FF MohIni's Eternal Love Story...Day 6 Updated!!! - Page 3

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hey very cute update
cont. soon
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Originally posted by: naitikakshara

hey very cute update

cont. soon




thank you sooo muchhhhh 😊😊😊....i will soon write sooon
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wow
sooo cute
loved it
continue it
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Day 4

Mohit: hmmm bahut ajeeb baat hai aaj ye log ko mera birthday bhi yaad nahi haii😔 khair chalo main nikaltaa hu Naitik wahan adde pe mera intezaar kar raha hogaa.....ab to adde pe hi birthday manayengee😕

At Singhania house Nandini is busy with decorating when rashmi comes

Rashmi: Didi cake kon laa raha haii?
Nandini: areyyy main to cake ka bhul hi gayi thi mujhe laga Naitik ko bol dungi laane ko par vo to Mohit ko laane nikal gaya haii ab kyaa kareee...
Akshara: Ek kaam karte haii main aur rashmi jaa ke vo cake le ke aate hai
Rashmi: par cake banane mein waqt lag jayegaaa
Nandini: arey uski chinta mat karo cake ka order maine de diyaa thaa bas tum log jaa ke le aao jaldi se ye log ke aane se phele.
Rashmi: theek hai hum jaa ke le kar aate hai.

Rashmi and Akshara leave to get the cake meanwhile nandini is packing the gift she bought for mohit hoping that he likes it.. she also attaches a beautiful poem written by her on their friendship for him😊 meanwhile Naitik is waiting for Mohit at the cafe--their adda

Naitik: ye gadha abhi tak aaya kyon nahii.....shayad naraz ho gaya hoga ki usko maine wish nahi kiya isiliye...par use kyaa malum uske liyee aachi surprise wait kar rahi haiii😃
Mohit: sorry sorry thoda late ho gaya.....
Naitik: kahan laga di itni der
Mohit: arey bas aise hi thodi der ho gayii....chal naa kuch khate hai mujhe to badi bhukh lagi hai
Naitik: haan kyaa khayega bol
Mohit: cake mangvate haii😃😃 waise aaj to cake khani hi chaiyeee
Naitik: kyonnn aaj aisaa kyaa haii...aur waise bhi dekh tu kitnaa mota ho raha haiii cake cancel tu kuch aur mangva le

Nandini calls Naitik and tells him to bring Mohit now as everythign is ready

Naitik: chal yaar baad mein khayenge maa ka phone tha wo ghar pe bula rahi haii abhii...aur tujhe bhi bulaya hai
Mohit: lekin kyon...sab theek hai naa
Naitik: pata nahi yaar...kuch bataya nahi bas kaha ki jahan kahin bhi ho ghar jaldi aa jao...pareshan lag rahi thi
Mohit: chal chalte hai.

Meanwhile Akshara and Rashimi comes back with cake....and it was a chocolate cake (Mohit's favorite).

Rashmi: ye log kab aa rahe haii...cake itni tasty lag rahi hai mujhsee to raha bhi nahi ja raha haii.😆😆

Mohit and Naitik arrives and Every one gives Mohit a big surpriseeeee....... by wishing him Happy Birthday together as he enters.
Mohit gets really happy seeing all that

Mohit: mujhe to laga aap sab bhul hi gaye haii.
Naitik: tera birthday hum kabhi bhi bhul sakte hai kyaa 😊
Rashmi: aur kyaaa waiseee ye sara surprise dene ka plan Nandini didi ka hi thaa....saari decorations sab unhone hi kii haii
Mohit: hmm aur mujhe yahan laga ki sweetheart bhi mera birthday bhul gayii haii....thank you sach mein mujhe aap logo ne bahu aachii surprise de di...
Rashmi: haan haan bas ab baatein baad mein...phele cake to kaato.

