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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Harshi__

Thank you so much Lava!!!😳
Well there is a reason why I named it 'Chasing Cars' which I will reveal later, they will definitely not actually chase cars😆

You know I'm gonna try my best and make it as relatable as possible, but I kinda realized after reading the chapter again, it isn't creating that emotion you know I have to do some major learning and in fact I need to learn from you and Aayushi on how to get that😃

Well you can trust me on one thing the conversations are gonna get better😉

Anu's mom i.e Neeta will be completely different from the show 😃

Will update soon 😊


Oops, I'm so sorry Harshi. I didn't come across your reply earlier. Sorry sister, I just saw it now.

Yup, I know that they won't chase cars 😆 The title is very creative though :)

Na na, you're already very good at writing! 😳 Infact, I'm writing my first ever SS so its me who has to learn a lot 😆

I think the conversations in this chapter were good as well. But I know that it'll be even better in your next update :D

Oh, so Neeta is different here. I'm eager to see her character unfold.

Update soon Harshi :) I'm waiting :P

With Love
-Lava
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: KumbhkarnKiNani



Oops, I'm so sorry Harshi. I didn't come across your reply earlier. Sorry sister, I just saw it now.

Yup, I know that they won't chase cars😆The title is very creative though :)

Na na, you're already very good at writing! 😳Infact, I'm writing my first ever SS so its me who has to learn a lot😆

I think the conversations in this chapter were good as well. But I know that it'll be even better in your next update :D

Oh, so Neeta is different here. I'm eager to see her character unfold.

Update soon Harshi :) I'm waiting :P

With Love
-Lava



It's alright Lava!
Well about the update
I'll be updating today 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for the response you gave me for my previous chapter. So here goes chapter 2, and forgive me for my mistakes cause I am to lazy to read through again😛
Well this chapter is kinda small and you might find it going a little slow, I promise to give you a better one next time😊



Chapter 2: Just Friends


"Who's the boy?" My mom grinned.
Slowly the grin turned it into a big smile, "Come on, is he my future son in law?"she said teasing me.


"Amma, you've gotta be kidding me, I'm only fifteen and I just met him" I said rolling my eyes.


"Come on Anu! You know all about my history" she said, I placed a kiss on her cheek and said "Amma, you're my best friend and I will pakka tell you if there was something".


Well I know my mom tries her best to be the best mom, but I knew that some where inside she just has the confidence that I wouldn't have to tell her anything.


I took the remote and switched the TV on.


"What were you guys talking about?" My younger brother Karthik asked sitting next to me. "None of your business" I said watching TV, he snatched the remote from me, "This is my business" he said holding the remote and giggling . "Hey!" I said. And as usual we fought like Tom and Jerry and my mom came and stopped us and we both got into trouble.


Before I knew it the night passed by, and trust me the one thing I never struggled with was choosing what to wear, I would just put on whatever I would find, but today I tried so many tees and not one I was satisfied with. I hit my head and told myself "Duffer! You aren't dressing up for anyone okay?" I put on something, but I still made sure I looked better than okay.


I got my lunch and my bag and took a
lift down, and I told myself 'No expectations' I walked towards the main gate, he stood there, he looked so hot in that white shirt and it kinda seemed like he was smiling and looking right towards me, I took a second to look behind because I wasn't sure he was looking at me. No one was there. I smiled and walked towards him.


"So...how was your day?" He asked.


"Well if you remember I spent my day at school" I said giggling.


"I didn't mean that...I meant after you went home" he said trying to correct himself.


I smiled and said "Well the day just ran, yours?"


Before he said anything, the bus came.


"Great! We better go in then" he said, "After you" he smiled at me. "What a gentleman" I said giggling.


I went in, the three seater behind the driver had two seats free, I went and sat there. He came and sat next to me. Guess what? The three seater didn't seem much like one, it was like
a two and a half seater. We just squeezed in.


"So are you dating someone?" He asked me out of blue.

"Nah" I replied. He nodded.

"You?" I asked him. "Yeah I am" he said, and my heartbeat just dropped. What? Are you serious? That's why you have to keep your gossip intact stupid girl I thought to myself.


"Her name is Shreya, know her?" He asked me, and it just broke my thoughts, "Nope" I said, "How long have you been together?" I asked to make sure that I didn't look visibly disappointed.


"Oh it's been like 3 years" he said smiling, it clearly looked like he really liked his girlfriend. "Wait! You guys started dating when you were thirteen" I asked, cause thirteen is a little young, not to be less progressive but I can't help thinking.


"Yeah, I know it sounds silly, but we would just hold hands and talk, now..." I shut him before he said anything, "I don't wanna know" I said giggling and turning away. He laughed too.


This guy was head over heels in love with her, the way he spoke about her. And what was I thinking, he still kept the bill of the first place they went for a date in his wallet. He was so sweet and so taken, Uhh! And god you had to make me meet him. I guess we will turnout to be great 'just' friends.

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Do leave your comments😃
Edited by __Harshi__ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
res
will read all parts n get back soon😳

unresd 😆

me first 🥳

ch 1 ..i love how they met. its a cute girl next door kinda character for anu her 😳
she is like any other girl would be seeing a handsome boy at 15😆
n sid is all gentle 😆

ch 2 ... this anu is inspired by u naa? tell me tell me? 😈
i have a feeling this shreya is a car or a pet. 😆 girl hai kya? 😉😉
u r so evil..anu ka dil tod diya 😆😉

update soon..shreya ka aata pata dekhna padega 😆

love u 🤗
Edited by war_is_peace - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res!
I can just imagine you 😆😛

Really liked it! 😉

Her mom is so cool, and that one dialogue you said about mom being certain she won't do anything like that, sooo trueee 😆

Aww she was getting ready for him 😳 Cutee! :)

Then she met him, he waited for her, asked about her life and finally he asked her out of nowhere if she is in a relationship 😲

One thing I didn't understand, no guy asks it himself and moreover never if he's in a relationship. Weird! Siddhant is in love with shreya 😆

Okayyy! Let's see how it goes ahead with the 3-year relationship hanging on their heads. :P

P.S. I can't seem to think of Siddhant-Anushka reading this and you know why 🤣
Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

res

will read all parts n get back soon😳

me first🥳



No prob take your time 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: A.Green

Res!

I can just imagine you😆😛


Okay...
I'm just gonna go and cry for a while 😆 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

res

will read all parts n get back soon😳

unresd😆

me first🥳

ch 1 ..i love how they met. its a cute girl next door kinda character for anu her😳
she is like any other girl would be seeing a handsome boy at 15😆
n sid is all gentle😆

ch 2 ... this anu is inspired by u naa? tell me tell me?😈
i have a feeling this shreya is a car or a pet.😆girl hai kya?😉😉
u r so evil..anu ka dil tod diya😆😉

update soon..shreya ka aata pata dekhna padega😆

love u🤗



Great you did read Aayushi's comment didn't you?
Yes this Anu is inspired me and this is kinda my story 😆
Yeah it is true that at 15 any guy who talks to you seems appealing I wanted to make it relatable
And actually Shreya is really a girl Ik that sucks atm 😆
It did suck that time too lol

Thank you so much for reading it 😳
Will update as soon as I can 😃
Edited by __Harshi__ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: A.Green

Res!

I can just imagine you😆😛

Really liked it!😉

Her mom is so cool, and that one dialogue you said about mom being certain she won't do anything like that, sooo trueee😆

Aww she was getting ready for him😳Cutee! :)

Then she met him, he waited for her, asked about her life and finally he asked her out of nowhere if she is in a relationship😲

One thing I didn't understand, no guy asks it himself and moreover never if he's in a relationship. Weird! Siddhant is in love with shreya😆

Okayyy! Let's see how it goes ahead with the 3-year relationship hanging on their heads. :P

P.S. I can't seem to think of Siddhant-Anushka reading this and you know why🤣


I am glad you liked it 😃
Well this guy did ask 😆
Trust me Sid might really confuse you his character is gonna have a lot of shades and I'm not even sure I can write them because you won't be able to picture the show's Sid anymore. And ppl who don't know that it's my story are gonna think I'm messed up 😆 I guess I'll have to tweak the original character.

Shreya will be a really small part of the story you won't be seeing much of her

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Harshi__


I am glad you liked it 😃
Well this guy did ask 😆
Trust me Sid might really confuse you his character is gonna have a lot of shades and I'm not even sure I can write them because you won't be able to picture the show's Sid anymore. And ppl who don't know that it's my story are gonna think I'm messed up 😆 I guess I'll have to tweak the original character.

Shreya will be a really small part of the story you won't be seeing much of her

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it 😳


I have a really personal question for you! Should I PM or post it here? 😊

Haha I would prefer you to keep him as it is! 😳

Waiting further eagerly 😃

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