Love Story : Naksh FF! part 3 updated. p6 (12/22)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HI guys! This is my frst piece of an FF. I hope you like it! =)
Part 1:
I broke up with you?!? Were these the only words he could exclaim tO Akshara after having a relationship with her for so long. Akshara and Sushant were well-known in their college for their smooth boyfriend and girlfriend relationship of 2 years but today he says he wants to break up with her. A girl after accompilishing a nice relationship with a boy would obviously like to hear those 3 MAGICAL WORDS but what sushant said to her was the breakup word. She was definetely broken.
She couldnt take out a single word from her mouth and ran way leaving sushant un-answered.
Akshara the next day woke up with a headahe.😭.
Akshara told about this to her mother(Rajeshri) because she was very close to her n knew about sushant. She knew her daughter was serious about him. Her mom was well-known for her great advices. She adviced akshara to be brave and forget about him and just ignore him and to not show him her inner-feelings of how broken she was from inside. Akshra understood it and took her first step when sushant called to ask akshara for her answer. She shouted at him saying "Just shut up you jerk. All those 2 years, you played with me ?!? Go away from my life , I hate the very sight of you", n shut the phone. She acted relly brave in front of him but after this she re-called the past memories with him and cried again.
" Akshara darling, come for lunch!" , called rajeshri form the kitchen.
Akshara went down when her mom noticed her eyes, all red. She thought that maybe she really cannot get up to the truth and needs to take her mind of this.
Akshara loved taking part in her college programs n asked her to be a part of various clubs. Akshara never rejects her mom's request so she accepted to be a part of a community.
She signed up for a......
So how was it guys? I know it doesnt have the entry of naitik but the next part will be naksh and will be a bit long too(naitik akshara doesnt know each other yet). I think you might have guessed how will akshara meet naitik?!right??
But guys, for this ff to be continued i need appreciation n complaints both!
Cheers!*
Aminah! =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good!very good attempt....make it a l'll longer the next time if possible, dear!But otherwise, it was really good!
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very nice.....idea is totally different....I like it....onli 1 suggestion dear dat is write longer updates......other than tht I rllly liked it........waitin 4 d next part....n ya I wld b happy if u cld pm me wen u update.....

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nice attempt...waiting for next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice...continue soon..and write long for next update ..
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really good yaar!!
im sorry its ben long since i updated my f.
my BOARDS r coming up!!
sorry!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasco

im sorry its ben long since i updated my f.<br>my BOARDS r coming up!!<br>sorry!!<br><br>


its ok..all the best for ur boards..wen is ur board exam starting..
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wow a very nice start..keep uit up...plz continue soon...we all wil b waitin..
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yaa guys i know it was short but the next part is written on a piece of paper n is long so dont worry next time treat! :)
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very nice part plz upload soon...

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