Mohit cuts the cake...and says arey wahhhh ye to meri favorite cakeee haiiiiii

Akshara: ye bhi Nandini didi ne hi order ki thi tumhare liyee...
Mohit: thank you sweetheart😃
Nandini: thank you kyon maine to aapne aache dost ke liye hi kiya hai ye sab.
Bhabhi Ma: areyyy chaloo sab log khana lag gaya haii...khane aajao...aur Mohit aaj maine tumhari pasad ka chane ka halva bhi banaya hai ...tumhe bahut pasand haii naa
Mohit: chane ka halva wowww..thanks bhabhi maa...

Every one goes insidee to have dinner...even Mohit is going when Nandini stops him and gives him the gift she had brought for him..Mohit opens the gift

Mohit: arey wow ...ye watch to mujhe bahut pasand haii...main soch hi raha tha ise khareedne ki....sach meinn thank you sweetheart
Nandini: maine tumhe us din dekh liya thaa ki tum is ghadi ko bahut dekh rahe thee....aur laga ki tumhe pasand hai vo to maine tumhare liye le li......shukar hai tumhe ye tofha pasand aaya.
Mohit: pasand...arey ye to meri sabse favorite watch haiii main to ise abhi se pehen leta hu...thank you saab cheeze ke liyee..aaj ka din mujhe sach emin yaad rahegaa...thanks sweetheart.

They both then join everyone for dinner and mohit shows the watch that Nandini gave to him to Naitik and everyone else.....everyone liked it a lot as well 😊

Mohit: Naitik sweetheart ne to mujhe gift de diyaa...tu kab de raha hai mera gift.
Naitik: Nandini didi ne diya maine diya...sab ek hi haii naaa😉
Mohit: chal kanjoos kahin ka....main tujhe chorne wala nahi hu haan mujhe mera gift chaiyee
Naitik: theek hai theek haii...tu khaa ke deta hu tujhe teri gift.😃

Naitik then gives Mohit a nice new camera ..as a gift and mohit uses it first by clicking Nandini's pic as she organized the whole party for him and then clicks pics with every one in the family.😊

To be continued....thatzz it for today!!!!

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gr888 update...........👏
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Day 5


After such a wonderful day....Mohit thanks Nandini, Naitik and everyone else for making his day very special. Mohit is at his homee checkin out his gifts that Naitik and Nandini gave him. He then notices a poem that Nandini had written on friendship specially dedicated to him. And he loves the poem very much and he decides to thank Nandini for such sweet gesture by getting her a wonderful gift..but he gets confused fr what he should give her. He then calls up Naitik.

Naitik: haan mohit bol?
Mohit: yaar aaj sweetheart ne mere liye itnaa aacha surprise plan kiya thaa sooo mujhe lagta hai main unko thanks khene ke liye ek aacha sa gift du. par samajh nahi aa raha ki kyaa doon. tu kya kal mere saath aayegaa market. meri thdi madad bhi ho jayegi.
Naitik: hmmm theek hai kal milte hai😊

Mohit tries to go off to sleep but is unable to sleep...he starts watching the pics he took with the digital camera that naitik gave him. he was just koling at Nandini's pics and he gets smile on his face
Mohit: thanks sweetheart aaj ka din bahut hi khas tha mere liye😊
He then thinks of the time that he spent with Nandini and all those great memories.
Mohit: ye mujhe ho kya raha hai...main kyon sweetheart ke baare mein itna soch raha hoon. khair ab mujhe so jana chaiye

Next morning Mohit goes to Singhania house....Mohit and Naitik were about to leave

Nandini: Kahan jaa rahe ho tum dono
Mohit tells Naitik not to tell Nandini anythign by ishara
Naitik: vo didi bas aisee hi hamare purane adde jaa rahe hai bahut din se gaye nahii
Nandini: par Naitik bhul gaye kyaa aaj hamara movie dekhne jaane ka plan thaa
Naitik: didi sham ko chalte hai naa aur aaj bahar kha ke ghar lautengee.
Nandini: theek hai jaldi aajana...hum tumhara intezaar karenge..
Mohit: haan haan jaldi aa jayenge ab aap jaane dengi to hum aayenge wapis😆😆😆

