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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mariam_

behna 🤗 😆 I have to comment as you did remind me exp this tym acha i will first give brief view on my thoughts of your ff from the beginning i wont comment on each part it will take me yrs and you will die of bordem reading my bakwas comments 🤣 here goes this is the first ff that i actually followed behna otherwise i dont read ff at all or go far then 2 parts anyways this is really beautifully writen i loved naksh romance 😍 and they way they are together to stand up to the pagal family of theres 😆 did the jokers go mental thinking 50 yrs old guy is alright just because he is educated 🤢 i never liked mohini story i was always a fan of mohit and rashmi but never mind about that at the moment you potrayed there story great, loved the wedding preps and the dancing part loved the pregnancy track you potrayed it beautifully the flash back when akshi tells natik you didnt stretch it like the cv are doing at the mo and there little baby girl aww you look so cute behna as naksh baby 😍 loved the way natik looked after akshi and the baby and how naksh handled there baby together akriti cute name loved natik's akshara and varsha season 2 comment so cute loved how you justified akriti name the papa and akriti bond is so cute want to see natik and baby bond like this in the serial aww akshi has to run around akriti she has become naughty loved the papa and beti phone convo and akshi recording it aww such a cute precap akriti saying i love you to ananaya clever baby after all she is naksh daughter na 😆 and naksh spm 😍 yeah we get to read about it atleast in your ff 😆 congo and jokers arent annoyning in your ff thank god kash asi serial me hote yeah i have catched up now 🥳 loved reading your ff behna cont soon love you 🤗

ps: remind me what else res i have for your stuff so i can un res now


OMG yeh mere FF ka i guess sabse sabe bada commnet aaj tak ka mujhe aise comments pehle sirf gallery mein milte hai FF mein pehle baar mila so big huggsss 🤗 and strt se lekar end tak wow thnaks yaar thanks alot for such awesome awesome comment ab i'll update in april only now :D :D 😉 and yea they r diff not only jokers all are diff 😛😛 and yea i am naksh baby 😆😆 and jo jo i didnt do like crawling and all in real life i am doing now 🤣 and woh i love ko dekhna zarur i hvnt written but i hv it n my mind 😆😆 Naksh ki daughter toh hai lekin bola bhi ishliye hai i mean Nkash ko dekhar hi bola 🤣 Chalo ab finallly i'll end with Thanks :D
PS: u gotto unres my VM thread and my own gallery u havent res but hv to comment 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: i4naksh

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finally read it..
pre...superb awesome👏👏👏👏..loving the pappa beti jodi😃..natik is ofcorse a superb pappa...lovd the trio combination @ our cute lill akrithi😍...i imagined all the scens...its seems like we r wacthing it on tv...keep up the good work...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pree...
pree u didnot pm me this time... saw that u updated just now...
nd coming to the part its lovely... naitik nd akriti bonding is superub... 😃 nd awsome precap... cont soon waiting for next part... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part-48

Recap: Shava Daughter is named as ananya and now,Naksh daughter is 6 months old and started crawling,and today some family is coming to see rashmi.And all busy preparing

The scene continues after Naksh convo akshara finished all her work and some more time was left for the family who is coming to rashmi to come so akshara thought to spend some time with akriti . She takes the pictures book and show picture

Akshara: Akriti dekho dekho kya hai bolo maa bolo

Akriti: aahhh…..

Akshara: arre wah ab yeh dekho aur bolo papa bolo

Akriti: aahaa…

And akriti claps her hands so as akshara and Naitik comes

Akriti says aaahahaa

Naitik is very happie seeing that her daughter recognizes him as her papa…

Then Naitik goes to akshara and hold her from back both are sitiing on the ground

Naitik: toh kya sikhari hai aap ? main bhi toh dekho

And see under maa she is stuck her photo and under papa she has stuck Naitik photo

Akshara: kya hua yeh photo ab socha photo ke saath sikha deti hoon …

Naitik: who sab toh theek hai lekin jo hona chaiye who toh hai hi nahi ?

Akshara : Kya?

Naitik: kisses her cheeks and says I love u but you don't…

Akshara: kisses on his cheeks and says I love you tooo….. aur yeh baatien akriti ke liye nahi hai

And akriti is seeing all this she tries copying her papa

And comes near akshi and kisses her on her cheeks and says I ou yo (I love you)

Akshara is shocked ,but Naitik is super happie and goes near akriti and put his cheeks forward and akriti kisses him and tells I love you …

Naitik carries her and takes out to loan to play with her…

Here akshara is tensed and roaming here and there in room here Naitik comes with akriti telling akshara to make her wear small frock which shud be simple yet nice…. And takes out dress for her and he finds akshara tensed

Naitik: Kya hua akshara ?

Akshara : Naitik aapne suna akriti ne kya kahan?

Naitik: haan suna aur jab hum khel rahe tabhi bas wahi bole ja rahi thi…. Kitne cutely bol rahi hai….

Akshara: wahi toh problem agar isne ladke walon ke samne ya dadajee ke samne bol diya toh … ?

