Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47.. - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: VivaciousBhavya

hey awesome update dear👏👏👏

very well written
cont. soon

thank u so very much bhavya.!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
hiiiii....how r u???
we havent spoken to each other in ages!!!
i read all the updates!!!...they were all soooooooooo awesome...terrific..soooo different
i never knew u write..:(...but u r a fantastic writer
well keep in touch...take care
n if u can then do pm me wen u update...rlly want to read the next part
drishti :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
very nice part...keep going ......
well done.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Drishti...

hiiiii....how r u???

we havent spoken to each other in ages!!!
i read all the updates!!!...they were all soooooooooo awesome...terrific..soooo different
i never knew u write..:(...but u r a fantastic writer
well keep in touch...take care
n if u can then do pm me wen u update...rlly want to read the next part
drishti :D

hii..
yeah i noe.. so busy these days.. ddn get tym to stay connected.. neways thnx a lot...
well.. surely i'l pm u...
btw.. nyc signature.... same pinch.!! i hav the same for my messenger.!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: moonlight08

hii..

yeah i noe.. so busy these days.. ddn get tym to stay connected.. neways thnx a lot...
well.. surely i'l pm u...
btw.. nyc signature.... same pinch.!! i hav the same for my messenger.!!!!!!

awww..ure most welcome 😊..ohh busy?...hmmm...ho jata hain..
thnks a ton
ohh ya??..tats awesome...i rlly like the signature..it sayss sooo much in such few words isnt it?..i love quotes!..lol..same pinch 😃..and update was rlly good
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hello guys..
m bak with Tum Dena Saath Mera...
but before i start.. this part is for pankhi.. she writes such long long comments... motivating me to write better everytym... thankx pankhi.....
Part 4
Naitik very soon reaches airport.. on his way.. he talked to his in-laws and took their blessings.. everyone was very happy for him...
as soon as he boards the flight.. a sense of nervousness captures him... he longs to be with akshara at this point of tym.. but is unable to.. also.. to aggrevate his miseries even more.. the flight is about to take off.. n now.. he cannot call akshara...
throughout his flight.. he remains anxious.. as soon as he reaches delhi.. collects his luggage n takes a taxi to his airport.. he calls akshara... meanwhile
Akshara (in her room) : hey bhagwan.. naitik bhi na.. bola tha inhe ek fone karne ke liye.. abhi tak nhi kia.. samjhte hi nhi hai ye to.. naya shahar hai.. ek baar mujhse baat kar lete to kuch bigad to nhi jata na inka.. khud to apne kaam mein lag gye honge.. mere baare mein sochne ki fursat kaha hai inhe.. aane do fone.. baat hi nhi karungi aaj to main inse......
just then her fone rings..........
Akshara : hello naitik... kaha hai aap.?? ek fone nhi kar skte the mujhe aap jaane se pehle.. aur.. aur.. aapne ma se bat ki.?? maine bola tha na aapko.. aap kuch yad kyon nhi rakhte hai... aur aap hotel pahuch gaye hai kya.?? ya fir abhi airport par hi hai.. btaiye na.. chup kyon hai aap.??
Naitik : oho.. akshara.. shaant ho jaaiye aap.. main aapko fone karne hi wala tha.. lekin main flight mein baith chuka tha.. jab tak main free hua.. islie nhi kar paya.. ha.. maine ma aur baaki sabe bhi baat kar li.. aur main abhi taxi mein hu.. bus hotel ja rha hu....
Akshara : oh.. thik hai naitik.. apna khayal rkhiega aap..
Naitik : aap fikar mat kijiye akshara.. main khayal rakhunga........
(both are quite for some tym)...
Naitik : akshara... mujhe darr lag rha hai.. jaha pe mein award lene jaaunga.. vaha par kitne saare log honge.. mujhse koi gadbad to nhi hogi na.??
Akshara : naitik.. ye aap kaisi baatein kar rhe hai.?? ha.?? kuch bhi nhi hoga.. aap dekhiega.. aur jaha tak aapke darr ki baat hai.. to aapko cheer karne ke liye log itni taaliyan bajaenge.. ki aapka saara darr uss taliyon ke shor mein hi reh jaaega.. samjhe.??
Naitik : sach akshara.??
Akshara : ha.. naitik.. sach.. aur chahe kuch bhi ho... ye humesha yaad rakhiega.. ki main humesha aapke saath hu... aapko kisi bhi musibat ka saamne akele nhi karna hoga..
Naitik : pakka.?? vada kia na aapne.??
AKshara : ha.. pakka vada...
Naitik : acha chaliye main aapse baad mein baat karta hu.. hotel aa gya hai mera..
AKshara : thik hai naitik..
they are abt to hung up when........
Akshara : naitik.. rukiye..
Naitik : kya hua akshara..
Akshara : all the best.!!!
Naitik : thank you.. ab rakhu main fone..
Akshara : nhi.. nhi.. mujhe ek cheez aur bolni hai..
Naitik : kya.??
Akshara : yahi ki i...... love...... you.!!!!!!!!!!!
Naitik ( happily ) : i love u too akshara... bye.!!!
AT NIGHT..
Akshara is in her kitchen.. completeing all her pending work....
Rashmi : daddaji.. bhabhi ma.. ma.. bauji.. bhabhi.. didi.. jaldi aaiye.. dekhiye.. dada t.v. par aa rhe hai....
everyone is so excited that they come running into the hall...
all of them sit together to celebrate naitik's big day..
akshara msgs naitik saying..
"u r luking very handsome on t.v. all the best."
Delhi
naitik receives the msg... is very happy.. n replies to it..
"thank you.. my loving wife.. with the colleagues.. tok to u after i get the award."
Singhania mansion..
akshara receives the msg.. she is disappointed.. but she is not complaining.. she understands that her husband is a busy man.!!!
After a while..
" the award for the best managing director goes to Mr. Naitik Singhania.!! "
Singhania mansion..
Gayitri : bhabhi ma.. dekhiye// munna ko award mil gya.. vo lene jaa rha hai..
Bhabhi ma : ha choti dulhan.. kitna accha lag rha hai humara munna.!!
Daddaji : arre chup rho tum dono.. dekhne do manne.. ki vo kya bol rha hai...
Delhi :
naitik is nervous while going up on the stage.. but he remembers akshara's words.. that the sound of applause will vanish off his fear.. and akshara was rite.. it actually did..
while accepting the award....
Naitik : main is puruskaar ke liye jury ko dhanyawad bolna chahunga.. saath hi mein main apne daddaji.. apni bhabhi ma.. apni ma.. apne bauji aur meri pyari behenon ka bhi shukriya karna chahunga.. jisnki wajah se aaj main aap sab logon ke saamne khada hu.. thank u daddaji.. aapke ashirwad ke bina main kuch bhi nhi hu.!!!
and he proceeds downstairs..
Singhania mansion :
everyone is very happy.. their munna had acknowledged their presence in his life.. n they needed nothing else...
akshara was so happy seeing her in-laws happy.. that her eyes were filled with tears of happiness.!!!
everyone was so happy.. that they forgot that naitik has forgotten to acknowledge akshara...
but akshara did.. she was sad.. but she decided to let it go...
After an hour...
Daddaji : arre.. dusra award kab milega munna ko.. itni der ho gyi hai.. manne to neend bhi aane lagi hai..
Bhabhi ma : to aap jaa kr so jaaiye na.. kal to aaega hi ye wapis.. tab dekh lenge hum log..
Gayitri : ha.. daddaji.. kal hum sab mil kar dekh lenge.. hum logon ko bhi neend aa rhi hai.. rashmi aur nandini ka to kal college bhi hai.. der se soenge to kal uth bhi nhi paengi ye dono..
Daddaji : ha.. ye thik rhega.. kal subah jab vaapis aaega hum tab dekh lenge.. chalo.. sab so jaao.. bahu.. light pankha yad se band kar dio..
Akshara : ji.. daddaji... n she sits down in front of the t.v. again..
Gayitri : arre bahu.. tum baith kyon gayi ho.?? chalo.. sona nhi hai kya.??
Akshara : ma/.. plz.. bus 5 min. aur.. aap log jaaiye.. main thodi der mein band kar rhi hu...
Bhabhi ma : choti dulhan.. rehne do bahu ko.. vo apne aap aa jaegi... chalo.. apne chalte hai..
and all go to sleep.. xcept akshara....
a while later
akshara is starting to feel sleepy....
just then her fone starts ringing..
Akshara : hello..
Naitik : hello akshara.. aap so to nhi gayi na.. bus agla award mera hi announce hoga..
Akshara : arre nhi naitik.. main jag hui hu.. aap hi ko dekh rhi hu main to..
Naitik : chaliye ab main rakhta hu.. award announce hone hi wala hai..
Akshara : thik hai.. all the best.. bye..
Delhi...
"the award of young acheiver goes to mr. naitik singhania"
naitik goes to collect the award
Naitik : ye award mera apna hai.. is award ke liye main kisi ko bhi thank u nahi bolna chahta.. maine jo bhi kia hai.. apne bal boote par kia hai...................................................
to be continued...
comments.. complains and suggestions are always welcum..
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regards...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Drishti...

