Aaja meri bahoo mei:- Naksh one shot!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guyz..This is my 1st oneshot..I hope you guyz like it… (This is the continuation of naksh trying to be friends)

Its starts off with akshara doing pooja with g3(gayatri) while naitik is lying on the bed waiting for his beloved wife to come.He peeped downstairs n watched akshi..

When akshara was done with the pooja, g3 said, "beta akshara, I am going to a relative's house with bhabhimaa as the lady is unwell, and every men is going to office, will you be able to manage the house because the gulabo is on a holiday and maharajji will be late today. Akshara nodded in aggreement.

Back to naitik...He got to know that akshi is alone in house so its a nice opportunity for privacy with his wife...He went downstairs n siad to akshi n g3 that he is haivng headche n will not go to office.g3 was a little worried with akshara saying, "mei balm lagadeiti hoo, phir aap rest karleijeigaa. g3 said to akshara that take care of him n she n bhabhimaa went.

Now, Naitik alone with Akshara said "Kaisa laga mera bahana?" , akshara was damn confused, she questioned him "aap koo headache nahee thaa?" naitik is reply said, "wow you understand me so well." Akshara was annoyed n asked him.. "kyon?" , he said, "why shall i leave my wife alone in house,hain?"

Akshara gave him an annoyed look and went to take out clothes for him . Akshara then sat with him n they discussed something where they both point of view were different, so akshara exclaimed, "naitik, dkeha a boy n a girl cannot be friends." Naiitk gave her a mischevious look n said coming near her with akshara getting back. He said, "too humnay kab kaha key humei friends bannaa hai." Akshara pushed him away with giving a haha on him. Naitik was annoyed. Akshi went to do some work. When she came back to see naitik, naitik started singing…" AAJA BAHOO MEI UTHAKEI LAICHALOO AAP HIII TOO MERI DOST HAIN..."

Now it was akshara's tturn to get annoyed. She kind of hated the word dost for her n said "dost?"

Naitik smiled n opened his arms for akshara to hug him..Akshara ran to him n siad it loud... "We r not friends, we r more then it..!

They both were lost in each other when suddenly akshara remmebered the house chores n broke away from the hug saying "mughay kaam hai naitik."

Naitik was so happy that he didn't mind making akshara go. He gave her a light kiss on her cheek and akshara blushed n ran away.

Naitik said to himslef.. "akshara agar aap seir too mei sawa seir!" n winked…

So how was it guyz?

Plz comment…

PS:- SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ...i m the first to comment..... its really sweeeeeeeeeeeeet !!!!!!!!!!!! pls cont soon i really hope that such a cute scene happens in the serial tooooo....we seem to be devoid of such cute scenes.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: yrk_fan

wow ...i m the first to comment..... its really sweeeeeeeeeeeeet !!!!!!!!!!!! pls cont soon i really hope that such a cute scene happens in the serial tooooo....we seem to be devoid of such cute scenes.......

thnakyou so much yrk_fan..but acutally i cannot continue it..its just a oneshot..bhut if this one got great comments..I'll surely think of an ff..cheers*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh its very nice intresting also
loved reading it
plzz cont. soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guyz so less comments with more than 12 views/is it that bad?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi dear......it was too gd....u shld really start a ff.....im pretty sure tht it wil cum out great cuz ure oneshot itself was awesome.....keep up d gd work!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was rlly nice....keep up the good work...:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭😭😭 I am now sooooo sick of this rhona dhona and this fights and MU that I must say it was a relief to read ur oneshot! I like it alot! Partly because it came at the right time and partly because its good there are innocent scenes in it. No non-naksh like romance!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnaks guyz for so nice comments..this makes meh to start an ff..we need to post more n more ff's as there are in kdmhmd ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...just read it...twas awesum...luvd it...really...do write more...

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