Naksh~Humko Pyaar Hua,Puri Hui Dua part 6(page 43) - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx all for ur comments...sorry to all that i m'nt able to give long updates...but actually it's exams n activities time for me so i'm so busy...i'll update the next part hopefully tomo so that i'm able to think n write much on the spot...!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update deepshi ! very well written 👏 NAKSH dreamin bout each other😳 can't wait 4 da nxt part do cont soon ,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Edbelab

gr8 update deepshi ! very well written 👏 NAKSH dreamin bout each other😳 can't wait 4 da nxt part do cont soon ,,,,,

thanx di...next part wud be updated today only...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago


UPDATE 3

Continued from part 2 😛

@ akshara's house

Dadi-Chalo ab sab so jao...akshara beta aur varsha jaao tum dono bhi so jao...kal setumhe woh kya kehte hai...ermmm...
A-college?
D-haan college!college jaana hai
A-jee dadi...kal chuttiyon ke baad college ka pehla din hai...hum jaldi se jaakar so jaate hai taki phirse meri wajah se varsha aur main late naa ho jaaye 😆
V-😆...chal ab...Shaurya aap bhi chaliye,,
S-haan...chalo varsha...
A-good night varsha...good night dadu
S-good night akshara
V-good night akshara...sweet dreams...😛

they all go to their rooms...

@akshara's room

A-hmmm,toh chalo ab main apni daily dairy likh leti hoon...
Aaj maine kya kya kiya...ermmm
Aaj moring mein anshu ke project mein help kiya...phir varsha ke saath shopping ki...dher saari
Phir maine NAITIK JEE
arrey mujhe naitik jee se pooch lena chahiye ki aunty jee ko bangles pasand aayi ki nahi...mera mobile kahan hai????
She checks below the cushions n on her bed...

A-haan...yeh raha...lekin mere paas toh unka number hi nahi hai...abhi main kya karoon?😲 😕😲

She thinks a lot but can't understand anything...

A-aisa karti hoon kalmain mkt jaakar dekhti hoon...ho sakta hai woh kal mkt mein aa jaaye...aur mujhe mil jaaye
A-abhi main apni diary likh leti hoon jisse yahi baatein jab main padhoon naa toh meethe palon ki tarah yaadein ban sakein...😳
hmmm...toh maine...

Then she goes off to sleep after she completes hr diary writing...as she closes her she started imagining of naitik...

A-aap yeh kiske liye le rahe hai?
N-jee aapke liye
A-(suddenly open her eyes)kya?aisa kaise ho sakta hai?
A-mujhe kya ho gaya hai...mujhe ankhein khol band naitik jee hi kyun dikh rahe hai?

She suddenly feels sumone around her

A-mujhe abhi aisa kyun laga ki maine naitik jee ko dekha?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?😕 😕
A-(to herself)akshara tu pagal hai...naitik jee yahan kaise aa sakte hai...woh toh mera mobile no bhi nahi jaante ghar ka kaise pata hoga?aur aaj jab unhone mujhse ghar drop karne ke liye poocha toh maine mana kar diya tha...ho sakta hai mujhe aisa hi laga ho...

She turns off the lamp n goes off to sleep...

@ naitik's place
he is also unable to sleep as he is dreaming of her akshara jee 😆

N-mujhe neend kyun nahi aa rahi...baar baar ankhein band karta hoon toh akshara jee hi nazar aati hai...lagta hai mere dil ko bhi pata hai ki mujhe unhe thanx karna hai...😆

he closes his eyes n drems sumthing unexpected

A-aap yahi bangles lijiye...aapko red colour achcha lagta hai...rite
N-jee...apko kaise pata?

he suddenly open his eyes...

N-mujhe kya ho gaya hai?mujhe har taraf akshara jee hi kyun nazar aa rahi hai...

he too feels sumthing

N-abhi aisa kyun laga ki akshara jee uss window ke paas thi...

He goes n checks...

N-aarey yahan par toh koi bhi nahi hai...ho sakta hai mujhe aise hi laga ho...lagta hai maine akshara jee ke baare mein kuch zyada hi soch liya hai...😆

@ akshara's place

A-lagta hai aaj maine naitik jee ke baare mein kuchzyada hi soch liya hai...😆

In the BG jaadu yeh kya chal gaya is played...


La la laa la la La la laa
La la laa la la La la laa
uth rahi hai...koi hulchul
khil raha hai...saara aalam
ghul rahi hai...saanson mein
Ansuni si...ek taranum

N-akshara
A-naitik

Ek ajnabee ne yeh kya kardiya
Ehsaas dil mein yeh kya bhar diya
Aisi baatein jaane kisko kahee...
Lagne lage hai saare rang naye...
Jaadu yeh kya chal gaya
Jaanu na kya ho gaya
Jaadu yeh kya chal gaya

Both sleep in each other's dream...

in the morning when akshara n varsha reach college...

