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Posted: 15 years ago




The guests started pouring in and naitik and akshara were congratulated by everyone on their success.neev and neha played around and they were really excited to see the lights ,balloons etc.they played along with shava's kid dev. naitik was elated to know that he was selected among the best 5 entrepreneurs in india.his happiness knew no bounds .everyone were happy for them.

The all rocked the party and enjoyed it to the maximum.it was really late when the party got over .naksha saw the maheshwari's off and naitik saw that neev and neha had alreay fallen asleep on the sofa .they were holding hands and lay close to each other.all of them smiled seeing the bond between the children .naitik took neev and akshara took neha.they took them to neev's room and laid them on the bed and pulled the blanket .
akshara was really tired after the party.she went and sat in front of the mirror.she removed her jewellery one by one and was trying to remove a necklace but it wuldn't come out and so she had o call naitik for help.naitik came to her and he was trying to be naughty with her.but somehow he managed to get the necklace out and was rewarded with a sweet kiss from akshara.akshara ran off into the bathroom grabbing her night gown on the way..akshara din't know what had gotten into her but she had seen the mile that appeared on naitik's face and she knew he was pleased.
akshara came wearing her purple colour nightgown looking all fresh .she had left her hair open. naitik stood there looking at her and had to be pushed by akshara into the bathroom to take a shower.naitik also got freshened up and by the time he cameout akshara was already asleep on the sofa.he knew that she had tried her level best not to fall asleep before he came out .but she had dozed off in between.she looked tired and naitik lifted her up and laid her on the bed.he pulled the blanket over her and kissed her forhead softly careful not to wake her up. he remembered the day he had gone to see her at the maheshwari house.she still looked beautiful, he thought of the void that wuld be there in his life is she was not there with him.she had adjusted herself with his family and had soon become everyone's favourite.she had taken care of his needs and had made him into a responsible man.in short she was everything to him.naitik dosed off thinking all these.
next morning he was woken up by some sound.he looked at the time on the clock and saw that it was 5 in the morning and akshara usually woke up at 5 .he decided to surprise her and so he crept out of the bed and went to the kitchen to make tea for his beloved wife.he went to the kitchen and made 2 cups of tea with great dificulty.he took them upstairs and woke up akshara ,she remember that she had dosed off on the sofa while waiing for naitik a smile appeared on her face thinking of this she was really surprised to see naitik up so early and her eyes nearly popped out when she saw naitik holding out to her a cup of tea.she took it full heartedly and she was soo thakful to naitik for the tea as she felt relaxed and energetic after drinking the it.she hugged naitik and told him that she loved him very much.naitik told her the same .
akshara took a bath and went downstairs to make breakfast and tea.she was later joined by gayatri and bhabhimaa in the kitchen.
naitik had already got neev and neha read and he came down with them.akshara and naitik fed them brekfast and naiik took them to school.
naitik came back after droping them off and he sat down on the table to have breakfast.akshara was serving naitik and was standing beside her. but she felt really tired.she thought that it was probably because of the party last night.
she was serving him when she got a dizzy feeling and she held her head.gayatri maa saw this and she called akshara..... naitik looked up at akshara and saw akshara clutching her head and he immediately got up and held her.she collapsed onto him and he held her withing his arms.he lifted her up and took her upstairs.

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Edited by nasco - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute update and was awesome....loved it....so akshara is gonna be preg soon??....update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh god wowwwwwwww...i read both the parts...oh my god..oh my god....superbbb...
it was rlly very niceee....jus like wat i had expected...lovely sweatha
u write such such lovely things that i cnt get over them....
i keep thinking bout all dis only...i visualise evrything and it always comes out to be perfect!...jus perfect...woww...u r the best
u noe in my dreams i see all this...as in i dnt dream about the real things that hppn in the serial but ur ff.!!!1....see i love them soooo much....it was jus fabbb
n dats the reason ive got them all intact with me...saved on my laptop forevr...i read it wenevr i feel streseed or depressed...and then after reading it all of it goes....
they r jus lovely swetha...brilliant!...
thankyou soooooooo much for writing all this..u r the best!
u noe y these come out soo well and sweet...cos u write them..and u urself r swet..like honey...
thankyou sooomuch for being dre for me always!..thnkss...:)
u noe i joined if jus cos of u...like i read all ur updates and i wanted to inform u that plss update fast cos i was dying to read it....and cos of dat i made an account and commented on ur ff...the first thing i did..and then i added u...
i was dying to read the update...i fell in love widnaksh cos of you! 😳 😃
Edited by Drishti... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yusra12

very cute update and was awesome....loved it....so akshara is gonna be preg soon??....update soon



tht's wat I was thinking......LOL
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Drishti...

