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Divya

@_Divya_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

as usual a very very very very very beautiful oneshot by you......👏 👏 👏 👏

plz update soon....😊 😊

all d best 4 ur exams..😃

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ankita

@ankita2407

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

👏nasco your oneshot was mindblowing

eagerly waiting for the next part

continue the good work soon

Edited by joysorrow - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

heyyyy Shwetha...
that was an awesum post...
I loved it dear...
plsssss cont. soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

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ekta

@skfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

awesum as ususal....kaafi tym baad ur oneshot...luv d it yaar...best of luck 4 ur xams ....dnt wry u will rokk....merry christmas 2...

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Archana

@.Sunshine.

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

hey shwetha....

im extremely srry 4 commentin dis late.....i read d ff bt due 2 sum probs i cldnt comment on it..

btw d oneshot was FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

totallllllllllly luved it....it was very very nice 2 c ure update after a very very long tym yar...

do post the next part sooooooooooooooon

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

so here goes part 2. sorrry for the delay.
hope u like it

akshara was still worried but she went to help gayatri mom and bhabhimaa in the kitchen and she forgot about everything.naitik reached bangalore he checked into a hotel got fresh and called up his client and left for the meeting place in a cab.
he called akshara on the way to inform her that he had reached bangalore.he hanged up as he reached the place.after informing her that he'll be back home by tomorrow morning!
akshara was releived that he had reached safely. and she went on with her work.

naitik discussed over the project with the client and he assured them good quality service and the clients were impressed by the desings and the deal was finalised.
naitik called up akshara and informed her that he'l be coming by train and will be reaching home at around 11 in the morning.
akshara asked him to be careful and don't take any eatables from fellow travellers .naitik smiled haring this.and he said he knew al this and she din't have to worry this much.
akshara informed naitik's family that naitik will be back by 11 in the morning.they all were happy .they had dinner and went to sleep.

naitik got into the train and found a lace near the window.he kept his things safely and sat down.
he breathed a sigh of relief when he felt the cool breeze .what a day that was!! really hectic and he really felt tired and dozed off soon.

he was woken up by some noise.he lazily forced his eyes open and blinked his eyelids till his eyes got adjusted with the darkness.he reached for his pocket and sorted out his mobile.he checked the time on it.it was 1.30 and he sat up on his berth.he opened the window making sure that no noise was heard .
the train was leaving a station and he understood that his station was just 1 stop away.he got ready picking up his things and making sure that he hadn't left anything behind.
he waited for the next station and went near te door and stood there waiting for the train to halt.
he got down at the station.it was full of life even at this time.
he walked out of the station with his luggage!! he searched for a cab but culdn't find one and then h saw a cab leaving with just 1 man in it. he called out to the driver and the car abruptly halted.he requested them to drop him to his place.the cab driver agreed to do so if he paid more.naitik had no option left and so he agreed.
he sat in the car and he looked at the other passenger.he was already asleep and naitik too dosed off soon
the car was speeding along the highway and the traffic was really less.the car halted to take one more man in.
the car turned to a pocket road and due to the driver's horror he saw a truck speeding towards them.he tried to turn the car but lost control.naitik quickly opened his door and jumped out with his bag.
he lost his mobile .his head hit something and he felt sheer pain pass through his head.he felt his hand hitting hard on soemthing. he somehow managed to get up he walked to the highway with much difficulty.his head was paining like hell.he saw a car coming by and waved to it.he could see the car aproaching and before he culd explain fell unconscious.
he woke up few hours later and he realised he was lying in a hospital.he saw a stranger standing next to him.he realised the man as the person who had brought him to the hospital.he thanked him and the other man offered to leave naitik on the highway.
the doctor came in to check up on naitik and he asked naitik to stay for a few more hours cause he had to make sure evrything was fine.naitik thanked the starnger and h left cause he culdn't saty on for soo long!!
naitik soon feel asleep maybe due tot the sedation of the medicines.
akshara was really worried as naitik hadn't reached home yet.she tried calling him on is mobile but noone picked it up.dadaji and rajshekar came back hoping naitik to be home.akshara was really woried and she hadn't eaten anything since morning.
rajshekar tried calling naitik and some one picked up the phone and informed him about the accident .he was realy shocked to hear that.the man also told him that the passengers had died on the spot.
rajshekar ended the call and looked at dadaji all got worried .
dadi asked him to speak u and he said told them about naitik's accident .akshara felt like a lightning bolt passed though her.tears rolled down her cheeks.she felt like the world around her was revolving.she stood there shocked and fell unconscious on the floor.everyone rushed to her.

naitik woke up in the hospital bed he was shocked to see the tie it was 4 clock.he paid the money and left the hospital

akshara opened her eyes slightly.she was still feeling giddy.she called naitik's name.she saw bhabmaa,gayatri,nandini,reshmi,rajshri and varsha by her.she looked up at them and all of them found it hard to hide their tears.
she screamed"nahein"naitik abhi zinda hain.!!!! gayatri came to her and hugged her.akshara cried like a fanatic.she cried her heart out.
naitik tok a a cab and reached his house.he was still tired and his ehad wa spining like anything.he walked to his houe and saw the front portin lined up with cars.he got a shock and he went inside everyone were inside the house.
akshara felt like she could feel naitik's presence. she got out of the bed.rajshri and gayatri tried to make her sit back.she ran down the stairs yelling naitik... naitik...the others rushed behind her
shaurya and vishamabhar tried to hold her back but she wuldn't budge. bauji ..dadu. mujhe jane dijiye. naitik.. naiti wooh zinda hain.
she ran to the door and just ten naitik eneterd the house.she rushed to him and hugged him.he hugged her back.all theothers were shocked but they were happy that happiness was back in naitik's and akshara's life.akshara rested her head on his chest and she fell unconscious.naitik took her in his arms and got her upstairs(his hand was bandaged but now akshara was more important to him , he din't feel any pain when akshara was with him).he told the other of the happenings while the doctor checked upon akshara.
the doctor informed them hat akshara was allright and she fainted cause she hadn't had any food since the morning!!

please press the like button.😳
good news guys!!
one more part coming up!!!!
full of romance promised!!!

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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Bhavya

@VivaciousBhavya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: nasco

so here goes part 2. sorrry for the delay.
hope u like it

akshara was still worried but she went to help gayatri mom and bhabhimaa in the kitchen and she forgot about everything.naitik reached the mumbai he checked into a hotel got fresh and called up his client and left for the meeting place in a cab.
he called akshara on the way to inform her that he had reached bangalore.he hanged up as he reached the place.after informing her that he'll be back home by tomorrow morning!
akshara was releived that he had reached safely. and she went on with her work.

hey i didnt understood that if naitik reached mumbai then y he told akshara that he had reached bangalore.

btw very nice update

very well written

do cont. soon

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Archana

@.Sunshine.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

hey shwetha di.....

a very very emotional part....

srsly luved it.....

rllllly lyked hw aks cld feel his presence yar........

cont sooooooooon

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

wow i jus read part 1 and 2 now and i realy like it continue soon hope everything turns out alright

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musenartist

@musenartist

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Sethu, a good emotional part..................But a doubt here.........I mean u said that Naitik's hand was fractured 2...........then how come he lifted Akshara??No questions in a story, but still..........Anyways, I loved Akshara;s emotional attachment with Naitik, very very very nice..............continue soon................... 👍🏼

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