Naitik: akshara nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga nahi bolegi ab half-an hour hogaya ushe bole shant hojaye… aur tyaar ho jaye aur jaake rashmi ko bhi dikhye

And she leaves

Here Naitik takes a dress for akriti and a sari for akshara

Takes Akriti and put him on the bed removes the clothes she is wearing and somehow he manages to make her wear the frock

Naitik: arre wah aap toh bilkul gudiya lag rahe ho

Akriti: again claps hands

Naitik: kisses her cheeks and again she says I love you

He once again kisses she says I love so he knew ki only if some one kisses her she'll tell I love you and is relived now it was his turn tooo.. make her wear diaper as guests are coming akshara will be busy so he made her wear diaper but it was difficult task as Akriti does not like wearing diapers ….. but she papa ladli toh she had to wear….

Akshara comes in and sees akrtiti is ready and even her sari matching jewellery and bangles are kept ready..

Akshara : arre wah akriti ready hogayi aur yeh kya diaper pehn bhi liya bina roye…

Naitik: kaise royigi papa ne jo tyaar ki hai….

Akshara: acha and was abt to kiss her when Naitik stops

Naitik: akshara nahi kiss mat kijiye main aapko bata hoon kyun lekin baad mein abhi neeche jar aha hoon aap ready hokar aaye tab tak mein iske saath rahonga

Akshara: kyun ? mera matlab maa hai na woh rakhegi

Naitik: sab ishe kiss karenge aur … aap bas tyaar hokar neeche ishi ko rakhiyega plzzz

And leaves Akshara sees everything ready from sari to matching jewelry sab ready

Kya baat hai ab beti aur uski mummy ka farz hai ki papa ko bhi acha lagna chaiye..

Opens the cupboard and searchers for a shirt its blue color

Now akshara gets ready and goes down

Naitik is totally mesmerzised seeing her

Naitik : beta aaj toh mummy ne apko peeche kar diya aaj who zyda cute lag rahi hai.

Akshara: Naitik dijye aap ready hojaye maine aapke kapde ready rakhe hai

Naitik: Thank you akshara ,aur haan ishe kiss mat kijiye aur nahi kisi ko karne dijiye okay!

And Here comes Nikhil along his parents

And both families have talk and other side Rashmi and Nikhil have talk separately

And poor naitik is protecting akriti from getting kissed from anyone lolzz!!!

Its night @Naksh room

Naitik and akriti are playing and akshara comes

Akshara: Naitik ab toh baitye ab sabko kyun rok rahe they?

Naitik : hmm ek minute he kisses akriti and she says I love you !

Akshara: awww iska matalb ki job hi ish kiss karega yeh ushe I love you bolegi ?

Naitik : haan

Akshara: Naitik kal kya hoga?

Naitik: arre haan kal toh sab honge lekin chinta maat kijye shayad kal tak bhol jaye?

Akshara: Haan ho saktha

Chaliye so jate hai kal sagai hai tyaari karni hogi

Naitik : Haan akshara agar nikhilji ka kaam nai hota toh shayd itni jaldi sagai nai karni padthi

Akshara : Haan naitik lekin acha hai shadi kuch mahine baad hai tab tak rashmi ka last semester bhi khtam hojayenge

Naitik: Haan sahi kaahn .

@next morning

Akshara after giving instruction for decorating and preparing stuffs

Comes in room and sees two packets

Yeh kya hai?

Opens one cute frock pink in color for akriti

In other packet a lehenga fully yellow and the duppta have jari work and has Big pink border which has Kashmir work in khairi design

Akshara: Arre wah yeh lehenga aur frock toh bahut hai acha .

Just then gulabo comes and gives her a packet

She keeps it on the bed and takes her and akriti clothes and goes to rashmi room

Naitik comes into room

Yeh kya hai ?

Opens and sees a golden color kurta and Patiala pyjma which is which white in color

Naitik: yeh ? aise type ke sherwani maine kabhhi nai peheni kaisa lagonga pata nahi?

Lekin kisne itne pyaar se diya hai pehne bina reh bhi nai saktha

And he wears

And Naitik comes wearing the sherwani and here akshara along Akriti comes from rashmi room both are drooling over each other and have a eyelock ,just then gaya3 gave voice to gulabo and their eyelock breaks and both come down(perfect family wala moment )

Naitik : aap bahut cute lag rahi hai

Akshara: aur aap handsome aise kapde apne kabhi pehne nai na kaisa laga?

Naitik : pehle bahut ajeeb laga lekin jab kisne itne pyaar se diya hai toh kya kare ?

Just then a photographer asks to pose

And here goes a perfect family pose <3 <3

Just then M's come and shava and Naksh meet both are busy talking and here ananaya Kisses akriti and now akriti kisses ananaya and loudly says I love you

Naksh are shocked gaya3 and Dj come to Naksh

Dadaji: yeh ke hai munna aur bahu kya hai?

Naitik: dadajee woh kal …

Gaya3: kal kya munna?

