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Posted: 15 years ago
A POEM FROM MY SIDE FOR NAKSH
IN SWITZERLAND..................FF
The snow, so peaceful and serene,
caressed by the soft moonlight,
gave magical feelings to the night.

The soft blue glow,
the lovers' words that then did flow,
their lips closer and closer
until, locked in the throes
of a passionate embrace,
he decided to express his feelings,
to keep her safe.

He whispered softly,
his words like music to her ears,
"I Love You,"
and her response the same,
heard like the gentle breeze,
"And I, love you, forever."

That was the night they promised
to be together through everything,
each to care for the other when old and gray.
A lovers' pact
the most likely to last.
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb renu....it was very very good...............waitin for d next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi renu
aap next part kab post kar rahi hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
very good renu
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update next part
verysoon
i am waiting for it

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: usmani_girlzz

Very very gud story line buhut achay hayn dialogues wt a creativity👏

Thank you! WHICH PARTS DID YOU LIKE BEST?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN

very good renu
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update next part
verysoon
i am waiting for it

iT IS COMPULSORY TO TELL ME WHICH SCENES DIALOGUES YOU LIKE FROM EACH SCENE
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 7

NAKSH HM DAY 4❤️❤️

Another beautiful morning in Zurich promises to bring in more romance in the lives of the newly-weds. Naitik stirs in his sleep and reaches out for Akshara, but she is not there on the bed. He springs out of the bed and calls out her name worriedly, but she is also not there in the sitting room……he gets very worried, when he suddenly hears the running shower……and gives a relieved smile…..

After a while, Akshara emerges from the bathroom, fresh like a daisy, with her hair still damp, carrying her previous day's salwar kameez in her hands. Their eyes lock and Akshara keeps her clothes on the dining chair and rushes to embrace Naitik…..❤️

A Naitik……I love you….I love you so much…..(she tightly hugs him and gets emotional….)❤️

N-(He returns her hug….and is quite pleasantly surprised…)Arre, arre, kya hua Akshara? Lagta hai aapki tabiyat kuchch jyaada hi theek ho gayi hai……

A-(she ignores his teasing….)Naitik, mujhe nahin pata tha, ki bimaar hona bhi itna romantic ho sakta hai. Romantic hona to koi aap se seekhe!

N-to aapne kya kya seekha hai ab tak mujhse?

A-OK. Sabse pehle toh, aap woh kal wale gift ke10 le lijiye.(And she showers his face with kisses….)❤️

N-Aur woh interest?........woh bhi to aapko dena hoga…..

A-Chaliye, bataiye, kitna interest hua aapka?

N-Well, principal tha10…..24 hrs ka interest hota hai 24…….total 34 hote hain….❤️❤️

A-Kyaaaaaaaaaaa?......Aap kya rate of interest laga rahe hain Mr. Naitik Singhania?....Dekhiye aap cheating mat kariye…..❤️

N-Arre, ek ghante ka ek hi to calculate kiya hai….woh bhi simple interest se….kahiye to compound interest calculate karoon?........

A-Nahin, nahin baba, simple interest hi theek hai……(They both laugh….and…..hug…..and….kiss….when finally Naitik, draws back and says….)❤️

N-Akshara, I am so relieved, ab aapki tabiyat theek hai…lekin ab aap na…..mere saath jabardasti karne ki koshish mat kijiye….nahin to tired ho jayengi……(….It takes Akshara a moment to understand what he means…and her face turns crimson red….and Naitik laughingly runs away from her, knowing she is going to punch him….she runs after him into the bedroom….yeh rishta music in the background….Akshara chasing Naitik…and Naitik again engulfs her in his arms…..)❤️

N-(in a gentle, loving tone)Jokes apart, Akshara, aaj aap theek hain, lekin….I want to take it a bit easy, aaj bhi….OK?(He looks into her eyes meaningfully) Hum aaj cable ride ke liye chalte hain,Zurich ke views from the cable car are awesome, aur aapke liye jyaada tiring bhi nahi hoga, ok?❤️

A-(Nods and smiles…)Theek hai, ab aap bhi ready ho jaiye….aur please, pehle mere kapde bahar chair par rakhe hain, mujhe la dijiye na, main hamari suitcase thodi theek kar leti hoon, tab tak aap ready ho jaiye….…(and she opens up their suitcase…..)

