My ff : DHINKA CHIKA ...pt 2 at pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
cute wrk
continue ur ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
nice concept of your ff
and the part was also gud
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
nice part👏.continue soon.hope u come up with bit longer part 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Thanks a lot for your wonderful response .
I assure my frnds that next part is gonna b very good and romantic. Thanks 4 yoiur comments and likes . Luv u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART:::: 2 Naksh ka rishta pakka ho gaya hai . One month has passed since they hav met . They hav been meeting in colleges and having cute phonic convo . This is varsha-shaurya's wedding . Singhanias hav been invited. Here goes my part .


Akshara was dressed in white lehanga with a maroon welvet border with silver work on it and silver earings . Her hair were left open . She was looking stunning with simplicity and glamour .

Naitik was dressed in suit ( that wore in reception in YR .
Akshara was engaged in some rituals and d singhanias arrived . Naitik saw akshi involved in the rituals . Both of them did HII to each other . Akshi told naitik by sign that she would come soon . So naitik was having juice with some frnds and relatives .
Amongst them there was a girl who was like sticking naitik . Naitik was trying to keep away from her as he knew ki akshara ne use dekh liya , to wo naitik ki jaan le legi . But wo ladki naitik bore kar rahi thi apni phatrichar baton se ( u know kuch
Hote hai sneha jaise ). Akshi saw all these .


After some time , akshi was attending d guest in garden . There she saw naitik standing alone .

Akshi : kyun wo lizard kahan .
N: lizard !!!!
A : han wahi ladki jo chipkali banke aapse chipak rahi thi .
N : akshara , i was trying my best to away from her but vo samajthi hi nahi rahi thi.
A : han , han, ab aap kahenge ki aap itne hand


some hai ki ... Bla bla ...
Agar dubara aisa kuch bhi hua to aapko nahi chodungi .
N : han to kab kab kaha ki aap mujhe chodiye , saiying this he pulls akshi by keeping his hands on her waist . Main to hamesha se yahi chgahta hun ki aap mujhe
Pakad kar rakhe .

Listening this , akshi smiles .
N : wqise ye sab faltu ki batoon mein mujhe sabse imp baat to bhula di .
A: kya .
N : yahi [COLOR=orange]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 :::: IN CONTINUATION.
N: yahi aaj aap intni khubsurat lag rahi ki aapse nazre hatan ka man hi nahi karta .
Akshi blushes a little .
N : aapka ye sharmana dekh leta hun to lagta hai LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL .
A : ab lehenga bhi aapki choice ka hai aur mai bhi , to sundar lagna to banta hi hai .
Someone calls akshi for some puja so , A : naitik , plz jane dijiye na , mujhe puja karni hai .
N : nahi .
A : puja ke baad mera sara waqt aapka . Pakka.
Naitik leaves akshi . Akshi was bit surprised as naitik left her so easily . Akshi was about to go , but naitik caught her hand , aksh
i looks back ,
n : vo dekhiye akshara .
And meanwhile naitik kisses akshara on her cheek .
A : ab samajh mein aaya ki apne mujhe itni aasani se kaise choda . Aap kabhi nahi sudhar sakte .
N : agar mai sudhar jaunga , to aapko kaisa bigadunga .
A : ji nahi , jaisi hun waise hi thik hun . She runs away , but while leaving she gives a FLYING KISS TO NAITIK . Seeing this ,Naitik smiles . Precap : akshi's leg is fractured .
Edited by Cuteshyamal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Awww sooo cute...
Please sneha jaise ko doorr rakho 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Lovely part..
Update nxt part soon..!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shayal1436

Awww sooo cute...
Please sneha jaise ko doorr rakho 🤣


Oye..mujhe kyun mere Naitik sw dur rehne ke liye keh rahi ho..? 😳 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
So cute..waiting fr d nxt part..

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