Naitik: kal TV ,mein Bodyguard movie dekh rahe they usme yeh gana araha tha who dekh

Dadajee: aaj kal ke gane bhi a

And leaves followed by gaya3

Naitik also leaves accompanied by shaurya

Varsha: akshara tv dekh kar h sikh hai ya

Akshara: varsha kya tu bhi na

Varsha: aunty aur dadaji nai hoon main ki naitikji ki baat mein aa jaun

And akshara blushing

Akshara seeing if all things are set before guests arrive

Naitik pull her inside Bma room

Akshara: Naitik kya kar rahe aap?

Naitik: kyun daar gayi?

Akshara: Ji nai itna toh janti hoon ki mujhe aise kheechne wala koi aur nai balki meri pati dev hai …

Naitik : acha hai chaliye aankhe band kijiye

Akshara : kyun? Naitik mehman aare hai maa kya sochegi ?

Naitik: goes searches a tape and puts on akshara

Akshara shocked

Naitik goes on Knees and takes something out of the pocket and says

Will you be mine forever

Akshara : Nods

Naitik : kya ? you mean NO

Akshara: again Nods

Naitik : confussed .aww shit ek minute

He removes the tape from her mouth

Naitik: sorry akshara haan ab boliye ?

Akshara: pehle aap sorry boliye aise tape chipka diya

Naitik: aur kya karta aap Maa ka jhap karte takthi nahi

Akshara : kya aap bhi maa ka jhap aur raha sawal aapke proposal ka toh takes the gift from hand opens and see it's a locket in heart shape she takes it out and turns her back towards naitik and tells him to make her wear the chain

He gently moves her hair on one side and puts the chain kisses her back

Akshara is blushing and was about leave when Naitik hold her from back

Naitik: aapne chain to pehen li lekin iski khaas baat toh dekhi hi nahi?

Akshara: Main janti hoon woh khaas

Naitik: kya hai woh khaas baat ?

Akshara : aapka pyaar

Naitik: lekin isme use bhi khaas baat hai

Akshara: kya hai woh baat ?

Just then Bma knocks the door kaun hai andhar?

And akshara opens the door

Bma: bahu munna tum dono yahan?

Naitik: bma woh mujhe peth mein kuch chob raha tha laga rashes hogaye toh akshara ko dekhne ke liye bola toh pata chala tag ,tag puri tarah se nai nikhla ish liye who chob raha tha

Akshara: haan bma

Bma: acha kiya warna mehman ke samane munna pareshan hota rehta ab jao tum dono mein tyaar hoti hoon

And Naksh leave

Akshara: aapke paas aise reasons aate kahan se hai ?

Naitik: maine na isme PHD ki hai

Both laugh

And all ceremony takes place without any tension all have dinner and leave

In the night

@Naksh room

Naitik: Akshara akriti kahan hai?

Akshara: who maa ke paas hai

Naitik: uske kapde change karway diye ?

Akshara: Haan naitik ushe change karke maa ko diya ish liye abhi tak maine bhi change nai kiya,waise aap kahan they change nai karna?

Naitik: woh mohit se baat kar raha tha..

Just then gaya3 comes

Gaya3: Bahu woh akriti mere kamre mein hi sogayi hai

Naitik: toh main le aata hoon

Gaya3: Nai munna bechari thak gayi hogi khel kar ushe utha kar le aayega toh woh uth jayegi .

Akshara: Haan maa theek ke rahi hai aap

Gaya3: toh aaj ushe humare paas sone de

Both agree

Here akshara goes is standing near dressing table ,Naitik closes the door goes near akshara he gently moves his hands on her back akshara is just shivering with his touch Naitik moves her hair and kisses her back ,then removes her necklace and kisses ,then goes near earring first goes to left earring he removes that and kisses the ear then right earrings and then kisses that ear then Naitik turns akshara towards him akshara is still blushing and shivering ,Naitik now removes her bangle of right and left and kisses her hands to shoulder slowly making akshara take deep breath with every touch of naitik .

Akshara hugs Naitik tightly Naitik then lifts her and takes her to the bed .Scene blurs

Precap: Naksh hue tali……


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Posted: 13 years ago
first i dint knew u have a FF..😆😆
so this is like first part for me
coming to the part it was really good ..😃u really write good ..waiting for ur next part do write it soon 😃
Edited by bebo. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing ff...😛
akriti to bilkull apne papa pe gayi hai...sabke saamne i luv u bol diya..😆😆
nk akshi ko romane to ekdum mast tha...😍
u shld try and become the crreative for our show...sach mai hamare show ko tum jaise writer aur creatives ki bahut jaroorat hai...😉
pls continue soon...
and thanx for the pm😃

Edited by janhavi58 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnxx all sorry i cant spam and for once who are reading FF for first time then 1st page has index so you guys can read it when your free as just 2 more parts and my FF is done i'll come with new one :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome FF pree no words to tell
fabulas fantastic , i cant understood some word so tension for my self
the one word of i love u and kiss u relate is super pree how this thinks comes u r mind , seriously the word and kiss and our arkit fab,
nk gifts locket and distrub bmma nice u remember join family disturbance cute FF

This is the first one i read u r FF 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res...pree mjhe tera pura ff pdna pdega...maine ek bhi part nhi pda...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Naksh4ever-

Res...pree mjhe tera pura ff pdna pdega...maine ek bhi part nhi pda...

🤣🤣 ja parh k aa...😆

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