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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome nice update wait for next one plz send next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preksha_naksh


well i never showed hw akshi or naitik tells infact i never mentioned she is pregnant its totally diff i directly went where she is 8 months pregnant seeing the bump its suspense which i'll break in next part :)


oh!. thats gr8.pls continue soon.eagerly waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part-45

Scene continues from the conversation between naksh

Akshara: naitik aur ek reason hai aapko rokna padhega woh dadu unhe bhi toh company chahiye woh bhi kal aarahe hai na

Naitik: dadu kyun arahe hai?

Akshara: aap bul rahe hai kal varsha ki bhi godhbarai hai dono godhbariai saath mein hai

Naitik: oh mein bhool gaya lekin saath mein kaise unki pregnancy toh aapke pregnancy ke 1 week baad pata chali toh

Akshara: mere pyaari pati dev godhbarai mein weeks nahi dekthe 8 months start hone ke baad acha muhrat dekhar ki jati hai aur varsha ka ish week 8 month shuru hogaya aur kal ke baad acha muhrat godhbarai ke liye next month hai jo possible nahi ok?

Naitik : samaj gaya waise akshara humare saath sab ajeeb hua na humari shaadi ke pehli raat laadai infact pehli mulkat pe bhi ladai ki aur shaadi mein toh waise bhi mera mood nahi tha aur yeh pregnancy ki khabar suni aapko chaiye lekin'

Now flashback:

Akshara comes from wash room after changing and opens the room everything is dark and she switches on the lights and see room decorated with flowers and is happy and naitik hugs her with tears in his eyes and lifts her and make her sit on the bed and places his on on her stomach and says"aaj aapne mujhe duniya ki sabse badi khushi di hai"

Akshara: confussed and keeps her hand on naitik's hand place on her stomach and realizes what he meant

Akshara: naitik main maa bane wali hoon? I am pregnant ?

Naitik: shows the reports and tells yes and both hug

Now to the present:

Akshara: haan naitik so toh humari kahani hai alag

Naitik: acha aankein bandh kijiye jaldi se

Akshara : theek hai

Naitik : brings his laptop ,ab kholiye

Akshara: yeh aap mujhe dekha chuke jab mujhe pata chala mein pregnant hoon tab aapne kichi na? dekh chuki

Naitik : iske baad wali kahan dekhi hai?its akshara reaction while seeing the sonography he takes it without anyones knowledge

Akshara: yeh aapne kab kaise naitik?

And flashback

Akshara: naitik doctor bola rahi hai

Naitik: aap jaye mera bahut important call aya hai main aata hoon aap jayiye

Akshara : goes with sad face

Naitik: runs fast without doctors and akshara knowledge takes her pics and comes

Akshara is happy

And the doc leaves

Akshara : aapka phone itni jaldi khatam hogaya?

Naitik: khtam karna padha and touching sonography screen and tells :iske liye karna padha aap toh ishe mehsoos kar sakthi hai lekin mera kya toh ishe dekhna ka mauka mein kabhi nahi chodonga

Both simile J

Now present :

Akshara: yani woh phone call sab natak tha naitik?

Naitik: haan bilkul ,acha yeh wala dekhiye

Akshara: yeh toh pehli baar jab 5 month par baby ki moment mehsoos ki tab ki hai

Now flashback

Akshara : sitting and reading the book and naitik sitting near the window and doing office work akshara feels something moving she puts the hands and can feel and calls naitik ,jaldi aayi plzz jaldi

Naitik: comes running

Akshara: takes his and places on her stomach

Naitik: akshara yeh kya hai and sits and places his hears on her stomach ,akshara kitni ajeeb si feeling hai yeh lag raha hai ki main sapna dekh raha hoon yeh kitna pyaara ehsaas hai na akshara

Akshara : haan naitik

Now present

Naitik: aapko pata hai akshara ush din mujhe aapse bahut jalan ho rahi thi aap toh ish mehsoos kar sakthi hai lekin main

Akshara: oh god ab mujhe do do bachon ko sambhalna hoga

Naitik: do bache u mean twins? Akshara doctor ne kab kaha har baar mein apke saath aata hoon kab kahan aur aapne bataya nahi aisa kaise kar sakthi hai aap

Akshara: arre naitik meri baat toh suniye mein twins ki nahi baat kar rahi ek baby jo abhi aaya nahi aur dusra baby jo mere saath baitha hai woh aap kisi bache se kaam thodi hai

Naitik: main bacha hoon toh iska matalb yeh ki duniya ka 8th wonder ki bacha hokar shaadi hogayi aur uski biwi pregnant hai

Both laugh

Naitik: arre akshara main picture toh dekha hi nahi aapne

Akshara : kaunsi?

