NEW FF: PYAR TOH HONA HI THA(part10 at page 15)

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Ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

very nice update
well done
waiting for next part
update soon

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saman.17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

not bad 😛 👏

try to give looong update if possible & ho sake toh jald bhi 😆

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maha_femir4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

nice part...
waiting 4 next one...

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Sakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

nyc part ..waiting eagerly fr d nxt part shurti

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.Mohabbatein.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

nice update 👏

continue soon😃

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geetika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesome ff with new concept

all the parts are gud

update soon

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ANN91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

superb update
waiting 4 next part

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1cuties

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

when r u updating your next part??

waiting for it dear

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ANN91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

wi8ing 4 next part yaar

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

sorry guys for delay but now i'm back.. With update PART6 At collage youth festival day all r very excited nd nervous competition starts ragini-ranvir nd sadhana-alekh competition was over dy went to naksh... Naitik in white kurta nd black pant looking very handsome!! Alekh: naitik tumhara dance start hone wala hai tu yaha kyu khada hai... Aur Akshara?!? Naitik:usi ka toh wait kar rahu.. Really girls take lots of time!!! Kya kaha avoice from back all turn nd stunned to see akshara she is looking very very hot in red saree nd light makeup... Naitik ki eyes toh ussa hut hi nahi rahi thi tabi ranveer uska dhyan bhang kar deta hai!! Ranvir:naitik kya hua? Naitik(embaressd)kuch bhi toh nahi... Hiding himself akshara itna time lagata hai koi??? Akshara was abt to say d announcement take palce naksh performance was last. Everyone greet them all d best!! Dr perfomance starts nd dr song was Suraj hua madam.. Naksh were completely lost in each other eyes forgot abt everyone dr steps were very romantic like in d movie(k3g) any1 can say that dy r in luv.. The song was abt to over suddenly akshara's sari abt to fall she get scared naitik realise dis pick her in his arm nd went from stage every1 stand up nd claps... Naitik make akshara on her feet nd ask if she is ok she was just numb dont know what to speak she just hug naitik very tightly naitik also do d same nd says everything is ok he is dr for her just den dy heared some voice dy just broke dr hug nd akshara go inside d room.. All 4 of them were dr... Sadhana:kya baat hai kitna romantic performance tha hai na aur last mei toh.. Alekh: haan tum dono ne toh kamal kar diya dekh lena tumhi first ayoga.. Hai na ranvir Ranvir: haan lekin akshara kaha hai hai aur tu aisa kyu khada hai? Every1 confused Naitik:akshara andar room mei hai tum dono uska pass jao!! Sadhana nd ragini go inside nd see akshara nd ask abt d matter she tells them dr also naitik also tells alekh nd ranvir all 4 of them were surprise nd were very happy!! Hope u guys like it sorry for mistake aur agar boring ho toh..