OS naksh-- Its Worth the Wait part 2 PG8 ( 8/6/11)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys so there was a problem with the other os I wrote a few days ago so I am revising this OS.. hopefully all of you will like this one even better'.

It's Worth the Wait

The simmering lights and the astonishing decorations could catch anyone's eyes that walked in the hall today. It did not fail to make people stop and stare in awe for a little while. Everyone's focus was focused in the middle of the hall where a gorgeous mandap was set and decorated based on my taste and imagination. There in the middle was my groom, my life, my everything Natik Singhania, who was waiting for his one and only ME. Everything felt and looked like a complete fairytale' Natik being the prince and me begin the princess' and today is the perfect ending for our fairytale Our marriage.. now im sure all of you are wondering how we met and all right? Well it was a long story but I will skip the boring and sad parts and tell you the main part.. the part where Natik proposed me hayye that was the best day of my life..

Past ( a few days ago--- this is now Natik proposed)

The city of Mumbai busy and overly crowed with people and cars always occupying the streets and roads' the busiest city I have seen this far.. you will find life in every corner you look. Nothing can change the active life of this city, not rain not heat, nor cold. I always feel that Mumbai looks astonishing when it rains and even today it looks breath taking. While people on the streets are trying there best to hide from this rain I find it very calming. The Water droplets softly hitting the window its pure pleasure to watch and listen'.

I was thinking in my room trying to imagine the next picture I wanted to publish for the auction on Tuesday; the rainy weather always inspires me in doing extraordinary paintings and today was just my day to get it done'. I was thinking while I started to drift off in to space day dreaming of my soul mate being hopelessly in love with him.. Natik.. sigh he was perfect, tall figure, well build, dark drown eyes that could melt anyone, and a perfect smile.. The only thing I hated about him was well the fact that he always tries to hides his feeling from everyone' only I know how hard it was to get him to even blurt out he liked me in the first place'and now when I thought that everything would be alright because we were together for so long things still are the same as they used to be' were back to square one. Where Natik is back to him self being a reserved lunatic' especially when it comes to feelings and expressing those feelings'. Oh how I wish some miracle would happen and he would change'. But then again do I really want him to change I love him regardless of his flaws and I know he does as well' so does it really matter if he is an introvert when it comes to expressing' I guess not'..

Akshara gets back thinking about her painting when she receives a text from one and only Natik to meet her at there usual place in half an hour'.

I quickly put aside the painting thoughts and darted towards the bathroom to get ready' and in less then 10 mins I was ready to go in my pink salwar' I didn't put makeup because I always felt make-up and getting decked up was a waste of time' drove to our usual spot the park where we always meet and was waiting for the one and only to show up'

It was 10mins over the time he wanted to meet and still no sign of him' ugh where is he I thought while I walked from one end of the lawn to the next while occasionally looking here and there.. nope no sign of him any where' where can he be I hope all is well and nothing happened to him.. my heart picked up pace just at the thought of that and just when things couldn't get worse it started to rain again' not that I mind rain but not right now its just not the time'here I am annoyed at Natik and nature is trying to calm me down no ways give me a break'.. I gave up and started to walk back to my car when I heard a familiar voice fill my ears'.

Akshara'.

That's all for now will write more soon later


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sej dahling,u r such a sweet heart 😃 a very big THANK YOU 4 accepting my request nd writing a wonderful os of NaKsh.im speechless dear.i already said that u r a fantastic writer.this os once again proved that.i must say this os is filled with beautiful words.i can imagine all those things u described here.i felt im reading a story written by an experianced writer.im not kidding yaar.it is true.ur akshara nd naitik r completely diff 4rm d show.w8ing 4 other parts.then only i will get 2 know abt naksh,their nature nd their relationship ❤️ im curious 2 know,what is in that papers.i really appreciate ur naturality,it is reflecting in ur writing also.thanks 4 d pm.eagerly w8ing 4 other parts.this is 4 u sej dear🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice cont soon waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear
Lovely OS
As u know that I love AR like anything
so I imagine AR in this OS also😛
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
take care

Lots of Love
GEET

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Posted: 14 years ago
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seju... no words to say how it is... u r really a very very very good writer... U explained the first scene in mandup so beautifully... I liked the way u wrote in akshara's point of view... very beautifyl explanation of everything... liked it so much... I didn't feel some girl is writing... I felt some good writer has written it... u have great writing skills... keep it up dear... do write like this more... love to read it... continue it soon... the concept n story u have chosen is very nice... waiting for the next part... n start an ff also soon... will be waiting...
Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear
Lovely OS
As u know that I love AR like anything
so I imagine AR in this OS also😛
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
take care

Lots of Love
GEET


lol geet you no i was just going to make a this OS in also AR version heeheheheh
and im glad u liked it so sweet of you :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey my Sejuuu how are you ? 🤗
Ohhh suuuperb OS !!! 👏 I just love the way you writed it 😉
Please continue 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one.
I imagine AR in place of Natik and Akshra.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Hey sej dahling,u r such a sweet heart 😃 a very big THANK YOU 4 accepting my request nd writing a wonderful os of NaKsh.im speechless dear.i already said that u r a fantastic writer.this os once again proved that.i must say this os is filled with beautiful words.i can imagine all those things u described here.i felt im reading a story written by an experianced writer.im not kidding yaar.it is true.ur akshara nd naitik r completely diff 4rm d show.w8ing 4 other parts.then only i will get 2 know abt naksh,their nature nd their relationship ❤️ im curious 2 know,what is in that papers.i really appreciate ur naturality,it is reflecting in ur writing also.thanks 4 d pm.eagerly w8ing 4 other parts.this is 4 u sej dear🤗



HEY rasha

no need to thank me :D...
and im so glad u liked it i was so worried that u would not like the OS but im so glad u enjoyed it :D
and thnx so much for the compliments ur showing me with love you :D... i will upload the next part soon and i hope you like it :P...
and yes both naksh are diff from the show i wanted them to have a new type of feel lol...
but im glad u like it thnx so much for forcing me to write lol ;p
tc
Sejal<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saru.g

seju... no words to say how it is... u r really a very very very good writer... U explained the first scene in mandup so beautifully... I liked the way u wrote in akshara's point of view... very beautifyl explanation of everything... liked it so much... I didn't feel some girl is writing... I felt some good writer has written it... u have great writing skills... keep it up dear... do write like this more... love to read it... continue it soon... the concept n story u have chosen is very nice... waiting for the next part... n start an ff also soon... will be waiting...



saru
1st of all thank you for the sweet words and you really like my writing im so happy yayayay :D...
and i wish my eng teachers thought i had good writing skills as well :( they only gave me b+ for all my papers lol ;p hehehe... but im so happy you like the OS
and yes i will write the ff soon as well :D... thnx for everything :D
take care
Sejal<3

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