Darling naksh ff : imp note at pg 16

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I didnt hope that u all will like it . If u want i can trn it 2 a ff

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nivedha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

both parts are good😊

cont. soon😊

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sdhg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

jahan naksh ka zikar ho aur bindiya ka pachka ho woh to accha lagega he, do update

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saman.17

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Asawari_naksh
Is it oneshot or FF...anyways nice part...😃

jo bhi ho bahut accha laga padke kaash naitik yrkkh me bhi bindiya ko ek baar suna de wowww kitna mazaa aayega...😃

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Awesome part yaar...😊

do update soon...v r waiting...n Naksh ka Las Vega trip...i would love to read

plzzz update soon

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pvlaks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I loved all parts... continue soon plz

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

I will post the next parts 2morrow at 11 : 00 in morning . Thanks 4 comments . Luv u all

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Shyamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

PART 3 ::::::: meanwhile aksh awakes . N: accha hua aap uth gayi . Mai aapke liye kKhana laya tha. A : aur aapka . N : aapke saath . Aksh smiles at naitik and hugs him and tells him that how can one be so caring and sweet . I thank god everyday 2 giv me a hubby as u . I just lov u . U r my life . Pata hai aise kitne pati hai , jis ki pati ke m.c ke baad vo unse naaraz hote hai ya to dur ho jate hai . Par aapne apne pyaar mujhe aapke aur bhi paas la diya . N : are kal se mai pura din apke sath rehne wala hun . To kal se aapko meri jitni tarif aur mujhpe jitna pyaar barsana ho utnaBarsana , par abhi ke liye to aap khaiye . A : kyu kal se . N : kyuki kal ham subha 11:00 baje lasVegas ja rahe hai . Wo bhi pure ek mahine ke liye . A : what . Aap majak kar rahe haina . N : nahi nahi , apke saath mazak karne ki himmat mujhme kahan . A : plz be serious . N : ok , mai sach keh raha hun . Humein iski permission dj se aur baki Se mil chuki hai . A : par rashmi ki shaadi . Just then g3 enters with bm and says u do not need 2 worry . We will do it aur shaadi ke liye to 2 and half months ki deri hai . Tum dodo acche se ghum aao . Aksh smiles . Accha main ye kehne Ke liye aiye thi ki tum chaho to bazar se kapde kharid aao . N : han ma . Mujhe bhi apne liye naye kapde kharidne the par waqt nahi tha. Akshara aap taiyar ho jaiye . G3 goes aways and naitik feeds aksh and says : apko khana acha nahi lagta kya ? Hames ha mujhe aapko tokna padta hai . A : agar apne aap kha lungi to aap mujhe aise thodi na khilate . N : accha . Par aap kabse aise romantic ho gayi . A: vo to pehle se hi thi . Aap pehchan nahi paye . N : acha , ek aap chuparustam hai aur meri galti Nikal rahi hai . A : sorry sorry . And kisses his cheek . N : wah khana khatam hone se pehle hi mitha . Not bad . They hug i will update next part after 30 minutes .