awww..ure most welcome 😊..ohh busy?...hmmm...ho jata hain..

thnks a ton
ohh ya??..tats awesome...i rlly like the signature..it sayss sooo much in such few words isnt it?..i love quotes!..lol..same pinch 😃..and update was rlly good

yeah.. quite true yar.. i love tis quote..
thnx fir ur compliments are...
do read the next part too.. it has been updated..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
OMG!!!!!!!😲😳😳
F-A-B-U-L-O-U-S!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
I just loved the way u hv written it!!!! NaKsh phone convo.....Akshara saying she'll always be WITH him😍....this perfectly explains the title of ur FF!!!!!!👍🏼
U know I had actually guessed ki he won't thank Akshara😛...I dunno y😳....
Ohhh but that's so sad😔....I was expecting it atleast wen he receives the 2nd award😕.....
but then naitik won't forget his akshara anyways🤔....
I just can't wait to read the next part now😳.....cont. asap.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: manasi_31

OMG!!!!!!!😲😳😳

F-A-B-U-L-O-U-S!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
I just loved the way u hv written it!!!! NaKsh phone convo.....Akshara saying she'll always be WITH him😍....this perfectly explains the title of ur FF!!!!!!👍🏼
U know I had actually guessed ki he won't thank Akshara😛...I dunno y😳....
Ohhh but that's so sad😔....I was expecting it atleast wen he receives the 2nd award😕.....
but then naitik won't forget his akshara anyways🤔....
I just can't wait to read the next part now😳.....cont. asap.....😊

thank u manasi....
u guessed it.?? well.. i shud hav known.. after all.. ek writer hi dusre writer ke man ki baat padh sakta hai..
neways thnx a lot yar...
yeah.. next part cuming up next monday.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
woww yaar
A-w-e-s-o-m-e
s-u-p-e-r-b
a big applause 4 u dear
veryy nice.....
akshara did very well......
veryy sweet and cutee
cont soon
thnx 4 pm.........................................................

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