FF: Kuch Pal...Part 2 Pg8

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic
sounds good.
do start soon.

: )

thnx hun

yhh wll start asap!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Part 1

The sun rose high above... Lata entered and opened the curtains of akshara's room.

"Good Morningg Akshi!!... beta get up!.."

Akshara got up after a little while.

Smilingg, she opened her eyes.

She felt good... good and fresh...

It was jst another day - but still felt special.

'what is so special about this day??' She askd herself smilingg...

and slowly, went towards the toilet.

"Varsha, beta, u 2 join us for breakfast naa" Lata askd varsha who came inr their home running .... now tryingg 2 catch her breath.

"ohh no chachi, thnx anywayz...let akshu do it.......vr gttingg L8 anywayz!..".

She stressd on the last few words....trying to make akshara realize that they were gettingg l8 for college

"i kno i kno varsha... m jst cmingg.. wait!"

taking the last bite of her bread slice and sippingg in the last sip of tea....she ran out...kissingg her mom, takingg ashirvad frm her dad nd sayingg a slight bye 2 shaurya, who was busy staringg at varsha.

Akshara smiled at the duo

She took Varsha's hand nd went out of the house walking briskly.

Shaurya came out.

"heyy, i can leave u 2 to college...i mean..."

Varsha was smilingg nd lukingg at him

Akshara gave a laugh and den she said:

"nhi nhi bhayya...no need,,,,its jst another few steps away, as usual....v'll walk nd go"

Shuarya scratchd the back of his head a little and said:

"As u wish!"

He went in...

"Mr. Shaurya.....dont u have 2 go to the office??"

Vishambhar called out.

"ohh yes...i am.." he said scratchingg his head again.

"Hii"

" How was the day 2day akshi??"

yes maa....as usual...gud!

"wheres varsha??"

" she went home naa....... she said she'll come in the eveningg for the pooja"

" but ive askd ur chachi 2 come a little earlier than the other guests..."

"oh really?? acha maa den dey'll b cmingg"

Akshara went 2 her room.

she thought about the day.... a moment was comingg back to her again and again.

When she was walking wid varsha while coming back to her home.

she banged in2 sum1....

her files..copies etc. fall down and he helped her pick those up.

They smiled at each other and left.

It was jst a simple thing...I met sum1...a stranger...nd he's gone now,,...

then y duz he keep cmingg in frnt....y duz he keep formingg his picture in my mind?? she thought.

The guy was naitik...son of Salil.

He was feelingg da same.

Akshara's image keep formingg in2 his head and mind.

he kept smilingg 2 himself,....

and with a smile, he lay on the bed and slept....

slept... dreamingg of a dream.....which made him smile wider...

of a girl...he jst saw...dat morningg.....

here guys thats all fr now,....

will try 2 updt nxt part asap...

bt before dat....i really need ur cmnts!!

Do Read and Comment!!!!😃

dis wasnt ver interestingg bt will try 2 make it much more interestingg as the story progresses!😳

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Sanaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Fiirst of all thanks yaar
I really wanted a ff
Concept is really very nice
It will be really nice to read ff on Shava nd Naksh

D part was awesome 👏👏
Shava are engaged already it is so gud
Shaurya staring at Varsha Veryyyyyyyyyy cute
So Naksh have met nd thinking of each other
vow yaar abhi se ek doosre kke baare me sochne lage
I hope Rajshri is not as she is in d show always in tension giving hidayats to akshi

Post d second part asap

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serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sanayaa
Fiirst of all thanks yaar ur welcm honeyy!!😃
I really wanted a ff aaww...
Concept is really very nice thnx yaar!
It will be really nice to read ff on Shava nd Naksh really?? thnx soo much!😛

D part was awesome 👏👏 ohhh....😳😳
Shava are engaged already it is so gud hehe yhh deyre already engaged!
Shaurya staring at Varsha Veryyyyyyyyyy cute aaww....m glad u lykd it!😳
So Naksh have met nd thinking of each other hmm...yup!😃
vow yaar abhi se ek doosre kke baare me sochne lage hehehehe😳😆
I hope Rajshri is not as she is in d show always in tension giving hidayats to akshi yup...hopefully shes nt!....shes lata hre....so....myt b a lil diff!

Post d second part asap
oh sure jaan!

Thnx fr readingg nd likingg sanayaa!
its a pleasure 2 read such cmnts!!
keep readingg!!! nd cmnting as well!😊

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raina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Great yaar it sounds interesting.
Please add some more characters.
Make it different from the actual story...........
Looking forward to read more about their meeting.

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sanyogita_a

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

hey...cant wait till u update!!👍🏼

good luck!!

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serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -RAiNA-
Great yaar it sounds interesting. really?? thnx!
Please add some more characters.
Make it different from the actual story...........
Looking forward to read more about their meeting.

heyy raina!!

dear, thnx a lott fr readingg nd cmntingg nd a special thnx fr da suggestion...

actually yes....ive already pland 2 bring up sum more charactrz in da FF, as the story progresses...so yh....u'll c sumthingg different frm wat da show actuallly is!

thnx fr dis hun

keep readingg nd cmntingg!