My ff : DHINKA CHIKA ...pt 2 at pg 4

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Shyamal

@shyamal_hina.di

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Posted: 13 years ago

This ff is purely based on romance , and cute scenes .

Concept :
Naksh will do an arranged marriage . But marriage they will meet each other several times , many funny and cute scenes .

And once naitik will become a professor for one monthin akshara's college .

Marriage will be very romantic and wedding's night [0] SR[/COLOR] Will happen .

As shown in yrkkh , that was always Kabab mein haddi For naksh . And naitik will defend akshara whenever g3 accuses akshara for her mistakes . After one month of marriage naitik will be totally fed up of g3 toture and will shift to delhi with akshara as singhanias ke bussiness ki saari responsibilty naitik Ke upar hai as dj and rb have retired .
So naitik-akshara willbe working to- gether in bussiness . So they will be togther for whole day and even between they will hav time for romance and there would be no one to disturb like g3 and bm ( the greatest twin sisters ) . One more thing naitik is mba and when naksh meet each other on holi as maheshwaris house . Their rishta gets pakka . But akshara mba ka ek semister baki hai is liye naitik use college meinn professor banke padhayega . Because college mein acche retire Ho gaye hai aur college ka principal aur rb best frnds hai to isliye kuch dino ke naitik college mein padhayega . 👏 [0]

I will update 1st partt within one week and i wont be able to PM you guys because my [/COLOR] Mobile's net is very slow . Eagerly waiting for your comments , suggetions .

Plz tell kaisa laga mere ff ka concept.

Love u frnds . I hav always been a silent reader of if . But now my 10 std's exams have over so i can write a ff .
Yrkkh rocks .

Edited by Cuteshyamal - 13 years ago

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Bhootni

@Mahi_Bhardwaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

where is ur first FF pyar ke rang naksh ke sang🤔

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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nycc story plz continue soon

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.Mohabbatein.

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Posted: 13 years ago

excellent introduction 👏

plz write soon😃

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Shruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept.continue soon👏

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nasreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

NICE concept dear

waiting for first update

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Ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved the concept
Waiting for the first part
Continue soon

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Shyamal

@shyamal_hina.di

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 1
On d day of holi naitik and his family comes to see akshara . Singhanias come and maheshwaris welcome them . As it was holi all were putting tilak on each other's face .
It was turn for naitik to color akshi , and he held the gulal in hand and kept on staring akshi . Even Akshi was doing d same . Then naitik put d tilak on akshi's face . But little of gulal fell on akshi's nose .a million dollar smile appeared on Faces of our price and princess .

All were staring naksh , so naksh broke their eyelock and after the family had nashta . They said that unki taraf se to rishta pakka hai par ek bacche ek dusre se baat kar lete to accha hota . So naksh go in akshi's Room .

There naksh were staring each other , so akshi said : let us not act like 80's movies ke hero-heroine . So let us know about our likes .fav hero , naitik said - ranbir kapoor , aksh - omg , even i love ranbir kapoor , fav heroine , aksh - priyanka , Even i love piggy chops . Your hobbies - akshi: dancing , singing , playing tennis anh most imp cars , i love cars .
Naitik - lagta hai hamari khub jamegi .
Akshi - so i guess ki hum donn ki hobies same hai , thats grt .
Akshi aapne mercedes kia 7 model dekha .

They keep on talking and akshi ke table pe uska laptop on tha . So they start seeing d pics of cars . But in between the mouse doesnt works so naitik tries to help akshi and meanwhile they

naitik puts hand on akshi's hand , they hav an eye lock .

Jaise ki net on tha achanak net mein se song baja , Dil kahe kya raaz hai , jaane kya kar gaye jaise andheron mein tum chandni bahar gaye ...I LOV U , I LOV U .

NAKSH KA EYE LOCK AUR YE ROMANTIC SONG and my part ends.[0] I hope u liked the part , though itr was not that romantic , but next will b very romantic . Plz like and comment .[/COLOR]