true luv:a naksh one shot:my 1st piece of writing

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naitik n akshara after their reception was very tired n both of thm needed a sound sleep..........akshi luked really tired with all those heavy jwelleries on her.......so she started removing it one by one infront of da mirror...........naitik was in the bathroom for changing.......after changing he came in the room and saw akshara removing her jwelleries.......he felt he should help her and went to her...........meanwhile akshara removed her maang tika and suddenly she saw naitik in the mirror......naitik askd if he could help her but akshara refused n blushed but natik came forward and tried her to help........1stly he removed her bangles and kissed her hand making her shiver............his touch sent stimulations to her spine..........then he went for the nose ring and removed it leaving a gentle kiss on her nose then removed her necklace giving a passionate kiss on the nape of her neck then the kiss went on to the colerbone......suddenly akshara realized wht is happening and quickly tried to run from there but naitik caught her and pulled her towards him......



akshara hit directly onto his chest then he kissed her on the cheek and said I LUV U aksharaji......m ur hubby now thn y do u keep running away from me???.....akshra smiled and blushed.....thn naitik came close to her........they were so close that naitiks nose was touching aksharas.....she could feel his warm breath........the secent of his breath was making her go crazy...........naitik started saying"I HAVE NEVER FELT LIKE THIS AKSHARA JI......IVE NEVER BEEN SO CLOSE TO A GIRL LIKE I M TODAY.............U AROSE A HIDDEN DESIRE IN ME..........I DONNO HOW TO REACT WITH THIS BUT I KNOW IF NOW I DONT LISTEN TO MY HEART THEN ILL GO CRAZY''I KNOW I SHOULDNT BEHAVE LYK THIS AS WE JUST HAVE STARTED FALLING IN LOVE BUT I CANT HELP MYSELF DOING IT''.then suddenly he cupped her face............akshara understood his gaze on her lips and got his intention but before she could think of anything else naitik caught her lips with his and started kissing........his lips were moving against aksharas making all her energy drowned out...he kisssed her againg and again............her knees were going weak..........naitik was also nervous as it was his first kiss too.............he smoothly tasted the scent of her lips and it was making him mad............for the first time in life the man inside him told him that tonight he is in need of fulfilling his bioligical needs.....they were out of this world.........the kiss was getting more intense as both of their lips went dry but naitik dint stop kissing her.....he kissed her again again and again...............suddenly akshara hit naitik and ran away to the bathroom.....naitik moved his fingers through his hair thinking about the kiss...it was awesome.............he wanted to do it again and again.............on the other hand in the bathroom aksharas face was all red as she was blushing madly...........after was it was her first kiss ...................it was out of this world........all her tiredness was gone by the touch of his lips........now she truely felt lyk akshara naitik singhania.........



how was it guyz???????i hope gud.......😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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its soo nice.👏👏👏
keep up the god work and write more.
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thier first kiss experience was great to read!!
well done
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was more than good...very nice..write more one shots...;
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........I luved it 2 d core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep writin........................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was toooo gud yar .............
loved ur writings...........
plzz do write more coon............ waitng 4 more.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice
plz do write more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my god......da 1st kiss was just awesome....
n da ff was very good....do continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx every1.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tafseer

my god......da 1st kiss was just awesome....
n da ff was very good....do continue....





thnku tasfeer for ur appreciation bt its not a ff dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i will just say 1 thing....i m speechless...luvd it 2 d core of my heart...plz do continue...

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