ohh god wowwwwwwww...i read both the parts...oh my god..oh my god....superbbb...

it was rlly very niceee....jus like wat i had expected...lovely sweatha
u write such such lovely things that i cnt get over them....
i keep thinking bout all dis only...i visualise evrything and it always comes out to be perfect!...jus perfect...woww...u r the best
u noe in my dreams i see all this...as in i dnt dream about the real things that hppn in the serial but ur ff.!!!1....see i love them soooo much....it was jus fabbb
n dats the reason ive got them all intact with me...saved on my laptop forevr...i read it wenevr i feel streseed or depressed...and then after reading it all of it goes....
they r jus lovely swetha...brilliant!...
thankyou soooooooo much for writing all this..u r the best!
u noe y these come out soo well and sweet...cos u write them..and u urself r swet..like honey...
thankyou sooomuch for being dre for me always!..thnkss...:)
u noe i joined if jus cos of u...like i read all ur updates and i wanted to inform u that plss update fast cos i was dying to read it....and cos of dat i made an account and commented on ur ff...the first thing i did..and then i added u...
i was dying to read the update...i fell in love widnaksh cos of you! 😳 😃

I totally agree wid u drishti........ shweatha di u r just a perfect writer n i just luv ur ffs............... do continue soon......... n by the way wat happened 2 akshara?i dont think it was bcuz of the last nights party........... neways i just luved this part also n i am really luking 4ward 2 the next part........... i wonder y god dint giv me such a creative mind as urs...........
keeeeeeeeep rocking n ur ff roxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Drishti...

ohh god wowwwwwwww...i read both the parts...oh my god..oh my god....superbbb...

it was rlly very niceee....jus like wat i had expected...lovely sweatha
u write such such lovely things that i cnt get over them....
well im really happy o have someone like u t read m ff's regularly and suppliment me with ur inspiring comments.
u must surely get over it drishti .
😉
i keep thinking bout all dis only...i visualise evrything and it always comes out to be perfect!...jus perfect...woww...u r the best
i also do the same but only at home!! i told u right??y schedules at school r realy tight that i can't ven spae a minute for something else.😳

u noe in my dreams i see all this...as in i dnt dream about the real things that happen in the serial but ur ff.!!!1....see i love them soooo much....it was jus fabbb
well i also get drems about naksha but not like in my ff as in the serial.
i transform my dreams into oneshots and post them.
lie abdul kalam said "dream dream dream !conduct thse dreams into thought,and then transform them into action' well i transform thse dreams into oneshots😆
i transform my dreams into oneshots
😆😆

n dats the reason ive got them all intact with me...saved on my laptop forevr...i read it wenevr i feel streseed or depressed...and then after reading it all of it goes....
well u told me abt it.im so happy i don't have it saved in my comp or pc.
i can approach u for them if i need them!!
😳
they r jus lovely swetha...brilliant!...
thankyou soooooooo much for writing all this..u r the best!
im thankful to u drisht. i got inspired by the coment u posted for my first ever oneshot wich i had posted witha lot of apprehensions.
well i knew it had many shortcomings but i have always tried to improve.did i?
?😉
u noe y these come out soo well and sweet...cos u write them..and u urself r swet..like honey...
thankyou sooomuch for being dre for me always!..thnkss...:)
no need to thank me !u were always there for me too.u used to pm me everyday enquiring about my health when i was ill.u prayed for me when had my xams.😊
u noe i joined if jus cos of u...like i read all ur updates and i wanted to inform u that plss update fast cos i was dying to read it....and cos of dat i made an account and commented on ur ff...the first thing i did..and then i added u...
well i din't know that!! u joined IF bcoz of me???im soo proud yaar!!
i was dying to read the update...i fell in love widnaksh cos of you! 😳 😃



im thankful to god because for making me write thse f's and oneshot's !!i got to know u because of that. and ithing a fewmonths we got close to each other sharing everything .
im really fortunate to have a frnd like u!!
Friends are the siblings God forgot to make!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

edited
awsome work yaaar nasco.....too good.....i bet she s pregenent.....
Edited by riya_luv_sv - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome update dear.
just read al the parts.
im already a fan of u!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
keep rocking !
will read it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im srsly runnin out of words.......onli God noes how cum ure writin so beautifully.....weneva I read ure ff or oneshot...I always get up wid a very big smile on my face........ure writin cn alwayz bring a smile on my face..............................

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