Darling naksh ff : imp note at pg 16

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

This ff starts with the present sitiations means varsha taking ananya from akshi's hand . She speaks something that hurts akshara a lot . She has tears in her eyes . Here i go . Bindiya : akshara bhabhi , varsha bhabhi sahi to keh Rahi hai . Aap mai nahi hai isliye bacche ko kaise sambhalna hai ye aap nahi janti . Ananya varsha ki beti hai to unhe hi unka dhyan rakhna chahiye , aap to uski bua hai to uske saath kheliye, pura din use apne saath rakhengi to vo bore ho jayengi aur Chote bacchon ko ma se jyada koi pyaar nahi kar sakta . Bas karo bindiya - a sound came from back . it was naitik . Bin was shocked 2 listen bindiya instead of bindiya bhabhi . All looked shocked Naitik : bin , itna shock hone ki jarurat nahi hai , jise kisi insaan ki feelings ka khayal na ho use respect dene se kya matlab . akshara . A : naitik plzz , kisi se kuch mat kahiye . She cant control her tears , so she ran 2 her room . Naitik Also hurried giving very angry looks 2 all . At the room aksh sits down on the carpet taking support of the bed , she weeps a lot . Nai comes and sits with akshara , he just takes aksh in his arms and caresses her hair . N : aksh plz stop crying . Akshara control your tears . Aap kin logon ki batein sunkar ro rahi hai jinhone kabhi kisi ka accha nahi chaha aur logo se tarif sunne ke liye dhikhava kiya . Aise logon ke aansun bahana pagalpan hai . Sambhaliye apne aap ko . A : naitik , mai jitna is Baat ko bhulkar pehle jaise khush rehne ka try karti , baar baar ye sach mere samne aa jata hai . N : aapko ekdam bold hona hoga . Koi chahe jo bhi kahe aap use ansuna kar dijiye . Aur ek bar m.c hone se aisa nahi hota ki koi ma nahi ban sakta . Ye in [COLOR=red]cident almost 40 % ladies ke saath hota hai . Aap plz chup ho jaiye .

Edited by Cuteshyamal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow nice scolding to bindiya loved it . Agar serial main bhi mil jaye to maza aa jayega .superb ,good effort

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice start

plz cont. soon...yaa ye itna hi hai😊

Edited by divi4u - 14 years ago

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

N : aap hi to meri zindagi hai aur agar mai aapko asie tuta hua nahi dekh sakta . Aksh plz sambhaliye . Chaliye uthiye .aksh stands up with the support of nai and he makes her sit on the bed . He puts a tablet in aksh mouth and feeds her water . Aap jal di se thik ho jaiye kyunki mujhe apni patni ko aise udaas dekne ki bilkul bhi aadat nahi hai . Samjhi aap . He also sits with aksh and switches off the light . Akshara rests her head on him . N : aksh maine apko rona banh karne ke liye kaha hai . A : ok She soon falls asleep . On his shoulder but naitik is still awake . There down gayatri tells bin to think 10 times on wat she says . Pata nahi aksh ke dil ko kitni chot pahuchi hogi . G3 , bm and rasmmi go to naksh room and by that time nai puts On pillow and covers her with blanket . He places a soft kiss on aksh's 4head and says aksh i lov u . Apke jitna pyaara to koi o hi nahi sakta . Then he comes out of the room . G3 , bm and rashmi were standing outside and saw aksh sleeping and said : achaHua tumne bahu ko sula diya . Nai says mujhe aap sabse aur dj se baat karni hai . They all went 2 dj's room and there dj and rb wer discussing about worse situation of naksh , naitik and all enter the room ,. Nai tells all he wants aksh 2 take out of [COLOR=magenta]Udaipur 4 some days . So that her health betters and she can 4get all this . All agree . Rb tells that he will book their tickets as fast as possible . He calls his manager and tells him 2 book 2 tickets 4 las vegas . Rb told nai that their flight is 10 : 00 in morning the next day . Nai says ok and goes 2 their room . He takes out the all the jwellery of aksh while she was sleeping for her comfortabilit-y . Then he goes 2 the kitchen and asks g3 4 aksh's food . G3 says she has already prepared 4 them Nai hugs g3 . G3 : beta tu akshara aur apna khayal rakhna . Ye tune acha socha . Isse aksh ka dil behel jayega . Chal jaldi khana lekar ja varna thanda ho jayega . Ther bin comes . Nai stares her with anger . She tries 2 ask nai and g3 that were naksh Going but g3 and nai leave without replying

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

Agar aap sab ko ye pasand aaya to mai ise continue karungi . Aur aage naksh ki las vegas ki trip hai . Ready 4 that . I will post it later . Share your precious views with me thank u