This is the first time i wrote something for naksh so thought to share it... it is my imagination and feeling to naksh.. read these line and enjoy it... bear up my imagination
here is the few lines for our cutest couple naksh..

Naksh ko dekh kar khushi milti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar jindagi milti hai
Naksh na ho to jindagi berang lagati hai
Naksh ho to berang jindagi bhi khoobsurat lagti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar khoobsurat se rishte ki ehsaas hoti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai
Naksh ko dekh kar khushi milti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar jindagi milti hai

so how's this.. pls wrote what is good and what is bad in this
pls give ur feedbacks..

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Anjali rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice poem..
loved this line naksh ko dekh ke jindagi milti hai

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Mini2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice poem😊

Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai good line

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mini2013
nice poem😊
Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai good line

Thanks for liking my poem.. this line is also close to my heart

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SONAMB404
superbb poem

Thanks 4 commenting

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Sonam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
Thanks 4 commenting

please write more 😊

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SONAMB404
please write more 😊

OK.. will try to write more

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

Glad to know that u all like my poem.. it gives me inspiration to write more

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#9

lovely
do write more
thanks for pm

Edited by sona_naksh - 11 years ago

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Alia

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome poem dear
do make more poems
thnxx 4 da pm 😊

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