Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: nivedha_123
its a loving part😛
in serial they r not at all showing naksh scenes😡

im happy reading ur ff 😳

plssssssss cont. soon 😃

ab to ye complain nhi rhegi ki scenes nhi mil rhe hai huemin..😆

thanx for appreciation..😃

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shriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

heyaa nyc part i w8ted so long 4 it 😆 really gud 😛

thnx 4 d pm

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Apoorva_22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Even i was wondering when u will update..!😊 Good job kaumudi...!!

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pvlaks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

hai kaumudi now only i read all parts its awesome please continue soon

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457639

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

😆😳hello guys..😃

finally.. im back with the next part.. i was in no mood to write it today.. lekin it's all because of stuti that im writing it.. thanks stuti.. the part is entirely dedicated to u..😃

previous part on pg. 35..

PART 12

Akshara : naitik ye aapko kya ho gya hai.?? abhi to aapko neend aa rhi thi.. aur ye achanak se aap gaana kyon gaane lag gye..

Naitik : kyon aapko pasand nhi aaya.??

Akshara : naitik aisi koi baat nhi hai.. aap jo bhi karte hai muje accha hi lagta hai..

Naitik : (obviously getting naughty😛) : main jo bhi karta hu vo sab aapko accha lagta hai.?? sach mein akshara.??

Akshara (blushing) : dhatt.. sab nhi accha lagta.. sirf kuch kuch hi accha lagta hai..

Naitik : accha.. kya kya accha lagta hai.??

Akshara : umm.. aap jab gaana gaate hai muje tab accha lagta hai.. jab aap office se thake haare aate hai aur aate hi muje poochte hai tab accha lagta hai.. jab aap thoos thoos ke khana khate hai muje tab bhi bhot accha lagta hai..

Naitik : accha.. aur aapko mere baare mein kya kya accha nhi lagta.??

Akshara : jab aap mere paas aate hai to muje bilkul accha nhi lagta..

Naitik : soch lijiye.. kya aapko bilkul accha nhi lagta.?? (saying this.. he comes really close to her.. and looks into her eyes)

Akshara : (taking her eyes away from him) after a pause... nhi lagta..

Naitik : to aap abhi itna sharma kyo rhi hai.. aur mujse nazre kyon nhi mila rhi hai.??

Akshara : vo.. bus aise hi.. (and she tries to get out of the bed.. but naitik holds her hand and pulls her even more closer to himself..)

Naitik : jhoot mat boliye akshara.. aapko accha lagta hai jab main aapke paas aata hu to.. tabhi to abhi tak aapne muje itni tightly pakad rakha hai..

Akshara : (realising ki she is the one who's held on her partner tightly) blushes madly.. and hides her face in his chest.. and without looking into his eyes says.. naitik ur impossible.. she plants a kiss on his cheeks.. and again hides her face in his chest..

Naitik is way too shocked to realise what happened.. and he too reciprocates her gesture by a loving kiss on her forehead.. it was a cold night and naitik pulls up the blanket and...

samarpan ki bela.. aayi re aayi sajni..😳😳

(guys.. iske aage mujse umeed mat rakhna.. im already blushing so much while writing this part😳😳😳)

Next morning :

the chirping birds.. the shining sun.. the azure sky.. but naksh are oblivious to all these.. they are in each others arms.. sleeping peacefully.. when suddenly the alarm rings..

akshara wakes up..

Akshara : kya.. 7 baj gye.. hey bhagwaan main itna kaise so gyi.. ye naitik bhi na.. khud bhi late hote hai aur muje bhi late karate hai..

naitik.. uthiye.. dekhiye 7 baj gye hai.. kitni der ho gyi hai aap uthiye na.. dekhiye aapki wajah se main bhi late ho gyi hu..

Naitik (half asleep) : maine kya kiya akshara.?? ab aap der se uthi iss mein meri kya galti.??

Akshara : (suddenly realising what she had just said) kya naitik aap bhi subah subah..

Naitik : arre.. maine kya kiya.??

Akshara : kuch nhi kiya aapne.. meri galti jo maine aise bola.. chaliye ab uthiye nhi to late ho jaaenge aap..

Naitik : ab aapne galti ki hai to saza to milegi aapko.. chaliye ek kiss dijiye muje..

Akshara surprisingly does not question him or ans. him back.. but plants a very passionate kiss on his cheeks.. she's about to go from there when..

Naitik : akshara.. suniye..

Akshara : kya.??

Naitik : i love u..

Akshara : smiles and says.. i love u too..😳

ok guys this is it for today..

hope u like it..

next part.. i don't know kab aaega.. but i'l try and update this month itself..😆

comments, complains and suggestions most welcome..😃

warm regards..

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466726

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Wow...😍 awesome fantastic update kaumudi...👏 Yeh update padhne se pehle I had to read previous parts...😆 If you can plz PM me when you update...really want to read the next part...😃

Edited by Asawari_naksh - 14 years ago

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nasreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

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kaumadi nice part yaar naitik so naughty i read all parts all are just mindblowing

please contunie soon

next time please pm yaar

Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

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oye teri... mujhe dedicate kiya part aur mein comment karne mein late ho gayi... i wanted to be first😭 but me 3rd😭😭

lolz... about the part... wowww...
mein bhi blush kar rahi thi yr!!!!
woww... firstly mujhe recall nai hua ki naksh kaha hai... lolzz...
ab itna late update karegi... toh dhyan mein kaise rahega yr😆😆

tune mera din bana diya... woww... loved the part...

complaints hai...
1. jaldi update nai karti..
2. tune forehead kiss daali yr mein tang aa chuki hu forehead kisses se... i mean jabhi dekho serial mein bhi naitik ya to uske cheek pe haath rakhta hai.. ya forhead pe kiss marta hai... uff...!!! lolzz...

but i loved the part... it was sooo woww... waiting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago

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RINSE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

cccute ff eagerly waiting 4 another. plz update sooonnn

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457639

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva
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=EDITED=
oye teri... mujhe dedicate kiya part aur mein comment karne mein late ho gayi... i wanted to be first😭 but me 3rd😭😭

lolz... about the part... wowww...
mein bhi blush kar rahi thi yr!!!!
woww... firstly mujhe recall nai hua ki naksh kaha hai... lolzz...
ab itna late update karegi... toh dhyan mein kaise rahega yr😆😆

tune mera din bana diya... woww... loved the part...

complaints hai...
1. jaldi update nai karti..
2. tune forehead kiss daali yr mein tang aa chuki hu forehead kisses se... i mean jabhi dekho serial mein bhi naitik ya to uske cheek pe haath rakhta hai.. ya forhead pe kiss marta hai... uff...!!! lolzz...

but i loved the part... it was sooo woww... waiting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!

yar stuts pta hai maine khud pehle wala part padha do baar ki akhir maine likha kya hai.. yaad hi nhi tha..😃

and about ur complains.. i'l try to be more regular.. sorry..😳

and about the forehead kiss.. yar vo lete hue hai bed pe.. ab vo aur kaha kiss karega.. cheeks ho gya.. ab agar lips pe dikhaungi to main to likh hi nhi paungi vo part.. itna blush karne lag jaaungi main likhte likhte..😳😛

chal next time try karungi koi aur jagah dhundhu.. haath kaisa rhega..😛

Edited by moonlight08 - 14 years ago