Naitik: yaad hai jab aap mujse naraz ho gayi jab maine aapko ice cream khilna ka vada kiya lekin mein late aaya office

Akshara : mujhe yaad hai aur mein mein khaye bina so gayi thi

Naitik: aur isiliye raat ko chup-chup kar fridge mein padi gulab jamoon kah rahi thi aap?

Yeh dikhiye uski pic

Akshara : shocked

Now flashback

After sleeping in ghusa akshara is sleeping showing her back towards naitik and she feels hungry and gets up

Akshara: inhe toh koi farak hi nahi padata aaram se sogaye mujhe toh bahut bhok lag rahi hai khana toh nahi hoga lekin mitha toh zarur hoga main jhake dekthi hoon and just when naitik feels some one moving and sees akshara going and he follows her silently

And enters kitchen and searching if anything is der and naitik is similing seeing all this

Finally akshara finds a bowl full of gulab jamun and just put one in mouth and eats as if a child is eating and Naitik captures the pictures and then comes inside

Naitik: ahem ahem'. Kya horaha

Akshara: aap yahan? Aur kya horaha hai ishe aapko kya biwi bhuki sogayi hai iski toh aapko koi tension hi nahi

Naitik: tension nahi hoti toh mein bhi bhoka nahi sota

Akshara: aapne bhi nahi kaya I am sorry and feeds him with gulaab jamun

Now present

Naksh laughing

Akshara: sach mein naitik mujhe pata hi nahi chala aapne yeh sab kab liya cheater hai aise kiski photo thodi lete hai

Naitik: waise bata doon meri paas pati naam ka license hai toh mein jitna chaoon aapko admire bhi kar saktha hoon aur photo bhi keech saktha hoon

Akshara: aapse baton mein koi nahi jeet saktha acha so jate hai kal uthna hai na .

Naitik: haan theek sambhal ke mein light off karta hoon

Akshara: naitik mein off kar sakthi hoon itna kaam toh mein kar hi sakthi pata aap log mujhe kyun kuch karne nahi dete log toh 8 months tak bhar aur gahr dono ka kaam karte hai yahan mein aur haan naitik aap yoga classes phone kijiye hum nahi ja sakthe roz walk bahana karte hai lekin kal ma shayad hi jane dengi toh kal subha phone kar dijiye plz

Naitik: ok madame ab so jaye gud nite and kisses on her forehead .

Next morning :

Akshara wakes up and see naitik sleeping like a baby and she similes and kisses him and leaves and comes with whipping her wet hairs and see naitik not der and suddenly naitik hugs her from back and he kisses her on her cheeks and says gud morning

Akshara: gud morning waise aaj kya baat itni romantic mood mein hai?

Naitik: say to baby dekha aapki mummy kya keh rahi hai main aaj romantic mood mein? Ab aap kaho ki main hamesha hi romantic mood mein hota hoon

Akshara: blushes and naitik tries to kiss her on her lips bt she pushes him bak'

Aap jake tyaar hojaye yeh lijiye kapde and send him and then puts bangles,bindi,necklace earings and all this while naitik without going for bath looks at her and when she was abt to put sindoor her hold her hand and puts the sindoor and he goes

Akshara similes and goes down

Gayatri&bhabhima : bahu aagayi ab nasta kar phir kuch der baad tyaar ho jana tab tak varsha aur sab aajayenge na

Akshara: ma aapko batana bhul gayi aaj varsha ki appointment hai toh ma ne kahan ki varsha yahan aaki he tyaar hogi

Gayatri: haan beta usme kya hai uski hi ghar chal baithe kahne ke liye

Akshara: ma kya mein bar jake baithon nastha wahi le jati hoon plz

Gayatri: ja an beta mein nasta wahi bhejwati hoon

Naitik comes asks where is akshara and for whom is gulabo taking food outside?

Gayatri: bahu bahar hai tub hi ja tera nasta mein bhejwati hoon ya gulabo tray andhar la munna ka nasta bhi de deti hoon and fills and naitik takes the tray from gulabo and goes out.

Naitik: yeh lijye madame aapka nasta

Akshara: aap kyun lekar aayi gulabo kahan hai?

Naitik: mera maan kiya ish liye

And they talk for a while and gayatri comes

Gayatri : beta tum dono yehi ho ab tak tyaar nahi hoona tum logon ko ? jao beta aur bahu sambhal ke munna le ja bahu ko

And the go

@Naksh room

Naitik in reddish blue and lil bit mixture of pink coloured kurta and pyjama

And akshara comes her lengha color is same her blouse is Pink her lehenga is reddish blue and duppta is net ka duppta with sequence work jo blue hai as she is tied is in gujrati style .

Naitik: kuch kami hai

Akshara: kya ab ishe zyda heavy jewellery mein nahi pehen sakthi plzz

Naitik: jewellery nahi?

Akshara : toh make up? Aap ko toh mera make up zyada karna nahi pasand phir?

