Darling naksh ff : imp note at pg 16

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Deepshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

nice part buddy

update soon...😉

Edited by sweet_deepshi - 14 years ago

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Sameera Badar

@sameera_naksh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Nyc Part i waited your surprise

Plz ryt next part soon

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nasreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

i am first time commenting i read but do no comment

your ff was just awesome yaar you done fab job 👏yaar what suprise i am waiting please contiune soon

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Shyamal

@shyamal_hina.di

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Part :::::: 8
new day begins . Aksh and naitik r sleeping, hugging each other . Suddenly aksh opens her eyes and finds the alarm missing . She took her cell phone and saw it was 7:15 . And she also noticed the alarm with naitik and she understood That naitik has purposely switched off the alarm . She was very angry with him , but she remembered that yesterday was their anniversary so she decided to let go . She smiled seeing naitik sleeping and took her sari and hurried for bath .
She did the Puja and all .
It was 9:00
In naksh room - naitik was still sleeping , aksh went there with the tea . She tried to wake him up but he didnt . At last aksh was very angry at him that he made her late and now he himself is getting late for his work . She took the jug of water and threw it on him . He surprisingly wake up . Aksh laughed seeing him like this .
N : kya zamana , patni apne pati ki nind kharab karke has rahi hai .
N : accha to aap konsa apni patni ki baton ko mante . Mai aapko pichle 2 Ghanto se utha rahi hun phir bhi aap ghode bechkar so rahe hai .
N : boliye , to mai apni galti kaise sudhar sakta hun .
A : mai aapko bad mein acche sochkar bataungi . Par abhi ke liye aap office ke liye ready ho jaiye .
N : ok . Jaisa aap kahe meri Jaan . ( kissing her both cheeks) . I am in a hurry . But will update next part very nice and interesting .

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anvesha sharma

@anveshasharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

nice part shyamal,w8ing eagerly 4 d next part,cont soon...

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Sameera Badar

@sameera_naksh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

nyccc part plz cont. soon

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nivedha

@nivedha_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

nice part😃

cont.soon😊

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Shyamal

@shyamal_hina.di

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

::::: PART - 8::::: Aksh was serving breakfast to daddaji , naitik called her from the room . Aksh goes in the room .
A : naitik, plz dont tell that , aapke shirt ka aaj phir button tut gaya .
Naitik nods .aksh takes out the thread - needle and goes to naitik . Naitikholds her tighly from the vaist .
A : agar aap mujhe itna kaskar pakdenge to stitches lete waqt aapko ye needle lag jayegi.
N : mujhe koi fark nahi padta . Aap saath hogi to mujhe ye chot bhi pyaari lage gi. Saiying this He kisses aksh's cheeks . He purposely fell on the bed with aksh . Naitik was on aksh .

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anvesha sharma

@anveshasharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

very nice,short n sweet update shyamal😳,now i m craving to know d ahead scene...u stopped it at a point,ahead of which,everybody is eagely w8ing to read,cont soon...