They both reach at mall

Mohit: yaar Naitik tujhe khud ko nahi pataa ki sweetheart ko kya pasand aayegaa... tu kuch kaam ka nahiii haiii
Naitik: arey kuch bhi le le itni saari aachi aachii cheeze haii ...mujhe nahi pata didi ko kya pasand aayegaa
Mohit: nahi kuch bhi nahiii mujhe sabse alag cheez leni hai jo unhe pasand bhi aaye.
Naitik: waisee surprisee mein mainee bhi kaafi mehnat ki thi....mera gift kahan haiii
Mohit: tujhe kyon...tunee kyaa kiyaa hai saara inteezam to sweetheart ne kiyaa to to sirf mujhe ghar le aayaa.
Naitik: haan haan theek haiii dekhta hu tujhe meri birthday aane de...sab vasool karungaa😛

while selecting Naitik feels that may be Mohit likes Nandini..but to which Mohit is not aware of...😊 he thinks he will find out of mohit's feelings 😎
Mohit then selects a wonderful pen and writing pad...personalized for Nandini since she loves writing...and also a beautiful bracelet😊

Mohit and Nandini reach at Singhania house where Nandini, Rashmi and Akshara are waiting for them.

Rashmi: aa gaye aap log ab chalee....dada ab jaldi se tayaar ho je aa jaoo...varna hum phir late ho jayengeeee
Nandini: itni der kyon lagadi tum logo neee....
Naitik: ye sab Mohit ki galati haiii....didi ke liye gift lene gaye to gift select karne mein hi itni der laga di ki pucho mat...khair ab main jaata hu tayaar hone phir hum log nikalte hai.
Nandini: mere liye giftt??😃☺️ par kyon??
Mohit: ab aapne mere liyee kal jo kiyaa soo maine sochaa ki thanks to bahut chota lagegaa....hala ki ye gift bhi kam hogii par ye aapke liyeee
He then gives her the gift he got..says i hope aapko pasand aaye...😊
Nandini opens the gifts and gets very happy
Nandini: wow Mohit...ye to bahut hi sundar hai....mujhe ye bracelet bahut pasand aayaa... aur ye pen aur paper pad bhi ab se main sab ismein hi likhungii....thank you soo much.
Nandini then wears the bracelet and Naitik comes back
Naitik: kaisi lagiii didi gifts...
Nandini: sach mein bahuit aachii haiii
Mohit: haan kyon nahi hogi aakhi meri choice ki jo haiii😎...ye Naitik to kisi kaam ka nahi thaa huh!!!😆😆😆

Rashmi: aacha chaloo ab hum chalee....varna movie miss ho jayegiii
Naitik: haan chaloo...Mohit tu chal raha haii naa
Mohit: nahi yaar main ab chalta hu ghar jaata hu.
Naitik: chalna yaar maza aayega sab saath mein
Rashmi & Akshara: haan chaloo sab saath itne din baad kahin ghumne jaa rahe hai aur aap nahi aa rahe.
Mohit: main aata lekin....kuch kaam bhi hai😕
Nandini: kaisaa kaam hai....tum chal rahe ho hamare saath...aur koi bahane nahi chalengee.
Mohit: hmm theek hai chalooo ab aap log itna keh hi rahe ho to...kaam kal kar lungaa😃
Naitik: kyaa baat haii didi ne kaha to tu fatafat maan gayaa😆😆😆
Mohit hesitates a bit and says nahii yaar aisi koi baat nahii haii.
Naitik: arey main to mazak kar raha thaa chal ab varna late ho jayenge hum.
They all then go for movie...and then dinner😊😊

To be continued.......enjoyy!!!


Edited by rising_starr - 15 years ago
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wt a thot.......................👏👏
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hahaha tune padh bhi liye i just posted 😃😃😃....thanks by the wayyyyy
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Day 6


After watching the movie all of them decide to go out for dinner...