Naitik : make up nahi ?

Akshara : phir kya?

Naitik : ek minute searches for something and takes the kajal pencil and put at back of akshara ears

Ab aapki aur baby ko nazar se bachne ke liye

Ab chaliye niche chalte hai

@naksh go down and varsha along the rajshri,kakai,dadi and shaurya comes and she freshes and wears lehenga she is wearing green and blue color combination ka lehenga

And both side side by side and godbharai rasam takes place

And rashmi makes the ceremony funfilled by dancing here it goes'''

waree jawa, waree jawa, waree jawa sau sau baree, sau sau baree waree jawa sola singar karke godee bharayee lesaiyyan saiyyan saiyyan saiyyansaiyyan se khelee bahut abb, chhotu ko khilayee lesola singar karke godee bharayee le, sola singar kare ware jawa, waree jawa, waree jawasau sau baree, sau sau baree waree jawachhotu jo aave ghar me, nani ko bulavenadi badalke unakee loree sunave nadee, masee kee Goes near shaurya and mohit :

chhotu jo aave ghar me, aave unke mama mama, ya chacha, mm chacha...chhotu jo aave ghar me, aave unake mama daton se nala pakde, hath se pajama oh teree hasee bhar bharke, ghar me chhidkave oh sola singar karke godee bharayee le sola singar karke godee bharayee lesaiyyan saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan se khelee bahut abb, chhotu ko khilayee le sola singar karke godee bharayee le, sola singar karke

And akshara and varsha are standing in the middle and all ladies around doing ghoomar

Naitik and shaurya admiring their wives

After that all ladies give blessing have snacks and leave after guests leave even maheswari's leave and akshara was about go when naitik asks gayatri

Naitik: kya mein akshara ko walk pe le ja saktha hoon agr who taki na ho toh?

Gayatri: haan beta agar bahu taki na ho toh theek hai le ja

Naitik: thank u ma and akshara is confussed bt says yes

@naksh room

Akshara: naitik walk achanak?

Naitik: walk nahi yoga classes aapka suit le lijiye aur chaliye

Akshara: yoga???/ lekin maine toh

Naitik: aapne mana kiya lekin unhone kahan ki aaj imp exercise hai baby ke liye acha hai aur mama ke liye bhi jab dono ka sawal hai phir mein mana nahi kar saktha

@they leave go for yoga class and come home by 7

And daily they follow the routine and akshara has now completed 9 months

@night in Naksh room

Akshara comes and finds naitik sitting and thinking

actually naitik is quiet tensed and excited he is excited that he is going to welcome a new life and tensed that will this create farness between him and akshara

Akshara: kya soch rahe hai?

Naitik: kuch bhi toh nahi bas ab bas kuch din aur and yeh hamare saath hoga

Akshara: ishiliye aap pareshan hai?

Naitik: pareshan kya aap bhi akshara aisa kuch nahi hai

Akshara: mujse chupa rahe hai aapki khamoshi padh sakthi hoon toh chera dekhar yeh toh jaan sakthi hoon aap kyun aise hai aur dekha jaye toh aapka aisa feel karna normal lekin hum auraton ka aisa nahi kyunki hum jante hai life har padhav mein hum U-turn lene padthe hai aapko pata hai naitik shaadi se pehle kuch bhi karne se pehle main kiski bare mein nahi sochti thi ki yeh kya sochenge woh kya sochenge lekin shaadi ke baad kuch bhi karne se pehle sabke bare mein sochna padtha hai

Naitik: akshara aapko tension nahi hui?

Akshara : nahi naitik thoda darr tha lekin mein janti thi ki mujhe ab se har rishte ko balance karna hai ek bahu aur beti ka rishta , ek patni aur bahu ka rishta aur ab patni aur maa aur yeh sab tabhi possible hai jab aapka saath mere saath rehga

Naitik: main aapke saath hamesha rahonga bas darr gaya ki jab yeh aayega toh sari attention toh ishi hi milege

Akshara: woh toh hai lekin aap peche rahenge aap toh kisi bhi bahne se attention aapne aur kich hi lenge yeh mein janti

Naitik: acha woh kaise?

Akshara: kaise? Hmmm akshara mere socks,akshara mera wallet , akshara mera charger arre, sabse imp button thodna usme toh aap mahir hai

Both laugh and sleep

@next day

@living room all talking abt finding groom for rashmi and dadajee tells to wait till the new member comes just then phone rings and they come to know that Buaji is very ill and no one is there to take care of her and dadajee and Rajbana are leaving and akshara suggests Bhabhma & gayatri to leave as they wud be needed there bt they refuse bt akshara insists them to go and take rashmi too she wud be helpful in doing small things and after insisting so much Bhabima and gayatri agree and all leave .

