NEW FF: PYAR TOH HONA HI THA(part10 at page 15) - Page 8

Nice part...
Do update long parts...
Waoting for next part...
Do update soon...

Nyccc part dear welldone plz update soon

Nyc part dear...
luv ur ff
do update soon...

Next part 8 hope u like it
One weak pass away as usual but one difference Shena daily go to naitik house by some excuses nd impress naitik family!!
In colleage sab bhaut khus or excited tha kyunki colleage ki taraf se picnic ja rahi thi..
Akshara-wow yaar picnic mei toh bhaut excited hu kitna maza ayega..
Sadhana-haan aur hum log kitna months ka baad ek dusra ke saath honga...
Ragini-hmmm hamera saath ya phir alekh ka saath..
Sadhana started blushing nd ragini akshara started laugh.. Sadhana-bus karo tum dono boys ke pass chale ki woh ja raha hai ya nahi...
Both thik hai chalo!!!
In canteen boys doing dr chit chat girls come...say hello sits on chair..
Sadhana-aur kya chal raha hai? Naitik-wait
Akshara-wait kiska??
Ranvir(winkling)-Shena ka..
Ragini-(angrily)kya tum shena ka wait kar raha ho??
Ranvir-nahi mei nahi alekh..
Sadhana gives him a look lekin alekh apni ankhon se naitik ki aur point karta hai..
Sadhana-naitik tum??
Naitik-acha tum apna bf ka saath milkar mujha fasa raha ho...
Ranvir(seeing towards akshara) toh tu apna liye bhi gf doond le na...
Both naitik nd akshara look at each other nd eye lock than all 4 start coughing dy brk dr eyelock both embaressd
Akshara-glycodine syrup lao__
All starts laughing
Alekh-picnic kya plan hai tum log araha ho na..
Akshara-haan hum log bhi tum se yehi puchna aya tha toh kal milta hai thik hai..
All say gud buy to each other.. Next day at colleage in bus all loading dr lugguage very happy nd excited ready to go now in bus after few min.
Akshara-yaar bhaut boring ho raha hai chalo antakshiri khelata hai...
Shena-no way hum ye sab nahi khelanga..
Ragini-thik hai tum maat khelo hum toh khelanga baisa bhi kisko tumhari awaz(voice) sunni hai...
Shena-kya kaha tumna??
Ragini-jo tumna suna now guys lets play!!
They all started playing whenever akshara sing alone naitik goes fida with her voice... Then at 1 dhaba bus stop for refreshing all goes down except ragini-ranvir. Sadhana nd alekh were together akshara was wid naitik but shena was coming in b/w them so akshara felt bad nd naitik also than akshara goes to washroom shena see dis woh akshara ka peecha jati hai aur darwaza band kar deti hai after few second bus bhi chali jati hai aur akshara darwaza knock karti hai but no response she got scared!!
Sorry if u find it boring pls leave ur comment!!

Nyc part yar...
but akshi ke frndz ko pta nhi laga ki wo bus mein nhi hai...
n i m sure nk ll cum to rescue her...

Nyccc Part dear welldone ...bt ab akshara kon kaun bachayega

edited me 3rd shi tje chodun gi nae😡😆...
btw cming 2 the point...
as usuall i really like ur ff its so nice this one is something new on this forum so i love to read that...w8ing 4 nxt part keep writing n all the best...welldone...👏

awww..!! nice part

nice update..waiting for next part..

part 9
Akshara-koi hai kya pls kholo mujha mei yaha band hogayi hu pls help me...
(Then some1 opens d door)
Akshara-(worried) naitik tum thank god tum agaye pata nahi kisna mujha yaha band kar diya tha usa mei chodna nahi wali...
Naitik-relax akshara jisna tumha band kiya na usa toh mei bhi nahi chodunga...
Akshara smiles by hearing dis nd say-abhi bus pe chalte hai sab wait kar raha honga..
Naitik- han chalo!!
They reached d place where bus was standing nd shocked to see dat bus was not dere..
Naitik-bus kaha gayi yahi toh khadi thi??
Akshara-haan aur kisiko yeh pata bhi nahi chala hum raha gaya hai ab hum kaisa jayenga???
Naitik-kuch toh karna padega dhaba wala se puchta hai ki koi aur bus hai ya nahi...
Naitik-bhayia daman ka liya aur koi bus hai??
Dhaba wala- nahi bhayia ji ab toh bus raat ko hai..
Akshara- thank u!! naitik aab kya karnga??
In bus
Ragini-mujha bhaut dar lag raha hai..
Alekh-kyun???
Sadhana-kyunki hamna naitik ko akshara ko dhoond ne ke liya bheja kisi ko pata chal gaya kisi ki woh bus mei nahi hai aur phir woh ayenga kaisa??
Ranvir-dont worry yeh toh hamna isliya kiya na ki dono ko pata chala ki woh ek dusra se kitna pyar karta hai, yaha kisi ko kuch pata nai chalega..
Alekh-kuch hua toh hum hai na sab samhal lenga or dono sahi salmat ajyenga so just relax..
Both nooded
scene shift to naksh
Akshara-naitik mujha bhaut bhook lag rahi hai kuch khate hai waise tumhara wallet toh hai na ki apna mobile ki tarah bus mei chod aye...
Naitik-mera wallet hai lekin tumhara pass toh na mobile hai aur na hi wallet toh khana kaise khaogi???
Aksahra-toh kya hua mera wallet nahi hai tumhara pass toh hai aur jab hum phauchenga toh mei tumhara paisa lauta dungi woh bhi interest ka saath abhi mujha bhaut bhook lag rahi hai chalo..
Naitik- thik hai lekin mujha rupai chayia na ki paisa...
They ordered d lunch akshara was eating like a child naitik was smiling by seeing her suddenly she starts coughing,naitik get worried
Naitik-akshara kya hua??
Akshara-mirchi pani!! Naitik takes d glass no water in it he goes to takes d water akshara was not able to tolerate nd she sees one glass behind her she drinks it... Naitik come wid water nd doesnt find akshara he get more worried like his heart beat had gone he ask one man..
Naitik-apna ek ladki ko toh hai woh yaha bheti thi aur usna jeans top phena tha..
Man-shayad woh ladki us taraf gayi hai..
Naitik hurriedly goes behind akshar & dr he was shocked to see akshara!!!
Next part-what happen to akshara??
Hope u guys liked it sory for mistake nd if i bored u leave ur comment that means lot to me..