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--Nishita--

@--Nishita--

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Tafseer

yeh toh kk Naitik se puchne padega ki what did he do??? that too he went to fetch the designs from Sneha's friend....n earrings kahan se aa gaya..bohot natak ho raha hai ab...

He looked clueless....which means he dropped yedi. akkal naam ki cheez hi nahi hai 😡 what pleasure is he getting by upsetting Aksh so much?

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Anjali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I dont no but i never like naitik character...
Never support her nor do he care about her how he is hurting her...
Akal kia hoti hay inko kiya pata

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naitikanksha

@naitikankshaaaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: --Nishita--

He looked clueless....which means he dropped yedi. akkal naam ki cheez hi nahi hai 😡 what pleasure is he getting by upsetting Aksh so much?

he bhagwan!😊 bas ab kuch b galatfehmiyan na hon😭..........ek galtfehmi khatam hoti hai toh dusri shuru ho jati hai

........mujhe toh lagta hai ki iska yrkkh se naam badal kar ""yr galatfehmien kya kehlati hain""🤢 hona chahiye........pagal bana rahe hain...aur uparse ye naitik iski toh aisi ki taisi jab dekho akshara ko hurt karta rehta hai😕....sabse jyada pitne ka man toh naitik ke uss kambakth dost

ko jata hai jiska ye ghatiya aut flop idea hai ya a little jeaoulsy in a relation ship😳 is healthy ...........but just a lttle not upto this extent

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..Akaisha..

@..Akaisha..

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

woww...nyc start keep updaing and pm me also plss...

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Anjali

@Born-star

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: smart.akaisha
woww...nyc
start keep updaing and pm me also plss...

Thank you !
Sure will pm me :)

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Nikki

@nikki18

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

@ sheronia: u wrote well.👍🏼 .i wish aisa kuch ho n dis track cums to an end soon!!..bht jyada hi ho gya
gud start..hope to more frm u !!

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Anjali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nikki18
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sheronia: u wrote well.👍🏼 .i wish aisa kuch ho n dis track cums to an end soon!!..bht jyada hi ho gya
gud start..hope to more frm u !!

Thanks a lot Nikki...
Will continue ...aisa serial main to hoga nahi to imagination hee sahi:)

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Anjali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

story continues from page 1 ....

Morning Time! Bed Room Scene>>>>

Akshara wakes up on the ring of Alarm.
As She about to leave her bed ,Naitik Holds her hand and pulls her towards him.😳

Akshara! Naitik what are you up to plz let me go, Maa Kiya sochay gee abhi tak main uthi kyun nahi....

Naitik...Takes a deep breath ,😆Lo Maa kee fikker hay hay ,Apnay husband kee parwa nahi.😳

Naitik looking at her lovely face ,Touches her hair ,😳And told her gently .You need to take rest. Dont you remembered what doctor said yesterday.

Akshara.. Naitik Plz ,I am perfectly alright .Kuch nahi howa.I was bit upset that's it.

I am extremely sorry Akshara. I was being selfish. To gain your attention I played with your feelings. I used sneha name.

What ?? I dont get you?😕 says Akshara...

Naitik.... Actually, I cant imagine of any girl other then you.I was only doing Natak ignoring you, Just to get your attention...Plz Dont get angry. Main Aapko sneha say milwa doo ga. Uskoo to pata bhi nahi kay main kiya karaha hoon..aur main nay sirf usko uskay kaam kee waja say appoint kiya hay ..aur koi reason nahi hay.....

Akshara.... Really naitik..i was so scared.mujhay laga ab main aapko achi nahi lagtee😭 Aurrrr aaaaaaap nay mujhay ulloo bana nay ka koi moka nahi chordha 😆

(Both Laughs and hugged eachother....)

Gaya Knocks at the door.....................

Akshara....are you still asleep ????(Araay aunty ji ager room say bahar nahi dikh rahi to so hee rahi hogi na😆)any ways naitik told akshara to sleep,and opens the door...

Ji Maa,akshara is still asleep.she is not feeling well so I told her to take rest....

(Gaya ji kee smile to eik dum vanish hee hogaeee aur wahi jealousy walay expression deeyay aunty nay 😆)

naitik...Maa , Today I will stay with akshara.... I want to take care of her.... Plz tell dad ,Today I couldn't go to the office.

Gaya...Acha Jaisay tere marzi...Waisay me ,Rashmi and BM is going to friend house ( aunty ji subha subha naiki woww)
Ager Tum Kaho hum nahi jatay....

Without giving a full stop to his convo he says imidiatly nahi nahi maaaaaaa😳 ,Wo I mean aap jayay main hoon na😳 .. waisay bhi ager koi problem hooee to main doctor ko phone karoo ga 😆😆

Gaya ..Haan yay bhi hay..Ok To hum Thoree dair main nikal jayay gay ..maharaja ji ko khanay ka kehdaytee hoon....(Gaya ji wahi rehna wapas mat ana 😆)

Scene Ends Here.................

Mohit House Kitchen scene...

Nandini Preparing lunch for mohit, Suddenly she lose her balance ,she was about to fell someone holds her ,her eyes were closed ,breath was restless...
Mohit thank you I love you for this says Nandini....

I love you too ,says Mohit Kee maa means Nandini kee saasu maa😆

Nandini Opens her eyes and saw Saasu Maa infront of her😆

.Varsha At her Mother's House

Everyone knows Varsha is pregnant..And her Mother In law dont want her to go to her Mother house in this condition..
But what to say Jo Likha hota hay woh hona hee hota hay...

Varsha was going to the toilet just then her leg slipped at she had a fall.... 😭

THE END

Precap....

Everyone is crying in Mahaswary's house....

Note...
Hope you liked it plz comment😳..forgive me If i am mistaken...

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457639

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

i read both parts today..

beautifully written.!!

continue soon.!!

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sonal

@sonalwade

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sheronia
story continues from page 1 ....

.Varsha At her Mother's House

Everyone knows Varsha is pregnant..And her Mother In law dont want her to go to her Mother house in this condition..
But what to say Jo Likha hota hay woh hona hee hota hay...

Varsha was going to the toilet just then her leg slipped at she had a fall.... 😭

THE END

Precap....

Everyone is crying in Mahaswary's house....

Note...
Hope you liked it plz comment😳..forgive me If i am mistaken...