A-Varsha chal class mein chalte hai...lecture shuru honewala hai
V-haan bas do min rook akshara
A-nahi tu jaldi chal...
V-itna tension kyun leti hai akshara
A-kya karoon varsha...achcha sun mujhe tujhe ek baat batani hai...
V-haan bol
A-woh kal jab hum chudi wali shop par gaye the naa...

the bell rings...akshara leaves her words n aska her to move to the class

A-chal varsha...lecture shuru honewala hai...
V-haan chal
A-aaj itne dino baad college mein aakar i feel refreshen...n pehla lecture
V-arrey haan aaj oh ma'am ko literature play ke liye students selection karna hai...!😃
A-kaunsa play...?!?!?!?
V-romeo n juliet
A-oh...
V-haan meri juliet
A-dhat...😳 main kahan juliet...mere mein koi acting skills nahi hai...
V-woh toh ma'am hi dekhengi...

while chit-chatting they reach the classroom...akshara sees natik also present...

A-arrey aap?😲
A-hiii...kaise hai?
N-hiii akshara jee...main theek hoon aur aap?
A-main bhi theek hoon...
V-akshara yeh kaun...
A-wohvarsha main tujhe inhi ke baare mein batene jaa rahi thi...yeh naitik jee hai...kal uss bangle shop par mujhe yeh mile the...inhe samajh nahi aaraha tha ki kaunsi bangles le toh maine inki help ki thi
V-tune????😲😲
N-haan,inhone lekin aapne aisa kyun kaha ki inhone...?
A-kuch nahi naitik jee yeh toh bas aise hi...
N-yeh varsha jee hai rite...
A-haan yeh meri friend hai lekin rishte mein meri bhahi hai
N-oh...😊
N-akshara jee kal ke thanx...maa ko woh chudiyan khoob pasand aayi...
A-chalo achcha hai...main toh darr hi gayi thi...kahin unhe pasand naa aayi toh...
N-nahi nahi unhe bahot pasand aayi...
A-😃
N-😃
V-chal ab baatein hi karti rahegi yaa bethegi bhi...ma'am aa chuki hai...
A-haan chal

Akshara n naitik sits in different lanes but biside each other...soon the lecture is over n the lecturer tells the students about the play...n selects them...

L-abhi sirf lead roles hi bache hai...
L-hmmm...akshara
A-jee ma'am
L-tum juliet...
A-ma'am main kaise?mujhe dramatics nahi aata
L-mujhe kuch nahi pat...tum juliet play karogi...
L-naitik
N-yes ma'am
L-u'll play romeo
N-ma'am main kaise?
L-what main kaise?I don't bother anything...u both are perfect suitors for the role...
Naksh-Ok ma'am

soon the lecturer leaves n naksh n varsha cum out of the class...

V-dekha maine kaha tha naa ki tu hi juliet banegi...
A-lekin varsha mujhe toh...V-akshara tu itni tension kyun leti hai?sab ho jaayega naa
N-haan akshara jee...mujhe bhi nahi aata but ma'am ne kaha toh toh karna padega..try ur best
A-hmmm
V-chal akshara main abhi aayi...naitik jee main abhi aati hoon
A-kahan jaa rahi hai?rook main bhi aati hoon
V-nahi tu yahin rook...main shaurya se baat karke aati hoon...😳
A-oh...theek hai...😎

varsha leaves n naksh are alone...

N-so aap ready hai?
A-kis cheez ke liye?😕
N-romeo n juliet ke liye
A-haan...ab ma'am ko mana bhi toh nahi kar sakte naa...😆
N-😆😆
N-toh abse hum friends?
A-woh kab hue?😕😲
N-kya?
A-ho jaayenge...chaliye chodiye...friends...😆😆
N-😆 ok...

they talk to each other n naitik takes akshara's mobile no too...as he jots it down...varsha cums...

V-chal akshara...ab chalte hai...maa raah dekh rahi hongi...
A-haan varsha chal...
V-bye naitik jee...nice to meet u...
N-bye bhabhi...nice to meet u too...😃
A-bye naitik jee...take care
N-bye akshara jee...

they all leave for home...

TO BE CONTINUED..

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Edited by sweet_deepshi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Guyzz i've never read shakespeare's romeo n juliet n i don't know anything about it...plzz sumone tell me the story...i noe it's very nice but the worse thing is ki i myself don't know...!
Edited by sweet_deepshi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update bebs 😊 tho aage hamare naksh romeo-juliyet banenge😳 interesting...liked those part dono ek dusre ko yaad karthe hai...sweet...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow. Great update. Nice to see naksh as romeo juliet. Keep writing long updates like this and continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Update Deepu...Naksh ke dil mein hul chul hone lagi hai😳 neend udne lagi hai😳 abhi Naksh Romeo- Juilet banenge Wow!!😍😍 Excited for next update😛. Thanks for PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update deepshi... akshara n naitik thinking about each other at the same time is very good... n woww... they r studying in the same college n r playing romeo n juliet... its awesome... update soon... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Nice part bebo day by day u writing is improving 👏
wow naksha was playing romeo n juliet 😍 wow just fab bebo
realy i loved this part and i also like that naithik was also in same collage wow abtho naksha ko ek sath dekagay wow
really waitng for next part bebo 😛
Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago

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