Its one week since they left and everything is going smooth

In living room

Naitik: akshara abhi urgent call aaya mujhe meeting ke liye jana hoga aap apna khayal rakhiyega

Akshara: haan theek hai naitik

In evening

Akshara in kitchen

Akshara: maharaji mein chai banao plzz kamare mein aisi hi baithe baithe bore horahi hoon plzz

Maharaji: theek hai bahurani and he comes out finds naitik coming from the room

Arre munna tum kab aaye

Naitik: abhi aaya akshara kahan hai?

Maharaji: bahurani rasoi mein chai bana rahi hai

Naitik: theek hai

In kitchen

Akshara: arre naitik aap kab aaye acha hua mein abhi chai bane ne hi wali thi aap ke liye bhi bana deti hoon janti hoon aap ko bhi maan kar rahe hoga

Naitik: misss'.. nahi bahut miss kar raha tha and takes her hand and plantes a kiss

And they drink tea in the kitchen only

@they go in the room

And see few things regarding baby like how much shud u carry the baby how to feed the timings and what diet mother should follow after post pregnancy and all and then have dinner they both eat in same plate and feed each other

Next morning akshara is feeling bechan bt doesnt tell as naitik had an important meeting as clients where coming from foreign

Naitik: akshara aap theek toh hai ? nahi aaj yoga class mein bhi kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha mujhe ab uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi

Akshara: nahi main theek hoon naitik woh mujhe needh arahi thi ishiliye ab meri fikar chodiye aur jaye all the best

Naitik: aise all the best kehthe hai?

Akshara : oh sorry & hugs him and kisses on his cheeks

And naitik leaves he forgets some samples in hurry

After sometime akshara goes down and maharaj is leaving to get things from market but akshara forgets to tell to get fruits for her she wanted different fruits she was bored of eating same fruits so she sends gulabo after sometime akshara in the room was cleaning finds the samples and suddenly get pain unbearable pain she picks up the phone and tries calling naitik bt refrains thinking he'll be busy she is tears as she is not able to bear the pain and some how comes down and naitik calls and she pics up trying to hide bt she shouts loudly

Akshara: naitik mujhe bahut dard ho raha gahr mein koi nahi maharaj aur gulabo market gaye hai ahh'.

@office

Naitik: akshara akshara'. He appolizes and says its an emergency he has to leave its really urgent and more important that this deal and leaves and the manager informs the client that naitik gonna become father and clients understand and leave

Naitik rushes to the house and finds akshara is literally into tears and face is become pale he calls the driver and tells him to take the car akshara is unable to walk and he carries her in his arm and take her into the car and hold her

Naitik: akshara hum pooch rahe plzz calm down

Akshara: naitik mujhse nahi horah ouch!!1 ahh''''.!!!!

Naitik: bas thodi der aur akshara plzzz

And they reach and doctor take her to the room and she is shouting

Outside naitik is getting nervous hearing akshara screams and maharaji calls in tension and naitik says he is in hospital and der her hears babies cry and has tears of joy

Doctor brings the baby to Naitik

Doctor: congratulation aapko beti hui hai hai aur Maa aue bhi theek hai aur aapka intezaar kar rahi hai unhe nahi pata ki unhe beti hui hai gives the baby in



Naitik's hand he kisses the baby

Naitik : speechless he is waiting outside as they have taken baby for check up and then gives to naitik and he goes inside

Akshara with tears of joy in her eyes waiting to see the baby

Naitik: akshara hamari beti

Akshara: beti and naitik gives the baby in akshara's hand she kisses the baby

Naitik: kisses akshara says akshara hamari pyaar ki nishaani sach akshara ishe haat mein lekar sab daar tension bhul gaya .

Precap: Naming cermony


Edited by preksha_naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update preksha .last part when nk take his princess in his hand n his feeling so nice. its very nice waiting for next update naming ceremony.
Edited by sush00naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pree..
itne long update woww pree...👏
nice part i liked it alot😃 i way u wrote by making them to remember was soo nice😊 nd naksh baby gal ur soo cute pree😃
cont soon waiting for next part 😊 thanks for pm😛
tc...

Edited by Rachana_naksh_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part pree... its really cute... akshara eating gulab jamoon part is very very cute... loved it... n last the baby is also very cute... I thnk its ur pic... awesome part... could see evrything... n nice precap too... update soon...😃
Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
pre.. pre.. pre..🤗 masst part hai yar!
loved it to the core!
and you are very cute.. sach mein!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight08

pre.. pre.. pre..🤗 masst part hai yar!

loved it to the core!
and you are very cute.. sach mein!😃


aww thnxxx 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part naksh have a baby girl
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow pree,beautiful part.ek hi part mein ithna sabkuch..gud gng.nd d baby is girl.u know i 22 want a baby girl 4 naksh.w8ing 4 nxt part

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