saath sath( ff) part 30posted pg 54

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shwetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: yusra12
wow nasco it was gr8 as usual.....write soon

wll write soon!!

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shwetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: sinak
WOW good one. Lots in Akshara 😆

thnx for reading!!

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#333

wow awesome fic just read the whole thing plzz pm me when u update

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iHeartMoi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#334

i just luved it! after reading this i dont know wat ideas do i pm u.after reading ur ffs i dont think any1 will hav a clue wat is going 2 happen in the next part so the suspense is there.(dont worry dat was a compliment). i am luking forward 2 ur next update.

Keep rocking!! Thanx 4 the ff

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

note:
sorry i culdn't post the update
i wrote one but it got deleted when i did sumthing.😭i was really sad and and so i'll post the update in the morning.
ill have to write it again.

Edited by nasco - 15 years ago

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

so naitik had a run with the servant and he was fully covered with guilt.he was soo angry at himself and embarrassed .he went upstairs and akshara too ran upstairs to help him.naitik was about to close the dr when akshara came there so naitik let her in and he closed the door.he unbutoned his kurta and went to the bathroom with a towel.akshara saw that naitik's desk was looking unruly so she went to arrange it .
she was doing it when naitik called her akshara went to the bathroom door and he opened the door.he was wearing a towel and akshara got shy.she loooked down.naitik was in a nught mood and he pulled akshara towards him .he closed the bathroom door.he asked her wh did she laugh when he was covered with guilt ?? and akshara said that he was looking soo funny
naitik said ooh i looked funny ok so then let me also have a laugh and then he kissed her face ,now her face was fully covered in guilt. now naitik started laughing and akshara saw herself in the mirror and she too laughed.naitik held her by the waist and pulled her closer.akshara looked into his eyes and was lost in it.naitik saw that they were standing under the shower and he opened the shower. akshara ahd closed ehr eyes and she was startled when water started falling on them.she loked at naitik and he was having one of his cutest smiles.akshara took the soap and then washed her face and then she went out.

akshara came out and she got dressed in a red colour saree with sequence work in it .
natik came out of the bathroom and he stood there stunned.he was soo lost in akshara's beauty.she looked beautiful .she was sittin by the mirror and he helped her wear the jewellery and he filled ehr maang.naitik wispered in her ear that she was looking beautiful.akshara asked him to get changed and naitik came out wearing a red colour polo neck t-shirt and then akshara helped him wear the white colour coat and she adjusted his collar .
naitik and akshara went downstairs and gayatri maa tok their nzar.rajshekar ahd gone to pickup the kids from school an they came runnng towards their mom and dad.gayatari gave them food an after that neev,neha and naksha went to their room.
neev was wearing a red color mickey mouse t -shirt and white pnts and neha was wearing a white coloured froc with red colour roses and laces on it
neev looked at his sister for someime and said nea u look lke a dolll .isn't it papa??
naitik also said yes.neha smiled at this😳
neha said tha neev looks like a toy and isn't it mamma??akshara said yes
naksha smiled at their children .
they waked downstairs with them.the guests had started arriving and nakshaa family came downstairs with neev and neha in the middle .
soon agfter they reached downstairs the maheshwari's came in and they allwere happy to see their akshara happy.

so let m know guys!!
ho was it??
archana u were missing neev an neha right but sorry i culdn't include much of them

please post ur comments!!

Edited by nasco - 15 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

first of all Nasco I am really sorry for not having commented forall these parts ............. am hung up with exams

secondly I must say the family bonding is sooo sweet. all a very sweet and Interesting part

thanx for the pm

Lekha

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AR_LUV_pinky_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#338

awesome...deeply in love wid neha and neev!!

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Tafseer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#339

hey very nice part...........hmmm infact very sweet n cute part....da scene between Naksh were very good.........n i like da way Naitik always puts sindoor in her maang.......hehe