N-OK Madam, anything for you……❤️

Naitik goes into the sitting room, picks up Akshara's clothes from the chair, and just then room service brings their morning tea for them. He opens the door, and casually places the clothes over his shoulders to collect the tray from the waiter.

Just then, the door opposite to their room opens…. Dr. Khanna is picking up the morning paper, when he sees……….Naitik…..standing with the tea tray in his hands….with Akshara's previous day's clothes draped over his left and right shoulders………Dr. Khanna's jaw drops open…..he shakes his head disgustedly….muttering under his breath……..

……Just then, they both hear Akshara's impatient voice calling out to Naitik from the bedroom-"Naitik, please, mujhe mere kapde dijiye na…..main kab se apne kapdon ke liye wait kar rahi hoon…. Naitik….."

…and……Dr. Khanna…….is on the verge of exploding…….if looks could kill, Naitik would have….been….gone…in an instant….at that very spot…..at the door of his honeymoon suite………..❤️

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Posted: 15 years ago
haha man!!!
d upd8's starting was verrrrrrrrry nice...
akshara giving 34 kisses!!!
amazing one!!!
nd these lines...omg hillarious...
the ending cracked me...
LOL ROFLMAO!!!😆😆😆

Just then, the door opposite to their room opens…. Dr. Khanna is picking up the morning paper, when he sees……….Naitik…..standing with the tea tray in his hands….with Akshara's previous day's clothes draped over his left and right shoulders………Dr. Khanna's jaw drops open…..he shakes his head disgustedly….muttering under his breath……..

……Just then, they both hear Akshara's impatient voice calling out to Naitik from the bedroom-"Naitik, please, mujhe mere kapde dijiye na…..main kab se apne kapdon ke liye wait kar rahi hoon…. Naitik….."


Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

haha man!!!
d upd8's starting was verrrrrrrrry nice...
akshara giving 34 kisses!!!
amazing one!!!
nd these lines...omg hillarious...
the ending cracked me...
LOL ROFLMAO!!!😆😆😆

Just then, the door opposite to their room opens?. Dr. Khanna is picking up the morning paper, when he sees???.Naitik?..standing with the tea tray in his hands?.with Akshara's previous day's clothes draped over his left and right shoulders???Dr. Khanna's jaw drops open?..he shakes his head disgustedly?.muttering under his breath??..

??Just then, they both hear Akshara's impatient voice calling out to Naitik from the bedroom-"Naitik, please, mujhe mere kapde dijiye na?..main kab se apne kapdon ke liye wait kar rahi hoon?. Naitik?.."


I was also in splits while writing these lines!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh god ........u r jus amazingly awesome.............
i mean the line Akshara, I am so relieved, ab aapki tabiyat theek hai'lekin ab aap na'..mere saath jabardasti karne ki koshish mat kijiye'.nahin to tired ho jayengi
wow ....jus so so cute .......(naitik badmash......)
and yes not to mis dr khanna..😆
Just then, the door opposite to their room opens'. Dr. Khanna is picking up the morning paper, when he sees'''.Naitik'..standing with the tea tray in his hands'.with Akshara's previous day's clothes draped over his left and right shoulders'''Dr. Khanna's jaw drops open'..he shakes his head disgustedly'.muttering under his breath''..
''Just then, they both hear Akshara's impatient voice calling out to Naitik from the bedroom-"Naitik, please, mujhe mere kapde dijiye na'..main kab se apne kapdon ke liye wait kar rahi hoon'. Naitik'.."
man....this guys pata nahi naitik ke baare mein kya soch raha hai 😆😆😆
sach mein ur ff's are jus_____________....i m falling short of adjectives now
keep it up!!!!!!!!!
Edited by yrk_fan - 15 years ago

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