Naitik: aaj chao vo nayi chinese resturant khuli hai wahan chalte hai suna hai wahan ka khana bahut aacha hai
Akshara: wow mujhe to chinese bahut pasand hai😃😃
Mohit: kyaa baat haiii sweetheart ka bhi favorite hai chinese..hai naa sweetheart?
Rashmi: wow didi aaj to aapki lottery lag gayii phele gifts aur ab favorite khana😊😊

Nandini looks at Mohit and smiles secretly.....Akshara notices that

During the dinner every one is having fun talking and they return back home....

Mohit: chalo ab main chalta hoon kal milte hai...good night
Naitik: arey Mohit tu kal kyaa kar raha hai?
Mohit: pata nahi kyon kal to sunday hai so shayad ghar pe hi hoon
Naitik: to chal kal adde pe chalte haii bahut din ho gaye gaye nahi...
Rashmi: arey dada aaj to aap log gaye the...
Naitik: kahan aaj nahi jaa payee...isne didi ke liye gift lene mein hi itna time laga diyaa ki kyaa bataun
Mohit: hota hai na yaar...ab mujhee pata nahi thaa sweetheart ko kyaa pasand aata too..tu bhi to koi kaaam ka nahi thaa...tune meri bilkul bhi help nahi ki
Nandini: koi baat nahi Mohit tum jo bhi laye ho mere liye mujeh bahut pasand aata aur kuch aur bhi laate mujhe yakeen hai bahut pasand aata...aakhir feelings zyada maayne rakhti hai😊😊
Mohit: thanks sweetheart😃😃😃....aacha chalo main chalta hoon kal milte hai Naitik..adde pe haan
Naitik: arey nahi ghar aajana saath chalengeee
Mohit: theek hai

Everyone leaves for their rooom..off to sleep

Naitik and Akshara in their room getting ready to go to bed

Naitik: Akshara mujhe lagta haii Mohit Nandini didi se pyaar karta hai
Akshara: kyaa aapko yakeen hai Naitik..shayad aapki galat faimi bhi ho sakti hai
Naitik: nahii jis tarah se Mohit didi ko dekhtaa hai aur unke liye mein bahut sochta bhi hai..
Akshara: haan ho sakta haii par vo aapko zaroor batate naa agar unke dil mein didi ke liye yaar hota to
Naitik: arey shayad use khud ko nahi malum hai ki vo didi se pyaar karta haii...varna vo mujhe batata zaroor...aur vo jis tarah see behave karta hai mujhe yakeen hai ki vo didi se pyaar karta hai😊
Akshara: chalo maan liyaa ki vo didi se pyaar karte hai par kyaa didi bhi unse pyaar karti haii ye kaise keh sakte haii...waissee maine notice kiya to hai ki jab Mohit aas aas hota hti to didi bahut khush hoti haiii par zaroori nahi ki vo pyaar hi ho
Naitik: Ek kaam karte haii...mainn Mohit se pata karne ki koshish karta hu aur aap Nandini didi se pata kijiyee...dekhte hai agar dono ek dusre ke liye kuch feel karte hai ki nahi.
Akshara: Theek hai...par Naitik ye bhi ho sakta hai ki unko pata hi naa ho ki vo ek dusre se pyaar karte hai.
Naitik: haan ho sakta hai...phir uske baare emin hum kuch karengee....lekin hamari taraf se to hum yakeen kar le ki vo ekdusre ko pasand karte hai.
Akshara: haan theek hai kal hi main didi se Mohit ko leke koi baat nikalti hoon dekhti hoon vo kaise react karti hai
Naitik: haan aur main Mohit se baat karta hoon...isiliye maine use kal idde pe jaane ke liye bola hai taaki aache se baat ho paaye hamari😊😊

Other side Nandini is thinking about Mohit that how he cares for her and admiring gifts he gave too her. Specially the bracelet...and says "Mohit tum mujhe bahut aache se samajhte ho....aur main bahut lucky hoon jo mujhe tumhare jaisa dost mila"😊😊


Thats it fot today...to be continued....sorry was just busy these days sooo will update other part soonnn 😃😃 Enjoy!!!


Edited by rising_starr - 15 years ago

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