Naksh~Humko Pyaar Hua,Puri Hui Dua part 6(page 43)

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sejal719
this really is a sweet surprise im so happy for you keep up the good work :) and i hope ur ff reaches and touches many readers :)

thanx sej di...i too hope for the best...:P :)

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shayal1436
nyc continue soon waiting eagaly for it

thanx shayal...urely will post the first part soon...!😉

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Asawari_naksh
Very Good surprise Deepshi...🤗 Nice Intro...waiting for the first part...update soon...😊

thanx ashi di...i'll update the part soon...😉

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Abicool
awesome dear

thanx buddy...😳

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Rachana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Hai deepshi thum na acha suprise diya tha jaldise update karo 😛

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Rachana_naksh_
Hai deepshi thum na acha suprise diya tha jaldise update karo 😛

thanx rachana di...surely will update soon...😃

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

UPDATE 1

This is the first update of my ff...that means the first part...i'm really very nervous...hope u all like the first part...

The day before akshara n varsha's college begin...@ the market place😉

A-Varsha aaj humne bahot shopping karli hai

V-haan...aur tu toh chup hi nahi ho rahi thi...aisa laga ki puri dukaan hi utha legi...😆

A-dekh varsha aise mat bol...

both laughs out loud

A-arrey ek cheez toh bhool hi gaye...maa ne churiyan laane ko bola tha...

V-haan akshara...chal yahin kisi dukaan se la lete hai

A-haan chal 😊

in the chudi wale ki dukaan

A-bhaiya kuch achchi chudiyan dikhayiye

Chudiwala-Jee haan

A-varsha dekh mujhe yeh churiyon ke baare mein kuch nahi pata tu hi dekh lena...

V-akshara agar abhi nahi sikhegi toh kab sikhegi?tere woh toh nahi denge naa tujhe...😳😆

A-datt...tu bhi naa😳😳

While varsha gets busy in seeing bangles...akshara sees a guy cponfused btw what bangles to take n what not...she goes to the guy...

A-main kuch help karoon aapki

Guy-haan...mujhe kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha ki kaunsi chudiyan loon...

A-dikhayiye main help karti hoon...

Guy-jee haan...waise mera naam naitik hai aur aapka?😳

A-akshara...

N-wow...nice name..

A-aapko kiske liye yeh bangles chahiye...

N-jee maa ke liye...

A-aapki maa ke liye...woh kaisi dikhati hai?

Naitik describes her well...

A- jaise ki aapne bataya unhe red achcha lagta hai tohmujhe lagta hai unhe red suit karega...aap red bangles lijiye...😃

N-ok...thank you...

A-anytime naitikji

N-jee thank you alot...😃

While naitik is selecting red bangles...akshara constantly looks @ him...BG mein piya baawri is been played...

Akshara is looking @ naitik while he is asking her about the bangles but she doesn't listen...

N-yeh kaise hai akshara ji

A:----

N-akshara ji...main aapse baat kar raha hoon...

A:jee...(shocked)😲jee haan achcha hai...

precap:naitik is thinking of akshara n checks his mobile for her number...😉

hope u all like it...

Edited by sweet_deepshi - 14 years ago

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Hit the button for the pm...

Edited by sweet_deepshi - 14 years ago

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

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woww... lovely update!
chill yr!!! dnt get sooo nervous... it was a wonderful update!
loved it!!

waiting for 2nd update! thanx for the pm

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago