OS naksh-- Its Worth the Wait part 2 PG8 ( 8/6/11)

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Rasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

My comment edited on pg 4.do check dear 😃

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Arshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

very nice part yaar 👏👏👏👏..varsha ke dialogue mai bolo tho its sooo rumantic 😳😳😳😆...srly i become a fan of ur r8tng 😳...and th words u use maza agaya ...knaw i can go nd sleep with nice dreams in my mind 😳😆😆😆...cont soon

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anvesha sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow😍...i m just lost in ur os dear.how can one b such a good writer😃,hats off to u icy👏.ur os was just superb dear😃,it was just mindblowing👍🏼.now u have raised my eagerness to read even ur ff sweety😛.do write it soon n thanx 4 d pm.again,it was just muahhh...

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aastha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
gr8 work seju⭐️⭐️,,,,,,wish our cvs had got writer lyk u😍😍
plz plz plz,,,,,start a new ff soon,,,,,waitin fr it😃😃😃😃

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asha nair

@i4ishra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

soory 4 late commenting its suchhh a awesom work,as i said earlier ur writing laguage attract me 2 ur os keep writing @ do pm wen u update

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saru

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

seju... read ur revised version... this one is also soo good... story may changed but the flavour is the same... do continue soon...😊

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Rasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Hey sej,i read ur revised version of d os.the new story line is also very attractive.i think the point/content u want 2 say is same,only u changed situation.i wonder why u revised the os,that is also beautiful na?why dont u made it 2 as another os.anyways os is beautiful with ur amazing writing skills.w8ing 4 nxt part.

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Hinakshara
Hey sej,i read ur revised version of d os.the new story line is also very attractive.i think the point/content u want 2 say is same,only u changed situation.i wonder why u revised the os,that is also beautiful na?why dont u made it 2 as another os.anyways os is beautiful with ur amazing writing skills.w8ing 4 nxt part.

because the other one was similar to another os and so the writer reported me and so i had to change it... but glad u liked it

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Rasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sejal719

becausethe other one was similar to another os and so the writer reported me and so i had to change it... but glad u liked it

oh aisa hai kya.ok yaar.cont soon.